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Posted: 11 years ago

#511

Originally posted by: Komal_gill
so I've started reading this story today itself...all thanx to ur PM
here goes my point of views about each one of ur updates

PROLOGUE

I must say that the poetry was superbly awesome👏

the first scene seriously made me cry😭 parents are the God's most auspicious gifts for a child...I wish for every child to be blessed with the companionship of these 2 angels in their lives😊

Nothing is forever... everything burns...and turns into ashes..but its love that lights the fire within our souls that withholds everything and keeps burning through it all. Even after we are gone.

these lines are truly inspirational :)

I hope asad and zoya are married to each other...but I feel like there's some mystery behind the plot

well let me find out

gonna read the first chapter now

take care

god bless u⭐️🤗

Aww gal..thank u so much for such a wonderful comment...I am glad u liked the song at the start...it kinda inspired me to write this story and its tittle..n its a good song to listen to to get the feel of this story as well..

Loss of parents...n loved ones alters a lot within..n Zoya will constanly be fighitng with that loss...

as for the lines I quoted...I guess its true naa...everything does perish..n all we can do is enjoy it while it lasts..so ya...

I guess u'll get all ur answers as u keep reading...so do that...n I will drop by and keep responding to ur ocmments...thanks gal!!!😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#512

Originally posted by: Komal_gill
CHAPTER 1
I just loved zoya's diary entry about her prince charmimg...I loved the salman khan wala point the most...even I wish the same😳

zoya seems to be very arrogant and fierce...I'm loving it

but why am I getting the feel that Asya are not married to each other😕

hope so not

let me read further

Thanks a lot again..I just grin reading ur comments...it just makes me wanna keep writing...so thanks..

Diary entry...I guess we all have r list for r guy..wen we r in our teens naa..n as for Salman khan...Ditto..I am a fan and will always be...

Yes Zoya is arrogant...n fierce..n she will always be around that parameters..in all my story...I only enjoye promoting strong..indvidual characters...n gals that can do anyhting that they set their mind for...

other than that keep readin...I aint gonna reveal the story..😉

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#513

Originally posted by: Komal_gill
CHAPTER 2
wow that was something enchanting and, shocking at the same time

but I'm yearning to know that how will ASYA end up being with each other...and I truly agree with u that yesss it is a kind of rollercoaster ride...and it will b a gr8 story ahead😊

I really liked ur way of narrating the story...it grips the readers👏

god bless u

N here I am again...thank u thank u thank u...

m very happy with all ur comments..just shows that u enjoyed my story so far...n I hope u do as it goes on...Gal thanks a lot for all ur compliments..my head is now a watermelon..cos I am so flattered..😆 (PJ I knw..but couldnt help it😛)

Cya soon in ur next comment😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#514

Originally posted by: Komal_gill
CHAPTER 3
I love the quotes which u post in the beginning of every update

it shows that how much hard-work u put in ur updates

amazing work👏

I just love the way u present zoya's personality...its just amazing

poor zoya...why did she say yes to that boring guy😡😡...couldn't she wait longer for her prince charming

zoya and her father's bond is beautiful...I loved reading their meeting scene😊

Thank u...😳

Quotes...I believe they just set the mood of the update..n give the gist of it... In my first story Turnaround I used to have songs..n my personally written poetries...I guess I just wanted quotes here..😊

Zoya is a firecracker...n I quite like her that way myself...n why she married that snail Rihaan?? well in spite...u'll know in a few chapters..n she delibrately didnt wait for her prince charming...cos she was rebeling against love..n wat her mom showed her of it...

Thank u once again for ur awesome comments..😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#515

Originally posted by: Surish

Thanks😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#516

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish
Aashna.. that was cool update... Yep I understood that Zoya is rich and whoever is trying to murder her is after her money but it still leaves me confused as to who the culprit is.. Well that shows how awsome you have created the suspence...😊

Entire Conversation with Humeira was cool... So Zoya did end up thinking about HIM and ended up taking out her frustration on her employees... 😭

She kissed Rihaan in front of Asad...🤪... That did not go well with Asad either... and he realized when Ayaan blurted out about the comparison...Well I am so excited to know how things will shape out...

Though I like to read the updates on your other works, I would honestly love to read the next update of this FF soon.. 😊

Devika...

Thank u gal...for a wonderful comment...I mean I didnt expect that u or neone wlse would like the update..cos I thought it just mixed things up...(which I kinda intented to do..cos I dont want ppl stuck on a single thought..I want them to consider other possibilities..)

So I guess everyone is confused..n even though I am not liking that..its kinda good that way..keeps the suspense..alive😆

Zoya's destiny..her mom in her dreams and everything around her is pushing her to Asad..but ethically it aint right..cos she is married..hence her dilemna..n ya she is known to have a volatile temper..n everyone gets the brunt of it..even her employees..😆

She is mad at Asad..n instinctively she does something that would put him in the same position with her...so now they r even😛

As for my other works..I doubt that will happen this week cos its month end n work is ongoing..in a constant loop..I cant get netime towrite...so u mite..get an update for this one by Thursday or friday for sure... 😉

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#517

Originally posted by: gowtu
Clifffyyy

bahut dimag lagake padna padta hai ye ff..

Nd loved tht updt..
Loved the phone conversation between zoya nd humi...

Nd the kiss prt was also gud...
Nd he was feeling restless abt it..
Continue soon

LOL...ya it was kinda an abrupt end ..n I am getiing that a lot...the whole I am confused bit...but kya kare have to...to keep the suspense naa...

Lol..I like ur comment...bahut dimag lagana padta hai...😆 Sorry😳

Well overall I am glad u still enjoyed the update...it will clear as we go,...so keep reading..😃