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rajsmi

@rajsmi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#501

Nice update...they are getting closer and thats sweet!!

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kalyani

@kals82

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#502

sadie...

this is not fair... not fair at all...

asad opened the string... and then he tied the strings...

but what happened in between...???????

you better write that down...😉

i am sure juliet will also agree with me...

nice update...

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#503

"She got up, gathered her leaves and dumped them on the other side of the bonfire. She turned her back to Asad too miffed at him to even show her face and tied her hair in a loose bun."

From this point on a very endearing read. The entire kiss concept and intent was charming. ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

""Zoya!" he whispered while tying back her strings.

Zoya hit him lightly on his chest while he chuckled, the vibration of his chest lulled her into a peaceful sleep!"

Beautiful! ❤️

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#504

Oh Asad could have been a lil more forthcoming like he's not living with us anymore instead of that!! I'd cry too!

And and I love her being miffed at him! Hayye the way he watches her every moves!

And yes!

The kiss!

Mmmhmm

And!

What comic end!

Mwah!

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#505

Sadie ur update is awesome

I loved it

Asad 's concern for Zoya was so adorable

That kiss scene & sleeping together was wonderful

Pls update soon

Thanks for pm

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Rosered1

@Rosered1

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#506

Asad hesitant to reveal about Rashid ...Hope the time to reveal comes soon

Asad's concern ❤️

The kiss 😳

Continue soon

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Prazeena Bhattarai

@Aneezarp27

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#507

for now...i don't remember anything other than the last part... THAT WAS TOO HAWT ! Finally caught by the passion...and kiss! Not one but many many kisses...awww!

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#508

Awesome update
Zoya wanted to know abt rashid & asad said that don't push me to tell as something is better forget.
Both lost in beautiful romantic moment
Hope whatever they showed each other by action, will say in words as well
Plz continue soon
Do pm me
Thanks

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#509

wonderfull n fabulous...

luv it...

amazing...

asad n zoya lost in the romance n put a side all their problems n fear...

beautifully written...

asad will soon run out excuse to tell zoya about rashid...

eagerly waiting for the next part...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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Young And Horny!

@Perfectionist2

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#510

CLASSY ! CLASSY! CLASSY!

One Bloody Hot Tarzan and Jane!

I cannot believe you put in the words as a matter of fact ----

whole scenario looked too filmy and cliche he wasn't going to let Zoya freeze to death in the sleeveless kurti that she was wearing !

Oh Yes but for such a flimy scene I did totally buy this book!!!!

Why didn't they sleep in the car, Oh right yes! Bonfire and Kiss wonderful concoction and then the chill winds...

Ok just one line didn't sit right with me --- Why would they regret the kiss again... I mean you would kiss once and go OH NO! I was under the Tarzan and Jane Spell but they bloody hell kissed and kissed and kissed and explored and rubbed the hub - Dubb - Dubb!

Seriously they will regret now.

Yeah yeah Rashid missing and Zoya Dad's I did send him to a gay BDMS club as a stripper.

On a serious note -

You are very stringent with the size of your updates.

And I would have liked to read what her screams said... Was it just incoherent yells or did it have words that didn't make sense.

Loved how you described the kiss.

I went into wild expressions of my mind when I read

" Carnal And Divine!" " Peak Experience"

"All consuming!" " Need and Passion"

Asad straddling! ☺️

Gosh so much described and so little done! I wanted a dry hump🤣

Ok I am JK! I can't ask you for smut ! Or maybe I can 😉