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Thanks, I'll try soon!!!😃

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Don't worry!!!😊

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Hey whhen will u update?
dont say soon because soon ka meaning I dont understand 😆 😆
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Hey whhen will u update?
dont say soon because soon ka meaning I dont understand 😆 😆
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Um maybe on Saturday or Sunday!!!

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He he he!!!😆

Um maybe on Saturday or Sunday!!!

Sorry!!!😭



but saturday and sunday are too far u know! 😭
itnaaa lamba wait! 😭
okk take ur time and update when u have time
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but saturday and sunday are too far u know! 😭
itnaaa lamba wait! 😭
okk take ur time and update when u have time
try to update soon plz. 😊



Thanks!!!😃

Aww!!!😭

Well look at the bright side the weekends is almost here!!!

Will update soon!!!😆

Sorry once again!!!

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weekend.. just 2 days more... update soon...
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Hey guys I'm back!!!😃 I have a banner!!😊 Thank you soo much ASYA4eveAAA and -chamkilli-!!! Thanks -chamkilli- for making it!!! Thanks ASYA4eveAAA for requesting it for me!!!🤗

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😃Hey y'all I'm back!!! Really sorry for the long wait!!! 😭Here's chapter four! Hope ya like it!!!😳
Chapter 4- Our Gang is Back!!!


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Zoya's dress

I check myself in the mirror one more time. Woh!!! Is that really me? My reflection flabbergasts me immensely!!! I am dressed in a lovely red, sleeveless dress which holds intricate designs of sequins on the top portion, and companies my dress elegantly. Adorning my eyes are little wisps of eyeliner. For your information I hate too much makeup!!! I mean seriously what's with chemicals that changes how you look!!! Yuck!!! My ears are ornamented with delicate white earrings, matching my dress ideally. Dangling from my head is my hair all in perfect curls. I quickly apply a little bit of my strawberry flavored lip gloss. One last look in the mirror and I head off to join Humzie and Najma, who'll be probably annoyed with my habit of taking way too long!!!
Guess I'll have to deal with it!!! God please protect me!!! You are my only savior!!!
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Humaira's dress


Humaira's dress-(above)




Najma's dress-(above)

"ZOE!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT TAKES YOU SOO LONG!!!" -Screams my irritable friend!!!
I quickly plug my ears, to save them from breaking!!! Hey I don't want to be deaf!!!
"Allah miya what's wrong with ya!!! Calm down sister!!! Well Sorry!!!"- I say, trying to act mad!!!
"Um Zoe I think Humzie is right! You take an incredible amount of time!!! I think we are late for the party!!!" - Says Najma, so innocently!!!
"Hello!!! I am right, now lets go before the party is over!!!" -Humzie says
We run to the car and Humzie takes off!!!
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In the car Humzie is ignoring me and it's driving me crazy!!! I try to convince her and swear to never get late again (like that's ever gonna happen, he he he, shhh)!!!
"Najma tell Zoya she has to say sorry a hundred and one times, then only I'll forgive her.''- Says Humzie
"Zoe Humzie is saying----"
"I heard Najma!!!"- I say while interrupting Najma
I began saying sorry and before I knew it I reached one hundred and one!!!
"Aww Zoya it's fine anyways I can't stay mad at you for long!!!"- Says Humzie
Finally we reached and ran inside!!!
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I walked in and looked up shockingly! The party was amazing!!! Gigantic chandeliers were hanging proudly from the roof wall. Colors of lights were blazing through the room!!! Crowds of people were surrounded all over the place!!! Humeria and Najma were by my side and we started a search party for our flirtatious boys, Imran and Farhan. We look everywhere but still no sighting of these boys!!! Suddenly a light bulb pops up in my mind. I sort of left and got separated from Humzie and Najma. Yikes!!! Just great instead of enjoying I have to scan for my friends! Once again I start my searching for the fools. I look in every crook and cranny, but no luck!!! I just decide to sit down and hope that hopefully they will come up to me. Well you see I'm not very good with socializing with new people so I just grab out my phone and start playing candy crush saga, yes I'm addicted to it!!! Out of no where a stranger appears and sits down next to me, like really close to me.
"Hey you're Zoya right!"-Says the creepy stranger
Uh yeah great you know my name, one question how do you know my name!!? Are you some kind of stalker. Oh no, wait there's people here, YAY you can't do anything to me!!! So I think you should go before I call for help and you get hit and may even need a ride to the hospital!!!!- I think in my mind.
"Um yeah"- I say in a tone, that should get him the message to leave me alone.
"Wow I didn't know you go to Princeton also, my name's Akram, I used to attend the same high school as you, remember?"
"Um not really, but it's nice to meet ya!"-I lie with a real looking fake smile
"So may I have a dance with you!"-He says
"Well you see I really don't dance!"- I say annoyingly
"Oh common I'll teach you"-The creeper says
With that the Akram guy grabs my hand tightly and drags me to the dance floor. He clutches my waist real tight and forcefully puts my hand on his shoulder. I try to get out of his hold but somewhere I could scene a presence of a rescuer. It was Him!!!
"Well an attractive and beautiful lady like you shouldn't be dancing with an ugly little creep!" - Says Asad
"Excuse me who are you and you shouldn't be interfering in our dance!"-Says that Akram guy
Hey this was all k but not anymore "our dance". You know I have no interest at all to be dancing with you, in fact your the one who pulled me up to dance!!! Please not in front of Asad, don't ruin my reputation- I think in my mind
"Oh really, well I think I am the eligible man here, so back off"and then Asad slaps him hard across the face!!!
Finally the creeper leaves and gives me a sigh of relief. But do problems ever leave me!!!
"Hey gorgeous, you look breathtaking"- Asad says making me get goosebumps allover!
I don't know what to say so I just quickly run away from the scene.
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"Ring Ring"-I see it's a call from my darling Najma

"Yo Najma where did you guys disappear?- I ask her
"Well we found Imran and Farhan outside and I guess we started taking selfies!!!"- Najma says
"WHAT first you guys left me and now y'all are taking selfies without me!!!?"- I scream into the phone loudly and I can feel all the eyeballs on me!!!
"Sorry Zoe anyways come here quickly!!!?"- Says Najma
"Fine"-I say
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I ran outside and was immediately enveloped in a hug!!! I just give them a silent treatment with a grumpy face.
"Arrey we're sorry Zoe!!!"-says my four friends
"Please you can even punish us but talk to us"
Knowing I can't stand with talking to my friends I forgive them and all is well between us.
"So today's the first party of college right!!!?"-says Imran
"Toh shall we have some fun"!!!- Says Farhan!
"Yeah!!!"-Us three girls say
We plan our big plan of pranks and I forget all my problems at the moment. I'm just soo happy that our gang is back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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So here's chapter four!!!😃 How did y'all like it!!!😕 Sorry I didn't include much Asya parts!!! SORRY!!!😭Next chapter will hopefully bring you much moments of our beloved Asya!!!😳 So till then hit the like button and comment away!!!😆 Bye!!!⭐️


Edited by Ami34 - 11 years ago

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