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Originally posted by: aseelashah

Uma i love it bas.

Its superb.
Kaash eisa hi kuch ho jaatha show mein bhi, but they are dumb people.😡
Pls update soon
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Originally posted by: sasir

aw.

awesome.
loved the way asad supported zoya.
i bow down infront of u just for that few lines.
u simply portrayed changed asad.
really its what i wanted always for my asya.
hope asad will find zoya n ayan before something happens to them
i hate hasenna.
she is such a stooped woman.
hope sm wale koi hungama create na kare.
plz
plz
plz update soon


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Due to urge to create zoyaan track they forgot that asad has changed his mentality towards zoya & he was a person who had so much faith in all this kind of traditions
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Originally posted by: SovaSana

awesome update

loved the way how asad supported zoya and ayaan and gave haseena a comeback\
i hope he comes on time and saves them
do continue soon
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Originally posted by: mooumi

Awesome update dear...continue soon.. 😃



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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Awesome Part Uma di👏😊

Glad dat Asad did not doubted Zoya n Ayaan😃
Loved d way Asad shut Haseena up👏
Haseena-The Bitch has played a game in SM😡
KV cumn to know abt Zoya n Ayaan in danger😲
Hope they finds Zoya n Ayaan
Poor Zoya n Ayaan kidnapped by Tanveer😡
Update soon d next part n PM me😃



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Originally posted by: royalsgirl93

when r u updating ur stories

been a while
plez come quick



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Frankly very upset with show the way they showed billi torture
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Part 3

Asad went directly to the community hall near chawk bazaar. He was extremely tensed. He was sure that tanveer was behind kidnapping zoya & Ayaan. He knew when tanveer was staying almost 2 1/4 months in his house she tried several times to kill zoya & he was unaware of it completely. Now when he was about to get married to zoya, she kidnapped her & also involved his younger brother in this so that she can create misunderstanding that zoya & Ayaan eloped. It has been almost 3 hours since zoya was missing. Tanveer would she have hurt zoya? No he has to save her. She is more than his life. His phone started ringing. It was nikhat's call.
Asad: NikhAt
NikhAt: bhaijaan haseena bee came here. She told us that Ayaan bhaijaan & zoya ran away. She broke my nikkah with farhaan. Ayaan bhaijaan & Humeira is still not here.
Asad: this women has crossed all the limits. NikhAt zoya & Ayaan can never do something like this. Tanveer is behind all this. She has trapped zoya & Ayaan. I will save them before she hurts them. Trust me NikhAt I will bring back zoya & Ayaan & prove there innocence. Then there won't be any problem with your nikkah with farhaan.
NikhAt: bhaijaan that women just needs money. For her greediness she will just use our emotions. I am not in love with farhaan. I just can't bare those people any more bhaijaan. I am not that aged also. I want to concentrate on my career now. Marriage will happen on time. Bhaijaan please save zoya & Ayaan bhaijaan.
Asad: NikhAt don't worry I will bring zoya & Ayaan before tonight.

Asad reached the community hall. He went directly to the office. He also came to know that the community marriage got over. When he entered office room he was surprised to see Humeira there. When NikhAt told that Humeira was also with Ayaan asad concluded that tanveer kidnapped her also. But Humeira is here. Seeing asad she ran & came towards him. She was crying so badly.
Humeira: bhaijaan Ayaan
Asad: Humeira don't worry nothing will happen to him. I will bring him back. But how come you people came here?
Humeira: we were on the way to collect gifts for you guys. On the way back Ayaan noticed that some people are following us. They stopped us & started attacking us. In between he was calling himself as vikram & he addressed me as rajini. We ran & reached here. He made me to sit upstairs safely & he came down to ask help. Even after a long when he didn't came I came down. These people are saying that Ayaan went missing.
Asad understood that it was the guy who came in sm when Humeira was having amnesia & calling herself as rajini. He remembered Ayaan informing that he found out that guy was a robber & he caught him red handed when he tried to misbehave with Humeira.
Asad: Humeira I will arrange all the needful for you to go back to sm.
Humeira: bhaijaan I won't go back without Ayaan
Asad: Humeira then you be in KV. I will come back only with Ayaan

Asad sent back Humeira safely to KV. Asad showed ayaan's & zoya's photos to the Malvi. He identified them.
Asad contacted dysp & gave zoya's & tanveer's number to them. There number was given for tracing.

Inside the clinic

Zoya & Ayaan was bet brutally. They both had bruises. They were bleeding also. They knew they were kept under observation by the gundoos.
Zoya: it's all my fault. I promised mr.khan that I won't leave KV without informing him. Even after having many bitter experiences from tanveer I just impulsively came to save najma's life. But I ended up in trapping myself. Unnecessarily you too got trapped.
Ayaan: Mona please don't blame yourself. You just wanted to save najma's life. Even after being her brothers me & bhaijaan failed to enquire properly about Imran.
Zoya: Ayaan what are we going to do now? We are surrounded by gundoos. God alone knows what tanveer is planning to do now?

Tanveer came inside.
Tanveer: you know what zoya I have spread that you & Ayaan eloped. Believing that haseena bee broke nikhat's nikkah with farhaan.
Both zoya & Ayaan was shocked.
Ayaan: you witch I will kill you.
Tanveer: you won't be able to do that. Before that I will kill you. I have filled the whole building with fire. With in minutes you both will reach heaven. Alvida zoya.

Before they could react tanveer has closed the door. They could feel that fire had started. Seeing flames of fire zoya started sweating. Her nightmares came into reality once more.

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