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Ankita Grover

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: p_s05
"You had lost the right to take any random decision at the age of 6 when we first met and the life you are talking about, you had promised me that life."

"That's why I loved you differently. Every minute I spent with you I spent it like that moment was last moment with you. I lived minutes in seconds and hours in minutes."

Poignant chapter! 🥺 Wish it didn't end like this, alas LIFE isn't a FAIRY-TAIL.

Good work! ⭐️

Thank you so much. I though to end it with some happy ending but I found this one better 😳

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Ankita Grover

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Alai123
It was awesome but still sad that Asad died...
Thanks for the pm😉

thanks 😳

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PreetLuvKSG

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Posted: 11 years ago

It was fab. I m still crying 😭

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Asif

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Posted: 11 years ago

It was awesome
Thanks for pm

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aYASHIKA

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Posted: 11 years ago

Superb part dear...
U made me cry...I m still weeping after reading the chapte 😭 😭 ...
Asad died 😭 😭 ...after proving that he is not a loser and he love zoya so much...
Their love is unconditional. ...
Such a painful ending...
Amazingly written..
Thanks for pm

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aseela sha

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Posted: 11 years ago

it was so emotional & touching update

Why do u made me cry dear?😭

You can make it as a happy end but u didnt

I have a request to u if u write any sad ending ASYA stories pls inform it first then i can bear it or i can ignore it

Dear you are a talented writer👏

You know i am weak person

I cant bear seperations it makes me depressed

So pls forgive me if i hurt u

Thanks for pm

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Lasya Adiraj

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Posted: 11 years ago

It was so cute

I almost cried

Really sad...

Why don't u write another epilogue?

Pls do make it happy if u r writing one

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Mahera

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Posted: 11 years ago

Very emotional update!😭

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jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

really a heart breaking end💔🥺

I thought Asad will survive some how😭

I don't like sad endings

but this story was very emotional & touching👍🏼

superb work👏

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jazsidhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

very emotional...

very heart touching...

thx fr the pm...

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