Ayaan's home coming,.. on the expanse of loved one's,.. OS - Page 6

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

ress

oh mali..m crying nw..😭

yuup i left qh wen ksg exit the show..bt yesterday qh have officially lost its soul..ie asad n zoya...

bt somewhr deep in my heart..i really wanted ayaan to come as savior in qh..bt nvrmind..

well explained mali..

da way ayaan saw the house so crowded...his mind stopped wrking...

wen he saw dead bodies of his bhaijaan his mona...his father...😭😭

dilshad character was full of bravery .a courageous lady..hu explained the whole violent scenario to ayaan...😭😭

oh mali m really short of wrds to explain wat m feeling rite nw..😭

bt well explained well written OS frm ayaan POV...much needed OS...

WELL DONE MALI...👏🤗

well nvr frgt our asad n zoya..(KABHI)

😭😭

Originally posted by: CHOCOSWATHI

u made me cry 😭
this was so sad
the way u described ayaan's emotions and action not to forget dilshad that was amazing
i was awesome work

Originally posted by: CHOCOSWATHI

u made ayaan to come back
dont know why CVs forget him..

Originally posted by: shonajain

freekingly awsume
serial writer just need to come on the forum and need read all the fiction over here they r much more sensible then their no sense
u wrote beautifully
hats off

Originally posted by: Azraa01

It was indeed a sad OS.. Ayaan's emotions was soo well described..

Originally posted by: ...Mallu...

Wowww !!
Hayee ehow you describe itss Outstnding !! (:
No words You descrbe Ayaan's Emotion is Perfect !!
but am Crying :'(

Originally posted by: AyRa_Rocks

I was abt to sleep. just logged in to comment here.
I'm not following the show but I got to know that asya hv been killed brutally.
Ayaan is my most favourite character and so I'm glad that he didn't return and die.
And ur writing. just made me so emotional. U hv penned down my ayaan's feelings so perfectly.

And thank u so much for writing something on ayaan whom everyone seems to hv forgotten.
U r a great writer and ur portrayal of his feelings is just mind blowing. Very well written. Loved it.

Originally posted by: Maano_Kabhi

hayae
after so long i recieved 2 pms with same title, i thought you sent 2 times by mistake
and when opened it was a surprise Maliaa, 2 OS in a day?😲
but it was a good surprise definitely,😆

Originally posted by: -Maliha-

m sorry that i made you cry,..
thanxa fah liking,..
it would had been really painful, fah dillu,.. and ayaan too,..
loosing his whole family,..
QH has finally lost its remaining esssence,..thas ASYA,..
and that pic you posted,..thas so nostalgic,..😭

Originally posted by: Maano_Kabhi

i loved reading it, although it was much sad. You are one of the best emotional writers i have read so far,
and yes, you penned it down perfectly, that how we distant ourself from our loved ones and how luck and people takes them away, and we sit helpless

ayaan's reaction on seeing asad lying their was 😭
the awesomest words:

And she removed that third sheet,.. it was none other than his own bhaijaan, his strength, his courage, his only friend, his only savior,

a glass splintered loudly in his brain,. Making him jostle few steps away,..
He froze there,. His mind needed so much lives to process that small info and what he could see,..
Tha man lying their was stained with coal,. Having no similarity with his handsome clean freak bhaijaan
Bhaijaan? That monosyllable took eternities to be mouthed

please write more. please update your story too!