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Posted: 11 years ago
Linsie thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
teaser very cute...

waiting for last update
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Posted: 11 years ago
I just finished reading this...!
How come i had ended up missing such an awesomely fab piece of work...??!!

You have written it all too fabulously...!!

The way you describe their emotions their thoughts...!!!!


Just tooo too too too good...!!!

Brilliant job Chahat...!!!!

Ab hame epilogue kab milega...??

Eagerly waiting...!!!

Please do update soon...!!!

Your teaser indicates towards Zoya's another pregnancy...!!!

True...?

Just cant wait so end your torture of nt updating here itself and phatak se give us a mindblowing update as usual...!!!

Love,
Aashka
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

Chapter 12..

Asad's lost words... smoething that zoya cant understand..

he is begging for the child...

For zoya ... only remind her mistake... and now for better future
and for asad she .. dont want the baby...
something she cant accept

The baby is not in fault...

Asad remembering his past where he come from... he
is not his father... and he can do better
for the baby...

Marriage with zoya... his way to thank her grandfather... for the life
he gave him... loyalty

Love the way ... asad explain how he meet saira...

How he learn to be the best man... his work
life roots... and then married saira..

so cute ... when zoya explain why ...he needs to stay with his wife outside..😆

Okay asad can make saira pregnant... but she is pregnant
with someone else baby... he felt betrayed
he made mistake... with saira and confess... that
but the baby is his ... what a mistake... so asad is the reason
saira commit suicide

All his life he carve for love... but he never got it...
zoya is the token of life... his the reason and baby his destiny ...

The last part she said god will listen to us...
so ... did she abort the baby...
she wants to give the chance to asad own...


Sorry i really need to read this... again to comment...
and the delay


Thank you so much for the long comment

Yes Asad's painful past was not only his but his past included Saira's painful past too

I don't think Asad was the reason behind her suicide; it was the pain, the suffering, the betrayal by his father to him and his ammi which he had gone through as a child which made him doubt her the insecurities of Asad led her to her death; Asad realized he was at fault about him doubting Saira Jab jaago tab savera; So the next time when Zoya gives him the good news he will not make the same mistake

Zoya's grandfather nahi Zoya's father was Asad's sort of foster father; his abujaani

Zoya thought he married her because of the ehsaan that Gafur did on Asad and Asad's louyalty towards Gafur but actually he married her so he could be a father to a child{He had a selfish motive}

Yes Asad may have given up hope but not Zoya; She wants to have Asad's baby

She has taken the Chance one in a million

Epilogue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Chahanya

Thank you so much for the long comment

Yes Asad's painful past was not only his but his past included Saira's painful past too

I don't think Asad was the reason behind her suicide; it was the pain, the suffering, the betrayal by his father to him and his ammi which he had gone through as a child which made him doubt her the insecurities of Asad led her to her death; Asad realized he was at fault about him doubting Saira Jab jaago tab savera; So the next time when Zoya gives him the good news he will not make the same mistake

Zoya's grandfather nahi Zoya's father was Asad's sort of foster father; his abujaani

Zoya thought he married her because of the ehsaan that Gafur did on Asad and Asad's louyalty towards Gafur but actually he married her so he could be a father to a child{He had a selfish motive}

Yes Asad may have given up hope but not Zoya; She wants to have Asad's baby 👏 👏

She has taken the Chance one in a million 👏

Epilogue soon



😆 😆 sorry i dont understand hindi or can write...
but just base on reading there and here...
i know...

the situation they both in drove .. them away emotionally

yes zoya father.. 😆

yes he wants to be a father... the main reason for the marriage... okay
this i got it wrong thanks...😳 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie



😆 😆 sorry i dont understand hindi or can write...
but just base on reading there and here...
i know...

the situation they both in drove .. them away emotionally

yes zoya father.. 😆

yes he wants to be a father... the main reason for the marriage... okay
this i got it wrong thanks...😳 😳

Oh

OK Next FF I will write in all English

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

teaser very cute...

waiting for last update

Thank you

Working on Epilogue 1

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Amulya9

ur teasers r always teasing...

update asap

Thank you

Epilogue 1 on Thursday

Then if ppl like it and want a second epilogue I will give

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gowtu

Sch a naughty tzr
Waiting for updt

😳😳😳

Epilogue will be in 2 parts



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