AsYa FF Our Lives Entwined - Thread 10 - Chapter 33 Updated 7th April

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#591

Bubble.. let me tell you.. that the thought of reading next part as last part is making me sad.. This was a verry very cute story.. 😭

Coming to the update.. Liked the initial scene of old lady pulling Asad's cheeks.. reminded me of the old QH days...😊

Ayaan seeking attention from the girls and the few lines of conversation was 🤣

So Ayaan did notice Zoya jumping from Window and telling them that he will ensure that even the windows are locked... 🤣 Poor Zoya was scared because of this.. aww.. and Asad would have missed her so badly.. 😊

OMG.. Typical Asad.. mentioning that he will go bankrupt if he keeps fullfilling her demands and my my did he count the number of gifts he gave her ??

The little conversation about not letting go each other under any circumstances was so adorable and honest..

Poor Asad.. is still waiting for confession from her side.. crazy Khan.. 😊

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snehasya

@snehasya

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#592

As much as I want to read further the thought, of end to this lovely journey breaks my Heart please continue for one or two episodes more I just love reading your updates and hate to say bye to your stories I loved y asad zoya their love and my love for them only increases thanks for pm love youxome up with more new stories with lots of cliffy 😉

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Divya

@divya_asya

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#593

Hayee it was so beautiful...

Haha dat aunty and Ayaan was hilarious...

Aww he is taking her to Paris...

I thought dey vl meet at nyt but Ayaan 😡

loved d dori scene ;)

Continue soon and thanks for pm

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rockstar_16

@rockstar_16

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#594

it was lovely

awesome update

do update soon😉

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#595

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

I love giving surprises LoL
Thanks ,,
I am honored that you liked it (:
haha even I want to pull his cheeks but he is not here with me *sighs*
haha yah I thought atleast Ayaan should know that money is gone wasted a lil bit LoL
It means alot to me ,,
LoL yah it was romantic ,,
Yup next is last :(

y did u updtd ystrdy bubble...
U knw.. Wht hppnd wth me in dis mrng..
Mom tried to wkup me whn was in deep sleep..
she strtd shout at me...
Aaj Tuesday hai.. Aaj tho aaj tho jaldi utt ja..
Thn i was like.. R u kidding me it's Wednesday tdy..
Mama said.. No it's Tuesday tdy..
Thn was like how is it possible.. Bubble updtd her ff ystrdy..
Tho aaj Wednesday hui na
😕
hmph.. she glared at me nd chaligayi
😆

Edited by gowtu - 11 years ago

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#596

Originally posted by: khadupam
it was an amazing thing to read the two parts together
sorry for not comeenting for the be4 part as I was buzzy in my xamz
anyways awesome wonderful great
plzz doo update soon
n can I know when is ur last update would be????

Thanks ,,

I am glad that you liked it (:

its ok concentrate on ur exams ,,

Will try updating sooon !

maybe on friday or saturday not sure yet (:

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#597

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish
Bubble.. let me tell you.. that the thought of reading next part as last part is making me sad.. This was a verry very cute story.. 😭
Coming to the update.. Liked the initial scene of old lady pulling Asad's cheeks.. reminded me of the old QH days...😊

Ayaan seeking attention from the girls and the few lines of conversation was 🤣

So Ayaan did notice Zoya jumping from Window and telling them that he will ensure that even the windows are locked... 🤣 Poor Zoya was scared because of this.. aww.. and Asad would have missed her so badly.. 😊

OMG.. Typical Asad.. mentioning that he will go bankrupt if he keeps fullfilling her demands and my my did he count the number of gifts he gave her ??

The little conversation about not letting go each other under any circumstances was so adorable and honest..

Poor Asad.. is still waiting for confession from her side.. crazy Khan.. 😊

Even I am not able to write it as I know I am gonna write last time for this FF and its making me sad

haha thanks ,,

was just trying to add some bromance before ending it as readers asked for it 😳

haha yah I told u already that don't underestimate my Ayaan ,,

he is very possessive about his Bhaijaan 😆

LoL I tried to count but I couldn't remember some gifts soo couldn't mention it 😛😆

Thanks ,,

I am honored that you liked it 😃

Yah it was getting too long soo thought to add it in next part 😉

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#598

Originally posted by: snehasya
As much as I want to read further the thought, of end to this lovely journey breaks my Heart please continue for one or two episodes more I just love reading your updates and hate to say bye to your stories I loved y asad zoya their love and my love for them only increases thanks for pm love youxome up with more new stories with lots of cliffy 😉

Thanks Sneha ,,

I am glad that you liked it (:

Even its making me sad too thats why I am not able to write even ,,

I will try but right now I have nothing in mind if I continue it for one more :(

haha I guess I am not gonna continue writing FFs ,,

lets see !

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#599

Originally posted by: divya_asya
Hayee it was so beautiful...
Haha dat aunty and Ayaan was hilarious...
Aww he is taking her to Paris...
I thought dey vl meet at nyt but Ayaan 😡
loved d dori scene ;)
Continue soon and thanks for pm

Thanks Divya ,,

I am honored that you liked it (:

haha Ayaan is quite possessive about Asad I guess LoL

Will try updating sooon !