AsYa FF| ~Woh Actually Thread 3 ~ part 19 on page 112

jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#411

awesome story⭐️

d 1st part of Zoya's phone convo's was fantastic👏

they r stuck in d middle of nowhere😲

& Zoya asked wrong qstn now Asad will b angry or back 2 his shell

will we get revelations from both sides in nxt part😉

continue soon😃

holidays khatam toh updt chalu karo😆

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jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Arpita_Mirage

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Posted: 11 years ago

#413

it was awesome...
you are doing a gr8 job...

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sandjanarai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#414

Love the asya romance soo Nice
I must say you are a Born writer
Everything you have written so good
I like it
Update soon
Hope that they will confess their feelings soon
Pm me if is possible thank you

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jazsidhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#415

Wonderfull n fabulous...
luv it...
asad spent a day as a wedding planner with zoya amazing...
thrir car get spoil n they are in the jungle togethet...
really hoping they will confess about their feeling n put their past behind...
beautifully written...
ur a fabulous writter...
eagerly waiting fr the next part...
thx fr the pm n do pm me the next part...

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SimplySmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#416

I like that you can write well instead of just some choppy messed up words, and the characters thoughts and feelings all are very realistic as suppose to the whole saw them for the first time and BAM they are in love,

The one thing I do not like about the update is the whole car breaking down, don't take it personally I just think that the concept has been overused, in shows, in movies and now in writing, maybe you could have put them in a different situation but I guess it had to be done to move the story further,

Anyways nice update,

Update when you get the time

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