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Posted: 11 years ago
nice.
but last line is scary.
plz update soon
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baby I'm really sorry.. vl comment later...update vl b awesome I know..I'm GnG out of town..no internet here 😭
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I vl try 2 read midnite...
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Part 11

Ayra scene

Ayan entering the park nd all people in the park staring at him frm top to bottom he wearing a Pink Chiffon saree a slevelees blouse ,waxed hand nd shaking his butt nd coming wth his latka jatka matka

Park guys nd Humi staring frm top to bottom bg music follows Oh shona, Oh shona...

Oh shonduri..
Tomar monta diye jao
Tara tari eshe jao
Tomar monta diye jao
Tara tari eshe jao
Tang tang tang...

Humi whistleing oye hoye humi marring seeti :Tune maari entriyaan re
Dil mein baji ghantiyaan re
Tang tang tang...
Dil ki sun commentriyan re
Pyaar ki guarantiyan re
Tang tang tang...

park main 1 guy: yeh pataka kaha se aagayi

Guy 2: blue eyes hpnotize bomb lagthi hai menu...

Guy 3: seeti maar uff

Guy 4 : yaar yeh tho meri upar giregi dil dhak dhak kare haye taking a banana out nd peeling the banana outer layer nd throwing it near her so tht she slips

Ayan approaching humi but before he does his high heels slip due to the banana peel nd he is abt to fall nd the park guy 4 runs to hold him along wth him all others run all push each othr nd humi comes running iam coming nd ayan trips nd humi holds him The grt rk pose nd ayans heels come out up in the air nd falls but humi holds it in left hand side ..Right hand she is holding ayan nd the other hand his heels the music follows nd their eyes lock bg music follows pheli nazar main kaisa jadu kardiya tera ban baita yeh mera jiya O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa

Baby i love u, baby i love you, baby i love you, baby i love you ... so..
Baby i love u
Oh i love u
I love u
I love u so
Baby i love u

Asya scene

Zoya sees the snake nd screams nooo..nd the snake bites her leg she shouts loudly helppp nd faints

Asad:in the same jungle hears the scream nd runs to the direction of the scream nd sees zoya unconscious nd rushes to her lik maniac nd holds her hand ...zoya wht happened zoya plz kya huva aap koi drama tho nahi kar rahi hai na plz zoya...nd sees a snake moving frm ther nd he sees zoya frm top to bottom nd he sees a 2 bite marks of snake ... dhak dhak asad's heart beats go eraatic in a panic mode dhak dhak tish tish nd he starts panicking nd remembering his own words ya kuda bas iss ladki ko meri zindigi se ruksat karna iss wish ko qubool karna...asad getting scared takes a big sized handkerchief nd ties it tightly near zoya's leg.. dhak dhak..nd keeps checking zoya's heartbeats getting scared he tries to suck out the poison frm the leg sucking it hard nd spitting down the poison nd screaming zoya's name zoyaaa...plzzz open ur eyes plzz nd again sucking her foot nd he spits the poison down zoya hear me...hear me dam it...nd she opens her eyes a litl...nd says his name "asad"...mitwaaa ishq pay zor nahi ooohhh asad hearing his name feels relieved ..he keeps on sucking her foot nd spitting the poison for a while nd starts carrying her nd running directionless zoya holding his shirt breathing halfly asad carrying her nd running tu jahan main wahan sang sang main chalu tere... jaise tera asmaaa na nanana asad praying hard ya kuda koi rasta dika nd at tht moment itself he hears temple bells but zoya breathing becomes less.. asad spking to zoya don't worry main aapko kuch nahi hone dunga asad sweating hardly climbs the temple stairs...its shiv temple very old ancient temple nd he comes carrying zoya in the background leaves fly here nd ther ..asad sees a baba old baba nd says him that snake has bitten her plzz do somethg plz first aid...the baba says don't worry here near the temple ther r lot of snakes nd in our ancient temple ther is a old vaidya who has learnt to cure people coz he knows ancient ayurvedic medicines he is an expert he will cure her nd asad feels faintish nd guidy he places zoya inside the temple nd sits close to her holding her hand the vaidya comes nd sees the handkerchief tied tightly he says good aapne yeh accha kiya he applies some leafy medicines crushes some medicinal leaves nd makes a paste nd applies to zoya nd makes her drink some kada the ancient tonic nd by tht time asad who was holding zoya's hand is bit unconscious vaidya sees asad nd understands nd takes him behind the temple

Kv scene

Dishaad : getting scared ya allah patha nahi kyon ithna darr lag raha hai bas mere bte ko safe rakna nd tries calling asad nd the phone is out of reach..nd gets scared

Sm scene

Razia calling zoya nd the phone out of reach...nd she tries zoya's frnds number diya..hello diya tum sab picnic main enjoy kar rahe ho na aur zoya ka phone out of reach kyon aarahi hai zara usse phone do beta

Diya : aunty par hum tho kissi picnic main nahi hai ...kissne bola ki hum picnic main hai

Razia : fuming zoyaaa

Diya : hello aunty r u ther aunty ...

Razia ; disconnects the phone

Ayra scene

Ayan humi coming out of the trance nd all the park guys surrounding thm nd staring at thm

Park guy 1 : yeh dono ladkiya kya voh hai hahaha

Park guy 2: arrey ek hotty yeh tho dusri silk smita hahaha

Ayan : kon hai sale ..silk smita ???

Park guy 4: uff tu hi meri jaan

Humi : giggling

Ayan : accha tho abhi dikatha hoon tum ladkon ko taking out his sandals nd running behind thm nd thy all running nd saying arrey aise hi flirt kar rahe thy tumse nd all running out nd laughing

Humi : laughing out laud kya baath hai silk smita tum par tho kafi demand hai hahaha

Ayan : arz kiya hai muskil hai ladki bana

Muskil hai ladki bana... Aur usse bhi muskil hai... puri country ki ladko se door rehna nd winks at humi

Humi: singing accha tho hum chalthe hain

Ayan : singing fir kab milogi

Humi: jab tum kahoge

AYan: Kal milo ya paraso,

Humi: parso nahi, narso(day aftr)

Ayan: Kahaan,

Humi: yahi yahaan koyi aata jaata nahi

Edited by jilmil.1 - 11 years ago
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Res for amu..
Dis place only for u :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hmm tht was gud..
Ayaan nd humi part was so funny..
He really did wear Saree ?
Tht to in prk !
Haha lol..

Aaww my poor baby ko cobra khata !
Glad tht asad pounchgaya...
Aaww the was so lvly yaar...
He scared hell..

Kaha le gaya tha usse vaidya ne..
Hop she ll fine soon..

Loved the song u used in dis prt..

Specially tu ne marri :p

nd razia ko pata chalgaya...
Nd dillu k ehsaas hui ki kch horaha hai..
Tht was very nc..
Loved the updt dear..
Continue soon..
Edited by gowtu - 11 years ago
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Ofcourse we ll ms u...
Come back soon..
Love u..

Originally posted by: Amulya9

I vl try 2 read midnite...
miss me.. miss u n gowtu

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Posted: 11 years ago
haww abh asad ko kya huya?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: piksg

haww abh asad ko kya huya?

asad ne bhi tho poison suck kiya tha uski body se tho thoda asar tho hoga na😭😭
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ab unressed kya hai😕😕😕

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