AsYa SS:Forgotten Melody Updated 08/01/2017 pg 103 - Page 13

Originally posted by: SimplySmile

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Um, so I think that we have officially established that I am a stalker, yep, nothing to be ashamed of, no sirry, nope, not at all, in fact here is my face right now

Aren't I attractive????

Anyways... moving on

GURRRLLL you dedicated it to me as well, you shouldn't have, but I'm glad ya did😉😉

This part... do I even have to say anything...

I'M SUPPOSED TO BE ASLEEP RIGHT NOW, IT'S FREAKING 2 IN THE MORNING HERE AND MY MATH HOMEWORK IS JUST SITTING ON MY TABLE BURNING HOLES INTO MY FACE, AND YET I'M READING THIS

K so if you don;t mind I'm gonna start planning some ways to murder AAK, just thought I give you a heads up, so far I have make a clone of him and make the clone kill the real AAK

If you wanna save him, write an update FAST

Sonny out!!!!!!

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Bas FOUR???????? 😲 YOU CAN'T DO THIS ATYACHAAR ON ME! 😭 Thoda extend karo aur romance add karo please!

Originally posted by: nuts_22

Awesome update!!
I loved it 😊
So Zoya left 😭
I want asad to repent and fell the pain of loosing her
Hope everything os ok soon
Waise I love your updates because of their lenght
U write beautifully dear 😳
Thanks for the dedication 🤗
Nuts

Originally posted by: treasure11

I always love the way you describe the rains 😳

It was such a beautiful night ...both letting go of all the barriers between them !

And when it was morning my tears would'nt stop

Beleive me I cried and cried till the end 😭

How could he be soo insensitive and soo irresponsible

He still is not ready to accept his mistake 😲

Just a sorry won'nt do asad 😡Is he seriously deciding to say sorry and everything will normal again ...still not trying to understand the seriousness of the situation 😡

I hope she dosent forgive him easily 😡He should make her beleive now that not only he is guilty but he loves her This should really get difficult for him

Am sorry i could'nt control ma anger on him ...😒

And thankk you soo much for the upate 😳🤗

Best of luck for ur exam !!

And Update soon 😉😆

And Loved the banner!😳

Bolna halke halke will always be special 😳

Originally posted by: -Anitha-

Im speechless buddy after i read this part.
This is simply fabulous.
Penned amazingly. 👍🏼
Their emotions were described beautifully
Such an romance cum emotional update❤️
Made me emotional 😭 😭
Loved whose bolna halke halke😳 all time favrite song..
even though asad is dumbass i cannot angry on my asad - bcz i know that he is emotionally challenged & he will regret for all his mistake.
But felt very bad for my zoya too. 😭 😭
Hope zoya wont forgive him easily. I cant bear this seperation buddy.
Each & every words were epic..
I just want to read how would his misfit dialogue change into perfect fit.
Zoya is perfect for asad Im craving to read wat next.. Such a lovely gift❤️
Thank u so much for this lovely pm 🤗
love yah❤️
Ani😊

Originally posted by: swapno

Fatima 🤗

What an amazing update it was. I was stunned at the height of rudeness of Asad and I was feeling like kill him right then and there. He just robbed that poor girls innocence and hence has audacity to accuse her like that.

Zoya indeed did the right thing. It was his punishment. Stupid, arrogant, coward man. She needed to leave him although she had to gone through the same pain.

You portrayed Zoya's agony, Asad's torment, desperateness so vividly that I could almost imagine Karan and Surbhi there. Sorry I could not just come out of Kabhi's charm as AsYa (no offense to anyone). This was a long, beautiful update...Loved it.

Thank you so much for this...🤗 and I am tempting to post this...

Credit: ishqpezornehi

Originally posted by: zynia890

OK! So good story! And hating asad right now! Like seriously he is doing this! He is so responsible. And he is blaming the lady despite knowing the fact that he and his family will be reputed and safe while what would happen to zoya and even his child! Its good that he is standing on her doorstep now! I want zoya to show indifference and show him that she doesn't need him. OK I have question does asad knew that she is in India not in newyork!! Continue soon! Your expressing about weather and inner turmoil is good!

Originally posted by: fatima30

Wow just wow! I cried for zoya! You write so beautifully

Originally posted by: rida001

Your dedication list have my name too...Thanks for it

If you dont mind plz put recap in each update so I remember what the last update was

You write very well. I think I have to get English training classes from you.
Coming to the story...It was amazing
Anyone in that state would do the same thing that Asad did. But his anger was a bit-too much. Both are responsible for that night, so only Zoya cannot be blamed. Anyways, tanveer's entry made my mood spoil as I hate that character to the core. Hope you dont give tanveer so much importance as given in the serial.
Zoya's decision is some how right but it made me cry. The picture perfect scene 😭 Overall it was beyond perfection.

Thanks for the pm