3#Tumhe Pyaar Kab Tak Na Karenge Bhala:AsYa FF[Ch11-14 LINK#4 Pg1]

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TaiLung

@TaiLung

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#281

awesome chapter

i really liked it

but in the end what happens?😕

update soon cant wait more

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cool_sri

@cool_sri

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#282

awesome update...

thanks for the PM

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...MonaCo...

@...MonaCo...

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#283

Love the way you say that Asad loses all his tiredness when he sees Zoya asleep on the couch. Reminded me of the *I want to see you sleep* wish ... and makes me miss Karan... :(. What a way to end, "ASAAAD!!! She screamed before darkness swallowed her up.

cliff hanger indeed! :) Great update! Keep em' coming

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Aishwarya

@--Aishwarya--

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#284

Unres in Page 31 😊

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Appu

@A.Kh_20

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#285

What happened at the end?? <3<3<3<3

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#286

Nice update

Oh no did the truck hit her

She can't lose her asad

He was so happy but Nadeem burst his bubble

Then he tried bring her out of a fowl mood

Oh Sadz told her she didn't ask her advice her last decision

Zoya said that was a mistake a wrong choice

Sadz tell her to tell him

Loved how his tiredness disappear seeing her

She made him breakfast

Continue

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123465

@123465

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#287

Luved it a lot!!! Plz continue soon...

- Sushma

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Anu

@sweety003

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#288

I Loved it!! I Loved it!! I Loved it!!

This is Amazing buddy!!!

Asad such a cute baby here i wanna pull his cheeks 😆

sometimes i hate zoya in your FF for getting so much love from asad and still she delayed to convey her love for him. from the beginning he is treating her like a baby ,making all the effort to comfort her and try to bring smile on her face , i feels like zoya taken him as granted

just absolutely loved the way how you portrayed every character and emotions 😳

why that cliffy at the end ,now i can't wait...please update soon

you got your 95 likes already 👍🏼

p.s- why I'm feeling something unusual happened at last surprisingly like zoya is safe 🤔 i can't see asad in pain ,hurting zoya is like hurting asad thousand times