Ek aur Tajmahal...!(kabhi FF) chapter 2

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Tia

@Tiaraa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Aishwa09
When did u updated it ?

just a minute bafor you interrogated me 😆

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

res
unres

wuhu
bt why late pm
16th ko start ki na?
to phir>?
kher update se ky a dushmani
haye rocking update
ye rajbeer or uday to!
wow the names r superb
i just laved neha's name!
wow!
this time it isnt the cast bt the buisness
fr a second or two i remembered ramleela!
though i havent seen it properly bt the concept is wat i knw!
okay the update was rocking
ow i loved the akansha n her sil's convo
so sweet
wow aria ki entry!
solid h boss!
so good!
i always wanted to read such type of her entry
i really loved the part where she openly displays to every1
bt wat was d song, i never heard it!
well koi nahi update was full on rocking
hehe i loved the last part
vishal n aria's one!
amazing rocking
so funy aswell bt he said that tum humare ghar ki DIL bhi n all
means aria n adi already together
woah!
lets c
its quite intruding!
n obvio a family saga!
am actually looking frwrd to it
it was totally awesome
superb
wonderful
lovelly
rocking
loved it totally
n plz abse do pm me!
plz plz plz contr soon!
waiting!
loved it!
update soon
love u 2 3 4 5 6 7 7 8 9 n so on fr it
waiting fr the hero's entry!
looking frwrd to the family saga
loving it already
wana read more
update soon

love as always,
doll

Edited by riddhi1206 - 11 years ago

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Tia

@Tiaraa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

My fingers are crossed koi jaldi sach bolo

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Anitha

@-Anitha-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Great start.
I really confused with this new names.
Plz let them in their real name i think it would be easy to understand.

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DancingBell

@DancingBell

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Tia I loved the prologue...But the names r confusing me,I think it will be ok by next update...And I would appreciate if u provide th pic of the peopl playin the role...And I need pm...No doub for that...Nn u did'nt reply to my pm...

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

unresed my comment on pg 9!

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Mylifeisblooper

@Mylifeisblooper

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

uff dusre charecters ke names confusing hai😕😕😕😕😕

ab unne in names main kaise yaad rake...????😕😕😕

kabhi ka names yaad raksakte hai but other charecters😕😕 it can be fully confusing😕😕😕

muje kuch samaj na aaye😕😕

tu ek kaam kar dusre charecters ko

jaise ketki ko ketki rak...

mohit ko mohit rak...tere next chaptr main dusre charecters ko bhool jaaoungi😕😕

Edited by jilmil.1 - 11 years ago

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Mylifeisblooper

@Mylifeisblooper

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

uff dusre charecters ke names confusing hai😕😕😕😕😕

ab unne in names main kaise yaad rake...????😕😕😕

kabhi ka names yaad raksakte hai but other charecters😕😕 it can be fully confusing😕😕😕

muje kuch samaj na aaye😕😕

tu ek kaam kar dusre charecters ko

jaise ketki ko ketki rak...

mohit ko mohit rak...tere next chaptr main dusre charecters ko bhool jaaoungi😕😕

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Tia

@Tiaraa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: aarzoo50
res
unres
wonderful start tia...
wt a fab entry of aria...
garv b hai n ghamand b... nice one ...
aadi ki entry nahi ki only naam liya in todays update...
continue soon dear...

p.s... naam bohat mushkil hai... i vl try to manage...

nayi cheez hai...time lagega...but hoga. 😳
If nahi hoga yo ye story nai likhungi 😭

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Tia

@Tiaraa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: jilmil.1

uff dusre charecters ke names confusing hai😕

ab unne in names main kaise yaad rake...????😕😕😕

kabhika names yaad raksakte hai but other charecters😕😕it can be fully confusing😕😕😕

muje kuch samaj na aaye😕😕

tu ek kaam kar dusre charecters ko

jaise ketki ko ketki rak...

mohit ko mohit rak...tere next chaptr main dusre charecters ko bhool jaaoungi😕😕

sorry jhil mil...i will try for other characters but ye jo likh diya wo likh diya...yad nahi hoga to story nahi likhungi...chor dungi