3#Tumhe Pyaar Kab Tak Na Karenge Bhala:AsYa FF[Ch11-14 LINK#4 Pg1]

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-Astrid-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Ummm...hmm...where should I start??🤔...ok...first of all a Big ,I mean really big,sorry to you since I couldn't catch up with this story after the first 3 chapters,thanks to my freakin' hectic internship🥱...I just kept on following a very few FFs which I had been reading for quite a while now that too very irregularly owing to one painfully slow internet😔...

Finally after 1.5 months I got some much awaited leisure and decided to check out the pending pms and that's when I discovered that this story had already reached it's third thread😲...👍🏼🥳...CONGRATULATIONS😃...so I guess I'll be forgiven quite easily since u already have so many likes,comments,stalkers and spammers😆...

Now that I'm done with my blabbering...🤔almost 😆...I think I should give you a proper review of the story😃...well,I read all the remaining 7 chapters in a go because it was impossible for me to stop with all the brewing romance,drumming heartbeats,eyes speaking volumes,signature smirks and blushes going on all around...loved every bit of this🤗

Zoya had such a heart-wrenching past...watching her beloved perish in front of her eyes must have been so very painful😭...her initial behaviour with Asad and his family was totally justified given the emotional turmoil she was going through at the moment...and I hate her parents for being so harsh on her😡...

And I LOVE ASAD🤗...do I even need to say that??...he gave her all the time and space she needed without any complaints and continued to shower unconditional love upon her...he's also a broken soul😭...now that they are together,they can mend each other😳

I loved the last line...finally she realised that she'd fallen in love

Beautifully woven plot😳...you're an amazing writer I must say...the past and present sequences were not at all confusing...nothing was rushed...I loved the pace of this story😳

Are you melting?😳or I should continue?😆...if not for anything else,you need to forgive me for the bong connection we share🤗...

All the best for your exams👍🏼 and update as soon as you are done with them😃

P.S.-I hope this hasn't given you a tumour😆

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SH7_Sunny

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Arrey Kolkata waali Anku jaani kabhi yeh toh bata diya karo ke zinda bhi hai ke nahi 😡 😆

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

tumhare exams kab khatam honge😡

updt soon

we r waiting😃

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KReyAS

@KReyAS

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

congo for new thrd

whn will u updt

waiting

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Hi ankie

When ll we get an updt !!!!

How z ur exams going

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vinita459

@vinita459

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Finally I managed to read all chapters in one go 😆
Awesome story and brilliant style of writing Ankie.

Here's a short review of all ten chapters:

zoya loved shoaib but after his death ended in marriage with asad.

Feel very bad for both Zoya and Asad. Both doesnt deserve this!

Zoya is being rude. Poor Asad :( he has so much patience.

At least now AsYa are talking to each other. Zoya wanted to marry the person she loved but ended up marrying Asad whom she doesn't love. (Right now very much reminding me of the movie Rab ne bana di Jodi).

Oh no my poor baby got hurt. Zoya is being annoying :( Asad finally lost his cool:(

Awww he felt bad for getting angry and now hurted himself. Zoya is getting concerned anout him. Good start of their new relationship :)

Wow chapter six was awesome :). Their feeling are growing. The end was fabulous ... it was magical. Asad in black suit and ZoYa in a red Saree and rain sequence on such a lovely song. Too good :) hayeee

Okay so sadhna has arrived she what is her plan??? Asya watching each other in sleep... Very cute scene :)

Ha ha ha so mr. Ayaan has arrived 😆
Zoya is extremely funny here.
Is was so much fun to see bromance...remained of good old QH days:(
Poor Asad stuck between these two :)

My poor baby
His past is so painful :(
He deserves all the happiness in the world
Ayaan is worried about his Bhaijaan.
He made zoya also realize, good job ayaan miyaan :)

This was the best chapter so far.
Asad being so romantic
He was mesmerized by her besuty.
The mehndi scene again reminded me of old QH :(
He fed her and kissed her hand :)
Epic fall and almost miss the kiss scene were fabulous.

Wow! I am totally in love with this story. When are you updating the next part. Eagerly waiting for it. 😊