2#Tumhe Pyaar Kab Tak Na Karenge Bhala :AsYa FF(Ch6-10|#3Link pg1)

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#931

res res res res

Another quick unres!! Yaayyy meee!!! Maaan, I keep breaking my records don't I😆??

Anyhoo...

Kyun aapu tujhe tere chapters pasand nahi aate?? Haayeee main toh iss waale pe fida ho gayi ❤️☺️

Aur tu kinni achhi likhti hai yaar!! Seriously, itne saare adjectives aur descriptions toh main 10 janam tak na likh paaun! Hats off!!! 👏⭐️.

I am totally in LAAOOOUUU with this chapter, haayyeee!!!!

The best parts:

Asad completes Zoya's sentence for her😳😳

Asad visits dreamland as he witnesses his Sapnon ki Raaniii ❤️

Then the kaajal ka kaala teeka... haayee Asad miyan Zoya raani ko aapki nazar na lag jaayee itna romance karoge toh😆❤️

They go to a function as man and wife And looks like Zoya has come a long way from her earlier self now. She enjoys her status as his wife and even gets his name written on her palms. So it looks like she has probably realized 'it' now ❤️

Haseena ke saamne thodi thodi PDA Ayyyeee Haayyeee ❤️🤣

(BTW her reaction with the drink and the pauta comment 🤣 )

Mehendi ☺️

Khaana khilaaoing... haayeee kya romance hai

And then he kissed her hands ❤️

AND THEN THE EPIC FALL ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Haaayyyeee main marjawa gud, chini, dairy milk silk, ice cream khaaakkeeeyy

Beta Zoya, tu toh gaayyiii 😆😆

The way you described Asad's eyes... beautiful 👏 Zoya beta... tu bilkul doob gaayii ❤️

I LOVED THIS 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

P.S: If you ever DARE to say that you suck in writing romantic scenes, I swear that I WILL kill you😡

Because this was so AWEFREAKINTASTICALLY romantic ☺️

P.P.S: Laaabhh youuu 🤗 🤗 🤗

Edited by Madame_Noddy - 11 years ago

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Amulya

@Amulya9

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#932

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awesome update Ankie... loved it alottt...
Zoya wants 2 go fr wedding n asad read her mind.. he's so smart 😎
this is first thing wife wants in her hubby ...read her mind n fullfill it
kajal teeka ... 😳 ..I think he's nt emotionally challenged.. its Zoe who's is emotionally challenged in ur story
he adjusted her fleets.. awww...
hasina ka description 😆
asad miya PDA before hasina.. nt bad..I'm so happy with this... show me toh she tortured my asad..
I loved that mehendi song...
he feeded her... 😳 awwie he's so sweet
they r back 2 home

he kissed her palms..I think thisz d first kiss
so Zoe wants a gift...
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yayy v got ASYA first fall...BT they didn't kissed 😭 .
n present walla scene is soo cute .. so he saw her hands n flashback me Chala gaya
I just hope ki my comment satisfies u. I'm nt gud at commenting
continue soon ...

Edited by Amulya9 - 11 years ago

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#933

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tht was awesomly awesome prt ankie..

I loved it..
Full on asya wala updt..

She wants to go to the nikhaah nd he reader her mind..
The kajal k teeka wala pry was so lvly yaar..
Beautifully written..
Awesome song tht was..

Awww he her pleets..
So sweet he is..

Lol haseena k band bajhgayi :p

heena prt was awesome..
Aakho aakhon mein ishare ho rahe the..

Nd the small intimate scene was gud..

Totally loved it..
Continue sooon..

Edited by gowtu - 11 years ago

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#934

beautiful updt👏

loved it⭐️

Edited by jas91 - 11 years ago

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#935

baby aap keh dete hum aapke pages 150 kar dete ...u cud ve updated on new thread

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#936

waise hw much i luvd d update ...i told u on wa ...yahan pe phir se bataun 😳

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#937

Originally posted by: sona_naksh
baby aap keh dete hum aapke pages 150 kar dete ...u cud ve updated on new thread

i know na dee, but 16 pages (x 8 comments) is not a matter of joke 😆 so let it be 😆

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antiquegold

@antiquegold

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#938

Ankie sweetheart!

Btw, exams are coming soon! Aapka, mera, mere bacchon ka, but dil hai ki maanta nahin!

And so I get to read the beautiful, long, detailed, lyrical update. I love your different types of verbs!

And somewhere, Zoya gets to actually see Asad Ahmed Khan! Zoyaaa tu toh gayyaaa!

They go out as man and wife. She enjoys herself, her status as his wife, and asks for his name to be wriiten in her hands. He is sweet as always, and his care makes her mehendi blood red!

Ankie you take me back to the good old days of qh 1! When Asya were fresh and sweet and made us fall headlong in love.

Lots of hugs!

Your oldest fan!

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#939

Originally posted by: Oldestfan
Ankie sweetheart!
Btw, exams are coming soon! Aapka, mera, mere bacchon ka, but dil hai ki maanta nahin!

And so I get to read the beautiful, long, detailed, lyrical update. I love your different types of verbs!
And somewhere, Zoya gets to actually see Asad Ahmed Khan! Zoyaaa tu toh gayyaaa!

They go out as man and wife. She enjoys herself, her status as his wife, and asks for his name to be wriiten in her hands. He is sweet as always, and his care makes her mehendi blood red!

Ankie you take me back to the good old days of qh 1! When Asya were fresh and sweet and made us fall headlong in love.

Lots of hugs!

Your oldest fan!

25 days Left... 😆 next one will be the last before I take sanyas 😆 promise 😆

the fire has been ignited.. lets see if it can take to a full confession before its too late 😆 😆 THANK YOU Dii <3 <3 I always look forward to your comments, as they are one of the most honest comments I receive. 😳

Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 11 years ago