#1 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 1-4 ! Link to all threads ! - Page 54

Originally posted by: SahasYuvreenian

Superb FF

Loved the concept and every bit of it...

Very well written dear

Do continue soon and thanks for the pms u sent and sorry also because I never took a look at them :(

Thank you so much Suvreen !! I'm glad you liked it !! 🤗 😳
Dont worry, better late than never 😉

Originally posted by: nilusoni

awesome part

thanx for pm

Thanks buddy !! 😳

Originally posted by: divram

Res😃

Unres..

Zoya seems to have made a deep impact on Asad..😆That guy is lost in her thoughts even on his way home...😆

He had even cursed himself in thinking about her but then when he couldn't stop thinking about her, he just told himself that he needs to think about her, to help her, to make her recover, yes ! That was the reason... he is seriously a crazy guy.. Denial as usual..😉😆

Loved his interaction with his mother and the playfulness with his sister..😆

"But i'm only 21 !" Najma almost cried, that's when Dilshad and Asad burst out laughing, they came forward to hug her and told her that they were just pulling her leg. awww Najma is really cute...😃

Ammi realised that her ladla beta is harboring some feelings towards a 'special' patient... she seems to know him too well to pursue too much on that topic...👏

She gave an answer in a really honest and awesome manner...👏

Gosh!! seriously is that the way some patient is being fed...😡Idiot Tanveer.. had to be your stupid idea..

YAaay our knight in shining armour is there to save her...😆

Zoya pulled him down on the bed, making him sit and she clunged to his back, Asad shot them a glare dismissing them. Zoya was sobbing, crying and complaining against his back.

awww poor thing must have been so scared...

Saviour huh!!! nice..😆Asad must in seventh heaven...

heheheee... Asad shared his breakfast with her cause he wanted to be friends with her or to make feel at ease...😉😆

Lovely update... When will you tell us of Zoya's past... waiting to know what her made her the way she is now...😊

Ab Mr. Emotionally-challendged deny nahi karega toh kya karega ?! 😆 bechara, MENTAL LOVE ka maara ! 😉 😆
Dilshad as usual is the one who undetstands her son's feelings the best ! 😳 but she also knows that he would back off if he realises that he developped feelings towards his patient ! 😕
As usual "Mr. Zoooyyaa !" *the way he screamed at the airport * is here at the rescue !! 😳 😆 indeed ! Asad is in 7th heaven ! 😎 😆

Thank you so much Divya !! 🤗 😳 i love ur sweet and long comments very much !! ❤️
Zoya's past will be revealed soon thrn the story woll take a turn ! 😉
Update will be late busy with real life 😭

this is amazing one

Originally posted by: Amin21

Lovely concept & wonderfully written👏

Eagerly waiting for the next plz do pm me .

Love it

Thank you so much buddy !! Glad u liked it !! 🤗 😳
Will PM u 😉

Originally posted by: teju_KaBhi

thank god that tanveer witch is not important otherwise i would have thought 101 ways to kill her in my mind.😡
when will u update ?😳

🤣 Zoya would have helped u ! 🤣
Unfortunately i'm hell busy nowadays because its the end of the year, so wouldnt be able to update before 6th june !
I will put up a note soon !

Originally posted by: -Aditi.

So Asad treats mentally challenged patients and Zoya is his patient...ahan nice concept

I liked the way he care for zoya, and Zoya called him her saviour...aww

Zoya is too cute in the FF

Dilshad is a very supportive mom as always

And the strong between asya is getting strong day by day

Well i cannot bet but i have a strong feeling that zoya will get treated by asad properly

And then theek hone ke bad she will forget that bonding between her and Asad

May be i am wrong but i have the feeling strong one

Update soon Bano pls

Hi Aditi ! 🤗
Thanks ! Was little scared for the concept 😕
Saviour... Sabka Saviour...
Hahaha wrong guess darling ! 😆 i have something in my mind and once Zoya's past comes up, the story will take a new turn 😉
Update will be after 6th june, being hell busy nowadays after 6th i'm on my holidays untill september ! 🥳

Originally posted by: -Anitha-

This part was awesome.
Loved reading it...
Zoya occupied asad mind
Dilshad n her advice was cute.
Asad is her saviour😳
This was funny🤣🤣 "Hey Pat, look at this weirdo, he sleeps with his eyes open !" Zoya giggled 🤣🤣
well written part... 👍🏼

Thank you so much Anitha !! 🤗 glad u liked it !! 😳
Even i loved writing the Saviour 😳 and Weirdo part ! 😆

Originally posted by: -Anitha-

Awww so sweet !! 😳