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Ankita Grover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

loved the update

you are such a great writer

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Rosered1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

Congrats for the new thread 👏

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Rosered1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

Chapter 25:

The Pizza scene ❤️

"Her eyes flew above, staring into his brown orbs and got lost in the moment. His gentle touch on her lips made her heart go erratic her breath hitched in her throat."Love this scene

Asad Zoya Aanu shopping😃

P.S. Sorry for late comments

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Rosered1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

Dilshad is soo sweet and understanding 😛

I just loved the shopping!😃

"Aahana stared at both the pieces of cloth in front of her for a while and then picked the grey and white one. Asad smirked and looked at Zoya who was already moping at her loss. Asad was just about to mock her choice when Aahana flung the grey dungaree in

her hands away and hugged the pink one to herself." 😆

Looks like AAK ka credit card almost empty hogaya 😆

Asad brought the dress for Zoya! *just assuming*😛

AsYa understanding is just lovely😳

Dilshad Zoya convo ❤️

The hug and the kiss ❤️

Just loved this update sooo much 🤗

P.S. again srry for late comments

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

wow a fabulous update...

wonderfull...

luv the shopping spree asad zoya n ahana went...

ahana is such a cutie pie...

dilshad understanding asad n zoya feeling...

she knows zoya is in love with asad...

beautifully written...

luv the way u potray the whole emotion between asad n zoya...

eagerly waiting for the next part...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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rads73937

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Amazing update.

Now i know why you enjoyed writing this part.

It was a magical part.

I also enjoyed reading this part.

Loved the emotional bonding between all.

Loved it.

Thanx for the pm. Take care.

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mummyoftwo

@mummyoftwo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

Very nice update. Looking forward to next one

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DarkPhoenix93

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Posted: 11 years ago

#168

Asad is finally starting to catch on! I love that Dilshad stopped talking to Asad just so that he can get close to Zoya! She is such a lovely mom. Will Aanu call Zoya 'ammi' in the next chapter? Will there be a Tanveer in this story? If so I would love to read about Asad trusting Zoya more than his 'Tanu'!

I really can't wait for the next chapter!

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SleepingBeauty.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#169

This update was soo good! The way Ammi understands Asya and their relationship woth each other is soo good! Such a nice sweet update this was! Loved how Ammi made asad promise that he will accept what his ammi tells him. lol that was very smart Loool update sooon!!! :D