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kalyani

@kals82

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Posted: 11 years ago

#371

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--
It was short :(
but beautiful as always ,,
I loved Dilshad-Zoya's scene <3
and she slept with him ,,
that was soo cute (:
waiting for more soo update sooon !!

thanks iqra,

i know it was short.. wrote it 45 min😉

people wanted some lovey dovey scenes in between emotions..so

will try tomorrow

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kalyani

@kals82

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Posted: 11 years ago

#372

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA
Lovely update. Loved the dilshad zoya scene. Its so beautiful. Their bond is the best MIL-DIL bond. Wow asad slept with zoya and zoya put her head on asad's chest. Thats so cute. Love the asya moments. Its so sweet one. Waiting for more. Update soon ❤️ RAJ

hai raj,

thank you for ur sweet comments

will try for tomorrow... 2 story at one time is time consuming buddy...

what are u studying now

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kalyani

@kals82

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#373

Originally posted by: shishiksg
awesme yaar kalyani
loved all ur parts of this ff
u write beautifully
so emotional but so much depth into each relation n characters
update soon

thank you shishi, for your ur lovely comments.

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kalyani

@kals82

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#374

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-
yes a beautiful bond indeed!!!

me too loved seeing zoya, dilshad n najma in a frame!!

so adorable khan villa was!!

ur stories...makes me miss them more...

continue soon

hai ,

hope u got some lovely moments u asked for,,,

thank you for the sweet comments

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kalyani

@kals82

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Posted: 11 years ago

#375

Originally posted by: princess101
amazing update so cute
thanx for the pm
update soon

thank you for your sweet comments

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kalyani

@kals82

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#376

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-
Loved the Dils Zoya bond! Beautiful scene!
Continue soon!

- Mrina <3

hai mrina,

thank u for your sweet comments...

Edited by kals82 - 11 years ago

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kalyani

@kals82

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#377

Originally posted by: anopama
Nice update
Oh asad so much love for zoya thank Allah for giving you this angel as your life partner
He reminisce on how they got their and how his world revolves around her now
Oh he slept in the bed and comfort her
Dilshad wants to know what is going on who r they mourning for
Oh she went to comfort zoya and fed her own hands
A prayer for her ammi and now she got the love of 2 more ammi too
Zoya ready to go with asad she needs to know
Continue soon

hai anopama,

thank u for such a long and lovely comments...

happy to know that you like this story so much...

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kalyani

@kals82

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#378

Originally posted by: ImmortalLove
Awesome story dear
Read it in a go

The way u written this story i really wished ki aisa serial mein hota..

Zoya found the truth of tht skeleton .. Tht she is her ammi..

And in all this asad was with him

Nicely written..

Loved dil and zoya bonding..
Zoya dont want to hurt dilshad thts why hiding everything from her.. Poor zoya

And asya kiss 😳 and zoya showing him the mark.. Is so funny..😆

Continue soon

And do PM me

😃

hai reema

thank you for the lovely comments...

this story is my version of Qh.. which i longed to see..

my first imagination of Qh too...

happy u r enjoying the story...

will pm u for sure...

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kalyani

@kals82

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#379

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra
Part 3

Thnk u dee fr resuming this story

N m sry fr late comment

M in love wid dis part.

Hottie...😆

Bechare asad zoya felt so much embasssed ...

Asad tried to mk sense of the incidents happened...

Precap..asad zoua kiss☺️

Off to nxt chappi

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra
Part 4
I was dying to read a sequence..whr zoya had a nightmare..n only vl b thr to ease up..

Thnk u so much fr creating this scene

Asad marked him☺️

Slowly n steady their relation grow up..

Very nice chappi dee

Love

shreya

Off to nxt chappi

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra
Part 5

Zoya guessed that her mom is burnt in factory..

Asad ease her up on scar issue..

I love the story so far...

Mrng scene was so adorable

Off to nxt chappi

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra
Part 6
Very emotional update

DNA results wre out..

She find her mom..

Asad performed all rituals as son in Law...

U peened down these emotions very beautifully

hai dear,

thank you for all your lovely comments,,, shreya...

looking forward to hear the rest...😉😉

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kalyani

@kals82

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#380

Originally posted by: aarzoo50
lovely update...
asya bonding dikhane k baad this dilshaad zoya bond was awesome...
they have the cutest relationship between them along with the care n love also present...
glad that dilshaad gave the space n tym to zoya...

thanks aarzoo,

nice to knwo u liked the daughter- mom bonding too.