AsYa SS:Forgotten Melody Updated 08/01/2017 pg 103 - Page 14

Originally posted by: FaultInMyStars

This was such a beautiful and heart wrecking chapter!
I have tears running down my eyes...
It was both of their fault...muqadarr ka khel 😆
When will Asad realise he was the one who directed her to kiss him? I can only imagine how he would feel afterwards...
My poor Zoya..I feel so sad for her. And strangely, I feel bad for Asad too 😆 But he deserves a lesson to stop judging people and jumping to conclusions...and she deserves some lesson to become more mature. My babies...make him suffer like her too. Then they will be even. 😉
Can't wait for the third chapter! Yup m a sadist 😆

Originally posted by: Zanutix

First of all, the gif maker is indeed VERY talented! Wow! Amazing! 👏

Coming to the update, you know what?

You have a way with words - you can stir a reader's emotions.

My throat felt heavy, no it wasn't cough (ew!), I was probably too overwhelmed.

The part where Asad blames her and leaves her broken, like literally broken, you managed to deliver it perfectly! And also, you use adjectives pretty well, may I add.

I'm glad that Zoya will gather her self respect and move out of the house - that's what an MCP like him deserves!

I'm eagerly waiting for the next part - a self loathing, guilty Asad is all I want right now. After what he did to Zoya, my mind won't rest in peace unless he apologises.

You are awesome! Please update soon! 😃

Originally posted by: MissReadingFaye

Muqadarr ka khel lol ... lol they both knew they wanted to lol😆 Did I just say that lol ☺️

Yes Asad will recall everything from that night including his dire need for her to kiss him and he will feel like a total fool. Thank you for your cute comment, you make me smile - I look really silly smiling at my laptop in the library ... the librarian thinks I am bipolar😆

Yes you said that lol
OMG I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon Ma'am!
Making people...especially wonderful people, smile in today's world is quite an achievement which I am very proud of! *raises collar*
Jokes apart, trust me I have been humming BNHH since the time I read this update and my roomies think I have gone nuts haha...Smiling at the phone/laptop is something very common for people like us...poor librarian! 😆 Oh well I am getting another skeptic look lol

UPDATEEE SOONNN PLZZZ

🤗 swapno you're amazing my dear and I love these Bol na halke gifs ... so pretty and yes KaBhi's charm is just magical ❤️

I just read the first 2 parts and they are awesome :)

this was just so perfect...!! But how could he be so cruel and say such things to her...!!! You've made me cry...!!!!

Wow😲 that was a lovely update👏

Such a beautifully crafted and well written story! Delightful! Thankyou!

Originally posted by: MissReadingFaye

Extension granted lol 😆

It will be more than 4 parts maybe 6 and I promise Asad will be repenting each and every word and there is definitely romance is in store ... but bechaara Asad has to work for it first. 😆