FS - Dont Like Her!Final Part-Page98 - Page 32

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Hope u r feeling well now
Take care ur self
Continue when u feel better
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

Asad is an asshole! 😡😡

Yes I don't like him! *smirk*

Asad miya you better make up to it or else Zoya and me won't be happy

We are watching you Asad!

Originally posted by: urvisaini

hey dear

I hope you are recovering soon

I gotta small request for you

since I love this fiercy zoya

can you plan a bachelorette party for her

only girls and their dirty talks

and asad somehow gets to hear all of it

pls pls pls its a wild thought and I think you are write it up really well

think about it pls...

Originally posted by: -Vaishnavi-

i just love all your works 😊

The way you describe asad situation is just so awesome 😆

do continue soon

p.s. I am in love with this TS 😳

Originally posted by: ...KSGmiAmor...

I don't like u 😉

Dont think abt the likes

Do it for me

please please pretty please ...

cuz if u dont update soon

i think i might die out of curiosity

and i am damn sure u don't want the blame on your hands 😉

Originally posted by: -Anitha-

Hi butterful 🤗
Im really sorry for being late in commenting. I was lil busy these day so i couldn't have time to read.. - No Problem! Personal Life Comes First.
To be honest im so happy that finally i got the time to read this fabulous TS. 🥳
I must say that u r an awesome writer who never fails to amaze us 👍🏼
I read these two parts in one go..omg omg - You are funny and Kind.
Oh my god - i was like aww wat next wat next😆
loved the u wrote asad pov..❤️ I know right! I am thinking like a man these days😛
His continuous chant😆 - uff -'' I DON'T LIKE HER''
I Think its his time to had his own medicine😆 - OH HE WILL!
Aww- I don't like u was his early morng sermon every single day😆
Tanveer😡 uff & eww🤢
Such an cute party scene😳 their kiss ☺️ - 1st kiss ☺️
Loved rain scene & also that slap..😳
Well deserved slap from zoya - aww - I LOVE FIESTY ZOYA!!!
I don't like you but I don't like to be ignored" - really awesome line from asad❤️
what i loved the most is - poor asad 😆 - whenever he dip his head - zoya's face flashes accross, her voice& imaginary slap echoing down his memory lane😆
Tibet - was really 🤣🤣 HAHA! I TRY TO MAKE IT FUNNY! ALWAYS!!!
Each & every line was simply perfect butterfly.. 👍🏼 - THANK YOU FOR BEING SO KIND
Asya hug & his guilt scene was lovely😳
Allah miya wats wrong with u asad miyaa😆 Still u dont like her
Asad plz dont be emotionally challenged any more dear. It ur time to confess yaar.
Its not infatuation or lust - its called pyaar/love blah blah..❤️ - HAHA!
Asad was already felt jealous when he saw her with farhaan & imraan😆
Now new entry zafar - asad is going to have tough time...😃 bechara😆 - LETS SEE!!!
Take care of urself dear butterfly...
Plz get well soon.. 🤗
Consult doctor properly for sinusitis... Thanks SO so so much ANI, for being a sweetheart and taking time to post such a lovely comment.
Ani❤️

Originally posted by: A.Kh_20

juliet how do u know about mayawati??

I am 😲 u used her!!

🤣 🤣

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

Juliet I don't know where should I start from

This is really adorable ad cute ,,

read both parts in one go and I want 3rd one now ,,

I love it sooo mucchh ! 😳❤️

Their whole journey is soo beautifully written ,,

its wow !

In Asad's words 'I don't like this FF at all' 😆

u know wat that means right ??

now plzz update sooon !

I am eagerly waiting to read more and more of it 😉

Originally posted by: krati5

🤣 so so hilarious... & gave a new meaning to visit tibet

Originally posted by: NAVI55

Oh wow...

I have finally read the second part...

Juliet you never fail to surprise me...This was, is and always will be a superb piece of writing👏 -😳 You make me gloat!

I always admire the way you use your words and incorporate your awesome and delicious sense of humour👍🏼 - I TRY NAVI!!!!

There are so many things that I liked here but to be honest I am not going to elaborate because I will end up writing an entire essay on this😆 _ Take your time, but this is great as it is.

You write very well for a woman considering this is a view point from a man who happens to be very complicated...Well you certainly proved the theory right that woman are the better story tellers than men😉 - It took me a second to understand! ok I am happy now. But Asad is telling the story😛

I loved that you used that line "I dont like her" continuosly but then made him do something that showed the total opposite...

Their very first kiss...Wow, That was a very creative way you crafted for him to steal that kiss...Certainly another delicious moment from you...

Tannu made an appearance...And then made a dissappearance😆 Thanks to Zoya...I loved that moment you described asad's reaction and the scene where Zoya tears Tannu's shirt...I could envision every moment like a film reel in front of my eyes...

Lets go back up now...Asad in the gym...talking about Pectorals and six packs...God, you had me drooling and laughing at the same time... - DROOL METER ALERT!

Awee...Wasn't asad the sweetest, he left everything to attend Zoya...You know if a man does that for me, I will grab him in a heartbeat and tie him to me forever...

But once again the great man is in denial...He just doesn't like her😆 I am actually starting to like that line...

They both working in daddy's office...

That's another thing I enjoy...Office flirtation...Close proximity...Jealousy...Raging hormones...Testorones...Pheromones...and all other types of moans😆 - OH I LOVE THE LOT TOO!

Juliet, Your wicked sense of humour...Your awesome use of words and the creations of some of the most fabulous scenarios makes this a delight to read...What a treat for the senses and eyes...

This made me so happy...You remind me of some of my favourite contemporary writers...

Take a bow Juliet...You deserve all the great comments that came and that is still comming your way... TOO MUCH PLEASURE!!!!! ARRRH ! BONER HURTS!!!! NAVI STOP PRASING OR I WILL CLIMAX!!!

Mwah🤗