Originally posted by: anushreemishra
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Heya Green I am finally here...Sorry for the delay but I hope this comment could make it up for that😳😳
The moment I heard that you were starting a new story I can't tell you how happy I was😳😳I thought after Yes Boss there still a story connecting us...Not that we need anything material to connect us now but I think your stories have played a very vital role in bringing us together and so nothing could make me happier than the fact that i could still comment and enjoy another of your stories...and the fact that this story is based on Zoya's visa issues and her going back is the icing on the cake...I loved this track in the show and I can't wait to read your version of it😳😳I am sure you will make me laugh and smile enough to hurt my face😆😆😆
Anyways enough of my drama,let's talk about the update now😃
She slung her backpack over her shoulder and tapped her own cheek lightly, forcing herself to wipe the smile off her face, as she walked out of room in what she hoped seemed like a reluctant and dejected way.
The video of Asad asking Zoya not to go back to NY has to be one of my favourites scenes of the show and man the opening line reminding me of that scene is just the perfect start...
I love how Zoya taps her cheeks when she devices her plan...reminds me of a few scenes in QH and man surbhi looks so cute in those scenes😳😳
"Do you want to say anything before I leave Mr Khan?" Zoya asked directly, making his arms drop in shock as she quickly moved her hand away.
I love the fact that you showed Zoya dierectly Asad asking if he wanted to say something before she went away...I love you showed her strightforward here😳
"Ji, mujhe lagta hai Mahendra Singh Dhoni bhi apne problems coin toss se hi solve karte honge. Isliye, heads I'll stay, and tails I'll leave... theek hai?" Zoya explained, as she stuffed two fingers into the front pocket of her jeans, and pulled out a coin.
Haha the coin toss scene...Damn it girl you are reminding me of the good old QH days..The ones which brought a 440 watt smile to my face...You have an amazing talent to recreate memories in a beautiful way😳
I loved this scene...It was beautiful and Asad praying for heads was so endearing😳
"That's tails Jammy," Tanveer blurted out, the words escaping her mouth before she could even stop them. Asad snapped his head up at Tanveer in shock, beginning to close his palm immediately, but Zoya had already zipped to him, holding his index and middle finger down as she peered into his palm. She looked up at him, wide-eyed.
Haha I am so happy that Tanveer blurted out that it was tails in your version...I so wanted that to happen in QH too...I really wanted everyone to know that Asad could lie to get zoya to stay😳
Haha didn't Asad just melt in those wide eyes of zoya...I love when she talks with those beautiful eyes of her😳😳
"Ji, woh, Miss Farooqui... I mean Miss Farooqui kitni absentminded hai, I'm just going to go there to make sure she reaches the airport safely. Driver, chalo," Asad fumbled out an explanation,
OOh so Asad is going to drop zoya off at the airport..Man i can't wait to see what you have in store for us at the airport if they do manage to reach there...Coz QH gave us an amazing airport engagement scene I hope you wow us with what you have planned next😉😉
The smile turned into a huge grin as she turned around and walked back into the now Zoya-free house, wondering why a strange cat-like noise sounded in the background, but decided that she quite liked it anyway.
HAHAHAHA🤣🤣🤣I couldn't stop ROFLing after reading these lines..One of the most hilarious lines you have written so far and man I played that cat tune in my mind and imagined tanveer and i literally fell off my couch laughing😆
These lines were truly the highlight of the update for me😆😆
A great start GReen and I can't wait to read the next part(I know it has been updated and i will try to read and comment asap)...
I loved your 133 likes and 33 pages thing and I am sorry I won't be able to spam you but I will always be here to leave my comments😳😳
LOve ya loads Green❤️❤️❤️