In Love and War ll_Pt 17, Pg 115_Link to #3 (15/04/14)

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#371

where is justice when he just with his pants and tanveer with towel. .. is okay. .. zoya must believe
him... not fair

i hate asad now... and tanveer dream coming true

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Tamara27

@Tamara27

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Posted: 11 years ago

#372

Originally posted by: -ARLover-
Tamara, please tell me everything is gonna be fine and these two will wake up and realise their feelings? I need to hear something good before going off to study. Exam day after :(

Don't you trust me?

Of course it will be ok.

Now go study hun!

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kanika

@kank_dah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#373

I would have liked asad to show some trust on zoya.continue soon

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annanya

@annanyaksgian

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Posted: 11 years ago

#374

oh no

not on their nikah day

plzz clear the confusion

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treasure11

@treasure11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#375

hawww...I nvr expected something likee thiss 😲

omg this has become so complicatedd!!!!

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jasminerose

@jasminerose

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#376

Lack of communication is always the reason for misunderstandings. I guess they will learn their lessons now. Quite a turn of events when something else was expected😉

Hope things clear out soon.😊

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Ishaqzaadi

@Ishaqzaadi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#377

OMG NOOO:| what just happened.
Asad was a right jerk there for not letting her explain :(
Really didn't expect that 😭 hope things are cleared soon..

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#378

Happy starting & depressing end
Plz clear their misunderstanding soon
Thanks for pm

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DancingBell

@DancingBell

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Posted: 11 years ago

#379

I did'nt expect this to come...,,I am so sad...

Y r they going behind Tanveer...

Will it create misunderstanding btwn Asya...I am doubting as if there is no misunderstanding nw...,

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Young And Horny!

@Perfectionist2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#380

Dear Tamara!

I loved this update! So unlike me! I don't do heart breaks well but because the title of this story reads LOVE N WAR! I was hoping something on those lines.

Initially when Zoya finds Tanveer seminude in Asad's room. I thought she would just ditch him and his party and form her own or Join another.

Thus, Asad feels betrayed and Zoya is heart broken- hence Love& War bits.

Am I even making sense- anyways!

So when that didn't happen and it turned all things lovey dovey marshmellowey!

I was like childish bickering was War?😕

Then this spin of events - Very impressive I must say. Crucial timing! After he was married to her I would have hoped he gave her a chance to explain first before man handling her to his bedroom floor.

Asad better wear his groin guard ( like the cricketer's wear to protect their balls from impact injury) if he comes anywhere close to my Zoya!

Now I have to rile you with this thought - you know sometime in the past we had this conversation that Woman forgive easily, they tie a relationship together. I am just this evil bitter person who thinks We are forced to think on those lines from the tall tales our ancestors wove for us claiming Woman to be Goddess Forgive All things Douche Bag! Or are we just insecure nincompoops who stay with our man because he pays bills and makes life a little easy. We are too scared to survive on our own.

I would definitely tell woman that yes, you forgive but just once. The second time if a man jerks off on you, he will continue to do so for the rest of your life.

Too Harsh! Oh well! I told you I am riling you up.

Can I get a Zoya who has some dignity, who fights back, who is insulted by the thought that he didn't trust her, at least in one update. I loved this powerful Zoya in this FF. I hope she is not reduced to another better half. I want Asad to be her Half.😉

Love

Juliet!