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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: NAVI55

Fantastic...

A nice OS👍🏼


You made me remember the old QH...


Thank you...


I loved Zoya's profile on FB😆


An unusual idea for an os, which turned out to be really good...



Thank you so much I am glad that you liked it
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Originally posted by: maha70

Nice OS..😃

Loved it...Please pm me

Waiting for next update..



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Part 2

In KV

Zoya was in her room. She was extremely upset. Last night tanveer was attacked & mr.khan was taking care of her. She know tanveer is asad's best friend! Childhood friend. He was only supporting his bestie who is going through a tough time. But ever since tanveer entered KV zoya was disturbed. It's only because she was a perfect female figure whom asad wants in his life.
Zoya knows asad likes her. Frankly more than that. Even tough he never confessed his feelings for her his eyes spoke. The way he came & engaged her in airport she was sure he too have the same feelings for her which she have for him. But then why is he denying it? Is it because she is totally different from what he had imagined for his life partner? May be. He remembered asad's word when they were in farmhouse. How much ever nice she is, how much ever he likes her, she can never be a perfect wife or a perfect dil. For him & his house she is a misfit.
Zoya had tears. She knows the moment phupi is better he will call off the wedding. If he never want to accept her the way she is then why did he engage her in airport? She would have gone back. After giving so much hope why he is breaking it? He is not allowing her to be far from him & at the same time he is not bringing her close to him. She felt so suffocated. What he wants? Why is he so complicated? He is emotional challenged. He himself don't know what he wants.
Zoya: Allah Miya! What's wrong with you? Why did you make me fall for him?

Zoya was upset for the whole day. In the evening when asad came back he saw Zoya in her room. Her eyes said that she had cried a lot. He was hurt by seeing her sad eyes. Was she still in pain because he was close with tanveer? He was only being a friend for her not more than that. He should talk with her.
He went inside her room.
Asad: are you ok ms.farooqui?
Zoya: I am fine.
Asad: you don't look so.
Zoya: you should be worried about your tanu not about me.
Asad thought ya I guessed it correct. Zoya is sad because of his closeness to tanveer.
Asad: ms.farooqui tanu is my best friend. In fact my only friend. She is going through a difficult phase in life. I am just supporting her as her good friend. It's only like the same way I care for tamater. Nothing more than that. And I have full right to be worried about your health. After all you are my fianc.
Zoya: Nakli fianc mr.khan! I am your Nakli fianc. You just came to airport & stopped me because phupi & najma wanted me here. After that you engaged me only because of phupi's health. After all why would you marry me mr.khan? I am a modern girl who were jeans, who is Indepentant & always live according to my pov. You never wanted a girl like me who is talkative & messy. You prefer a women like tanveer who is traditional & soft spoken. You yourself have told me that I am a misfit for you & your family.
If something goes wrong somewhere you are 100% sure that it is because of zoya. You so confidently shout at me & even beat me in public. You think just because I stay in your house & I forgive you always for your mistakes you can do what ever you want to me. But you are wrong mr.khan.
Asad was so shocked seeing her out burst.
Asad: zoya
Zoya: I didn't finish mr.khan. Whatever be the reason you have used a pure relation like engagement for your own selfishness. Do you even know what it means? You are playing with my emotions. you your self is not sure what you want in your life. And about tanveer I don't care if you consider her as your bestie or as your sister or then as some one special in your life. Once phupi gets well I myself will reveal truth in front of her & free you from this unwanted relationship. And for now you please leave my room. I want peace of mind.

Asad was too shocked. He has never seen zoya in this much anger. Even after he bet her in hospital, when he went & apologised she never shouted at him like this way. He can blame only himself. Without trying to know the entire truth he always jumps into the conclusion that zoya is the culprit when most of the time she will be innocent. Just because she is Indepentant & were modern cloths he thinks she is a misfit. In fact in reality there can be no girl in the world who can love him & his family like zoya. Only she can handle his mood disorders.
It was he who announced zoya as his fianc. It was he who went & engaged her. After giving her so many hopes he had shattered it by declaring it as a Nakli engagement. What if some does the same with najma or NikhAt? Just because she doesn't have a family he can't play with her feelings.
He remembered that always he insults her that she doesn't know the value of relationships. Even day before yesterday after his jashn saugeth he said to her the same thing. It was the same girl who came to this place leaving her life in New York, her higher studies & career only to find her father whom she doesn't even know the name. Who has abandoned her at the age of 3.
He know zoya is very hurt because he never talked to her what he feel about her. About his insecurities. He thought that he should confess his feelings for her. He should share his problems with her. He can't give her more pain.

Next day morning

Every one except tanveer was there in the dining table for breakfast. Dilshad didn't allow her to come down since she is not well. Zoya was just playing with her food. Dilshad & najma was going on discussing about the upcoming sangeet ceremony. Once they finished breakfast dilshad & najma left for the preparations of sangeeth ceremony. Zoya was cleaning the table. Asad came near her.
Asad: one minute can I have a word with you ms.farooqui?
Zoya just stared at him.
Asad: ms.farooqui you know we both are very different from each other.
Zoya: ha I know that. In fact that much different that you are a human & I am an alien.
Asad: ms.farooqui woh actually we both are entirely different from each other. Just like this plate & spoon. But
Zoya: ha mr.khan I know that we are totally different from each other. If I am that much different from you then why did you engage me? Oh how can I forget that it's a Nakli one. I told you yesterday itself that once phupi is well I myself will call of the wedding. You know what mr.khan I am happy that I am entirely different from you. At least I am not a judgemental person who values people on the basis of there cloths. I am glad that I am not an emotionally challenged person who doesn't know what they want in life & hurting others emotions because of that. And I request just stay away from me as much as possible you can.
Zoya left from there angrily.
Asad pressed him temples. What he wanted to do & what it had ended up. He just wanted to say that even they both are entirely different from each other just like a plate & spoon they complete each other when they are together. So he wanted her to be with him forever to complete him & He loves her the way she is.
He know talking with her will only create more problems. She will never allows him to speak. He should find a way out of this.

Zoya was extremely upset after talking with asad. She started to play games in her Ipad. But she really couldn't concentrate. Finally she gave up.
She thought of opening her FB & chatting with someone to come out this frustration.
Once she opened her FB she was shocked to see that asad had accepted her friend request. Zoya had sent it 2 months back when she came to this house. Along with najma she has sent it to him also. Now he is accepting it. Ha why a person like him be in FB regularly?
She also saw that there is a message from asad.
Zoya: now what he wants?
She opened it.

Zoya please read it completely. Morning itself you didn't allow me to complete it.
I never wanted to fall in love only because I have seen my ammi's pain for the past 17 yrs when my abbu left her & went. But I was never against marriage. I always had an image of a girl in my mind. But it was completely opposite to you. But as said when cyclone enters everything changes. Since when you entered in my life everything got changed. You taught me to see other peoples pov. You taught me that there is a heart inside the flesh. You made me to listen to my heart than to my mind. Even tough we are entirely different from each other just like a plate & spoon we complete each other when we are together. I wanted you to be there for me for ever to complete me. I know I was a fool to run away from myself by declaring you as a misfit. But truth is that you are the one who fits in my life perfectly. I know I have always judged you by your cloths hurt you by your Indepentant nature but the truth is that I get more pain when I see tears in your eyes & I want to kill myself for bringing it in your beautiful eyes. I really liked you when I saw in Mazar for the first time. Even tough I was irritated by you at first I eventually fall for you. Ya you heard it correct zoya. I realised that in mangalpur when I saw your lifeless body. But I preferred to run away from my insecurities than facing it. I know I hurt your feelings because of my EC nature. But I can't see you in more pain. I wanted to reveal the biggest truth in my life that I love you zoya! I love you by the way you are. I know you too have the same feelings for me. Even then just replay me to this message.
Zoya was awestruck. So finally mr.khan accepted that he is in love with this musibat?
Zoya replied.
Zoya: mr.khan you could have told this straight to me in the morning. Why did you bring that weird examples & irritate me? Wait I am a cyclone? How dare you mr.khan?

Asad had kept his FB open. He wanted to see zoya's replay.
Asad had smile seeing her replay.

Asad: ha ms.farroqui you are a cyclone that arrived in my life but for good things. You are my one & only musibat magnet & I won't let my musibat to go away from me. I have confessed now I want to bear that from you.

Zoya smiled seeing this

Zoya: not so soon mr.khan. You made me to wait this long.

Asad: please

Zoya: no way

Asad: please

Zoya: I love you too mr.khan.

Asad smiled & he had tears of happiness.

Asad murmured: I really thank to person who found out FB which helped to confess my love.


Note: this part was not planned. Since may of you guys wanted asad to confess I came up with this part. Here zoya just behave like a normal girl. It was asad who engaged her & after giving hopes he broke her heart by declaring it as a Nakli one. Just because of his insecurities he can't hurt zoya's feelings. If some had done the same to najma or NikhAt what he would have done? Just because she is an orphan he don't have rights to play with her. I wonder why zoya being an Indepentant girl tolerated asad who always used her feelings & who never trusted her & stood by his bestie's words. I feel that out burst was much needed. Here zoya is a normal girl who has self respect. Since I started with a FB I ended it there only.
Edited by Az07 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb part dear... 👏 👏
Zoya being right by pouring her heart out in front of asad...
It is imp for asad to get taste his own medicine by getting scolding for zoya...
At last they confessed... 😳 😳
Plz give us one ir two more parts containing asya confrontationa and romance after confession 😳 😳 😊

Thanks for pm
Edited by aYASHIKA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was awesome

I just loved it

Started in FB ended in FB

Very good

At last asad confessed

Zoya had the right to express her frustration

I dont know why cv's didnt show it in show ...

Well this is not the only thing they have not ,

There are many thing which are unshown

Anyways forget it

Di, need an another part too pls 😳

continue soon

Thanks for pm

Pm me for next update

Edited by aishw09 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Edited by aishw09 - 11 years ago

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