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Posted: 11 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: pyaarasateddy

thank u
did u read the note at the start 😳



yeah i did but i didn't spotted my name...
thanks a lot for dedication...m so glad ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover



yeah i did but i didn't spotted my name...
thanks a lot for dedication...m so glad ❤️

it's ok
but when will u update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: pyaarasateddy

it's ok
but when will u update



😃
i am planning to update POL and my zaya FF
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover



😃
i am planning to update POL and my zaya FF

ok me waiting 😆 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
hay I am new here&I just read all 8 chapters on onego.
Well I must say It was Awsome.

what Asad did to Zoya is unforgivable but our love make us forgive how big won't be the mistake.
Asad realazie his mistake but it was too late.
(there is a saying: its better to be late than never)

I would like to get the PMs&I've send a add request.
Hope u'll accept it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
Nice story
Read prologue but missed it later
Thanks Aroo for sending me pm for this story
Asad hurt zoya & realised his mistake. 15 yrs passed, did he not tried to find out
Zoya & her two kids
Armaan told everything to chahat
Precap: interesting
Continue soon plz
Do pm me
Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
thanks aroo for supporting me and promoting my story
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Posted: 11 years ago
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RECAP : HE CAME BACK TO PRESENT WITH THE RING OF HIS CELL PHONE .

AFTER SPEAKING ON PHONE HE WENT TO GET FRESHED AND CAME TO HALL FOR DINNER SUDDENLY A BOY CALLS HIM ...

ABBU...

CHAPTER 9

SCENE SHIFTS TO CANADA:

AMMI , CHAHAT , AAP DONO READY HUE KI NAHi Shouts armaan at the top of his voice.

Haan aa rahe hai .BOTH OF THEM SHOUT AT THE SAME TIME.

YA ALLAH INN DONO KO KITNA TIME LAGTA HAI READY HONE MAIN ...armaan murmurs annoyingly.

KYA KHUSUR - PHUSUR KAR RAHE HO APNE AAP MAIN...asks zoya.

KUCH NAHI AMMI ... say s armaan .

ACHHA VAISE CHAHAT KAHA HAI ...asks armaan.

BEFORE ZOYA COULD ANSWER A VOICE INTERRUPTS HER

MAIN YAHA HUN BHAIJAAN ...said chahat coming down.

HUH...sighs armaan in relief .

FINALLY MOHTARMA KO TIME MIL GAYA , AB AGAR TAIYAAR HO TOH CHALE , BECAUSE IF YOU FORGOT WE HAVE A TRAIN TO CATCH...said armaan.

HAWW BHAIJAAN ,AAPKO KYA LAGTA HAI ,KI MAIN JYADA TIME LETI HUN TAIYAAR HONE MAIN...said chahat showing fake anger .

NAHI BABA TUM BILKUL TIME NAHI LETI HO...AB CHALE HUME LATE HO RAHA HAI...asks armaan.

HAAN -HAAN CHALO BAHUT HOGAYI MASTI- MAZAAK,, HUME LATE HO RAHA HAI...saying this the three of them left to airport ...

A FEW HOURS LATER :

WOW...THIS IS BEAUTIFUL ..says chahat in amazement as she sees BHOPAl .

BHAIJAAN ...THANK U...says chahat while hugging her brother..

THANK U KIS LIYE CHAHAT...asks armaan getting confused.

MUJHE YAHA LANE KE LIYE...says chahat.

HAT PAGLI ..AGAR AGLE TIME INN CHOTTI -CHOTTI BATO KE LIYE THANK U BOLA NA TOH MAIN TUJHE MARUNGA...says armaan showing fake anger.

OK BHAIJAAN... Says chahat.😊

AGAR DONO BHAI-BEHEN KA MEL - MILAP HO GAYA HO TOH CHALEIN...says zoya.

HAAN AMMI ...both brother-sister duo say at the same time ..

THE THREE OF THEM LEAVE FOR HOTEL

SCENE SHIFTS TO ASAD'S HOUSE :

A 20 YEAR BOY COMES TO ASAD.

ABBU ,AAP AAGAYE , AAJ ITNA LATE KAISE HOGAYA.

WHO OFFICE MAIN KUCH ZYAADA KAAM THA AAJ ...says asad not looking into his son's eye.

OHH,ACCHA KOI BAAT NAHI . VOH ABBU AAJ HUME HOTEL ROYAL JANA THA ABBU ,AAPKOP YAAD TOH HAI NA ...asks the boy .

HOTEL ROYAL ? LEKIN KISLIYE REHAAN...asks asad.

KYAA ABBU ,AAP BHI NAA ,AAP BHUL GAYE WOH MEHTA'S KE SAATH DEAL HAI NA HUMARI HOTEL ROYAL MEIN...says rehaan.

OHH ,SORRY SORRY MAIN BHUL GAYA THA TUM CHALO MAIN READY HOKE AATA HUN...says asad.

OK ABBU ...saying so rehaan left.

LOCATION : HOTEL ROYAL

FROM ONE SIDE ASAD ENTERS ..

AT THE SAME TIME CHAHAT COMES OUT EATING AN ICE-CREAM LIKE A SMALL...SHE DOESN'T SEES WHERE SHE IS GOING AND SUDDENLY BUMPS INTO ASAD WHO WAS TALKING ON HIS PHONE...

HER ICE-CREAM FALLS DOWN...SO SHE GETS ANGRY AND SHOUTS..

ALLAH MIYAN WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU ...

ASAD STARES AT HER.

SHE REMINDS HIM OF ZOYA .

HE GETS AN UNKNOWN FEELING FOR THIS GIRL AS IF HE KNOWS HER FROM LONG TIME .

HE COMES OUT OF HIS THOUGHT BY THE SAME VOICE.

EXCUSE ME ... AAP ANDHE HAI KYA ...YAHA MERI ICE-CREAM GIR GAYI AUR AAP SMILE KIYE JAA RAHE.

AAPKO PATA HAI AGAR MAIN APNE BHAIJAAN KO BULAUNGI NA TOH WHO AAPKO CHODENGE NAHI.

WHO SUNIYE I AM REALLY SORRY BETA MERE KAARAN AAPKI ICE-CREAM GIR GAYI BUT AAPKE KAARAN MERA BHI NUKSAAN HUA HAI ...MUJHE MEETING KE LIYE LATE HO GAYI PLUS MERA SUIT BHI KHARAAB HOGAYA...says asad gritting his teeth.

HAWW EK TOH AAPNE MERI ICE-CREAM GIRA DI AUR UPARSE AAP MUJHPE CHILAA RAHE HAI ...RUKIYE MAIN ABHI APNE BHAIJAAN KO BULATI HOON...saying so chahat calls armaan .

PRECAP : ARMAAN AND ZOYA GET SHOCK SEEING ASAD.WHEREAS ASAD IS EQUALLY SHOCKED SEEING THEM.

Phew...

This Chapter was more long and quick compared to the last one...

I AM TRYING TO GIVE LONG UPDATES ...

SO NOW IT'S YOUR DUTY TO LIKE AND COMMENT.

IT'S MY SINCERE REQUEST ...

FOR PM'S BUDDY ME .😊

Edited by pyaarasateddy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
hmmm gud 1...
precap is awsmmm... thnks for pm dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Grt part
precap is exciting
thanx for pm

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