SS: Something Anything - Note on pg 137 (14/9) - Page 74

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

Greenji why are you torturing us. Please , kab Asad kuch bolega???? You make me feel like what Zoya feels when Asad doesn't say anything...

Please buddy I want a longer update next time. Please Please Please.

And please make him confess.

Now about the update, it was good as usual. Loved the way they stand close for the photograph n the way he glides his hands on hers.

When she jumps away due to the vibration was hilarious n his response 'Relax its my phone.'

Just too good.

Thanks for updating even after a busy schedule. Loved the update.

Originally posted by: shreya_rc

GoingGreen !!

cant believe u r still here...still weaving fantastic tales and look, you are actually glowing green now !

I left QH forum after the khan family forced by dilshad left their home to fight their haq over a hapless husband and a evil-ghosts haunted haveli...i had enough and moved to a greener pasture 😆...Do u remember me? [of course not...wat a silly question ] I was a silent reader on QH forum and usually badgered u with pms...and later posted comments on ''through the monsoon''. Now I heard , they r taking leaps, and thought of visiting the forum to catch other members' responses.all my old friends have left and rambling aimlessly.. i came up finding ur amazing SS ! u are fantastic as always green...and I am so happy to read your well sculpted characters with their quiddity ...they felt like fond memories of a distant past...when i used to adore for their cuteness, silliness , obstinacy, their passion for each other and finding odd ways to fight againt that urge...and for each and every foibles that itched my fingers to pull their cheeks for being oh so human !!

Thank God I visited the forum and got the change of falling in love once again...with ur amazing,hypnotizing narration !

Hugs !

Shreya Rc

Originally posted by: Az07

I always used to be a silent reader but now I feel I should give a comment.

I always like your stories, especially through the monsoon & yes boss.

Now loving this also.

I really wanted to see asad going after zoya to New York in QH but it never happened. Thanks to you for bringing this wonderful story.

I loved each part of the update. Especially photo session. My god zoya farroqui who can do anything in the world is affected by asad's touch & she can't take a photo also because of his touch. Loved the way asad took there pictures.

I guess Prasad helped him to get a ticket & visa to New York.

Tanveer here also. I loved the way zoya got angry when asad asked to wait so that he could talk to his tanu, great going girl. In show they always showed as a shameless mahan, just show some attitude. I really loved when she ask him to go away. Continue soon.

One personal question you have excellent timing & comic sense are you in writing profession or in teaching profession?

I am sorry but I didn't understand your note at first

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Ikr.. 😆 CV's meri baat to maante hi hain! 😆 Qubool Hai is so ruined and is complete crap now! 😛 Anyways.. glad to have you back and I'm off to read chapter 4 now! 😳

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Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Yay! You're back with Part 5!

"Aapko... aapko mere saath photo lena hai? Theek hai, I mean, sure. Abhi le lete hai, laayiye," Zoya replied after a momentary pause, too taken aback to even come up with a snarky response. Asad finally relaxed, allowing his arm to lower and pass the iPad to Zoya. Zoya flipped open the cover and fiddled with the lock screen, before looking for the camera tool.

HAHAHAHAHA... Poor Zoya is flabbergasted with ASad's request! 🤣

"How did you manage to unlock it with doing that ridiculous dance?" Asad asked incredulously, as Zoya started changing the settings to flip it to the front camera. A small smile grew on Zoya's face, the slightest hint of her dimple beginning to form.

"Obviously I've kept another secret but more normal way of unlocking the iPad, for the purposes of unlocking it in public. I'm not crazy enough to be okay with looking like a fool in public," Zoya grinned, making Asad groan as he thought about how stupid he must've looked in the cab.

"Now don't ask me how I keep the option of setting double passwords. You've got to be as intelligent as me to understand that. For now, woh sab chodiye, aur idhar aayiye. Let's take a selfie!" Zoya taunted backhandedly, before telling him to come close as she held her iPad up in front of her with both her hands.

Oh my god! I so loved this conversation! Mr. Technologically Challenged Ahmed Khan! 🤣 🤣 I'm loving this story so much Greeny! 😳

Itne saare selfies ka kya karna chahte hain aap Mr. Khan? 😉

Wondering what he spoke to Prasad about... 😕 And then Tanu too? 😡 That too infront of Zoya! 😡 OH GOD! Zoya would be super annoyed!

"Toh main kya keh raha tha?" Asad asked awkwardly, and Zoya hissed at him in irritation. She pulled her arm entirely out his grip, shuffling her passport and ticket in her hands as she bit her lower lip, controlling the tears from falling out of her eyes.

"Kuch bhi nahi. You weren't saying ANYTHING, at least not to me. Jo bhi baat karni thi, mujhe lagta hai aap Tanu darling se kar chuke. Goodbye Mr Khan," Zoya said with finality this time, passing her passport and ticket to the officer before Asad could stop her again. Thanking the officer, she took her passport and ticket back, marching into the airport confidently, using all of her willpower not to look back.

Ya Allah! Allah miya what's wrong with this man? Finally Zoya has walked into the airport! 😃 NOW WHAT?????????? 😲 Finally she will be off to New York and Asad will follow her! 😳

Continue soon...

Love and hugs, ❤️ 🤗

Mrina

Originally posted by: sarbrathan

If that was the end, I would have bombarded you with pms until you gave a happier ending! AsYa just died, we don't need more negativity.

Originally posted by: MissReadingFaye

res

I have just read the first 3 parts in one go beete dino ki yaad dilaadi

I feel all nostalgic and will read the remainder now.

This is amazing I have always loved your writing but I am one of those silent readers ☺️

Your writing just flows off the page and touches the heart ❤️

I will unres when I complete reading the rest.

Love Fatima aka Ambreen.

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

Vaishu soo gayi kya 😆😆

Originally posted by: yumna.imad

hey... yumna here.. ur ss is amazing loved it... update soon...

n pm me 😊

Originally posted by: sharan90

very nice work:)

plz update soon...