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rajnid68

@rajnid68

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

beautifully penned his emotions,,

wonder how it will progress as the day goes on...

zoya no more...but in him she is forever there...

thanks for the pm..

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Dear,

I am feeling so sad by reading this.😭

Pls dont make him cry like this.

You wrote it very well dear.

thanks for the pm

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Alone111

@Alone111

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

I hv no words... It was so emotional one...

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MsfairyCindreLa

@MsfairyCindreLa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Omg.. she is dead..
I felt like crying at d end of the letter..
U had dat effect in ua writing's
Keep it up

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NainaAlex

@NainaAlex

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

omg Zoya is dead... totally emotional

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SprinklesOfLove

@SprinklesOfLove

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--
Its Lionel Messi here for the Ressy😆😆😉
hey it was a nice update.
I got it from first few lines that zoya is dead.
Its so painful for asad living without zoya
all the letteers were written very perfectly described.
This is very good thing that asad is talking to zoya in form of
letter.
Can u tell how zoya died n didnt her Aapi n Jeeju know that zoya died. He was abt to propose n zoya wanted asad to move on. Why?
This TS is very emotional
Update soon n thanks for the pm

I think i didn't convey the story properly

so ...

Basically Zoya had died becoz Tanveer had come to their house ( of course after they had kicked her out) and decided to kill Zoya.

Asad and his family were gone out and Zoya was alone

thts why Asad blames himself for it.

Then when she died , they informed her Aapi and Jeeju and they came to India straight away.

He was going to propose to Zoya

But she died, and he know that Zoya would like him to move on in life ,

even if she's not with him , but he doesnt want to.

Hope i made it clear

Thnks! 😃

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SprinklesOfLove

@SprinklesOfLove

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Hophop1456

oh my god

okay I will try so hard to keep my promise I am here in canada right now so here its 4:55pm so I will have my update up before 7:55 and maybe a bit

now the update,

as soon as Iread the first letter I could tell that Zoya was dead, the annoying little voice inside my head kept saying that she was dead, I am so broken that she is

So sad to see AAK like this

will be waiting for the next update,

for now, its time to lock myself up in my room and disconnect myself from the internet for the next 3 hours,

Sonny out

Thnks for the lovely comment 😃

Yh i just read your update and commented on it, now

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rosyluck

@rosyluck

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Very saaad
It was very emotional

Edited by rosyluck - 11 years ago

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RAJ

@RAJLUVRIYA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

It is a very sad and emotional story. I guess after reading initial lines that zoya is dead. God i hate sad stories. Thanks for pm

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SprinklesOfLove

@SprinklesOfLove

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Hey I'm back with Chapter 2...

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Chapter 2 :

Day 9

Dear Zoya,

It's March 13th today. That means it's been 9 days since you left. I don't know what to do anymore. I can't control my emotions. They've gone from sad, to angry, back to sad. I can't help it. A huge part of me left when you left. I'm not myself anymore. I can't deal with the pain. I'm hurting so much inside it's killing me. I feel like I'm being eaten from the inside. The only thing that keeps me strong is the thought of you wanting me to be. I remember when we talked about what would happen if one of us were to die. You told me that if I ever gave up when you were gone, you'd never rest in peace. If you never said that to me, I'd be gone by now. But that thought keeps me alive, Zoya. I love and miss you more than ever.

-Love, Asad

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Day 10

Dear Zoya,

Ten days. It's been TEN. WHOLE. DAYS. since I've seen you. I'm surprised I've lasted this long. I found it under our bed. The box full of all of our pictures and memories together. I remember the day I first met you. In the Dargaah, you were looking so beautiful, but you were crying. I felt the pain you felt. I wanted to wipe those tears,but I couldn't. I wish I could go back in time and tell you how much I love you, there's nothing I wouldn't do to go back and have you back here. I know it's too late now, but I would go back if there was a way. I love you so much.

-Love, Asad

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Day 11

Dear Zoya,

Today I cleaned up the place a bit. I know that, you know that, I hate having a dirty house. I feel like I've gone crazy. I haven't really been out of the house except to get some groceries. It's driving me insane. I need to get fresh air, so I'll write you tomorrow.

-Love, Asad

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Day 12

Dear Zoya,

I did something bad today. Do you remember that one time we got into a huge fight? The one where you found me trying to cut myself? I was lying on the bathroom floor, with blood all over my arm? When Ammi decided to go back to Abbu. Then you told me that everything was okay? Do you remember that? Do you remember telling me not to ever hurt myself again, no matter what? I promised you I wouldn't. I made a promise to you that I would never ever hurt myself again. I broke that promise today. I'm so sorry, Zoya. I hope that you'll be able to forgive me. I'll try not to do it again. I can't promise you that I won't do it again, but I can promise you that I'll try not to. You're probably really angry with me for what I did, so I guess I'll leave you alone. I'm sorry.

-Love, Asad

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Day 13

Dear Zoya,

How are you? I hope you're doing okay up there. I wish I could see you. I was really tempted to cut again today, but I stopped myself. I was standing in front of the bathroom mirror with a razor blade in my hand. I was looking at myself cry, which made me cry even harder. I put the blade up to my wrist, but just before I did it, I remembered the promise I made to you. I didn't do it. I stopped myself just for you, Zoya. I'm missing you more than ever. I don't know what to do without you. I'm trying my best, Zoya. I'm trying my best for you. I love you.

-Love, Asad

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Day 14

Dear Zoya,

Today wasn't a good day. It has been raining all day, and we have no food in the house. I've been sitting on the sofa trying to write this letter to you. It's really hard for me to write today, though. I don't know why. I've been writing this letter for hours. It's not very long, but every time I pick up my pen, I seem to lose focus. It's just a really slow day. Now it's 11:00 p.m., so I'll leave you to sleep. Sweet dreams. I love you more than ever.

Love, Asad

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Hope you liked that, just wanted to clear something,
I guess I didn't convey the message properly.
So,

Basically Zoya had died becoz Tanveer had come to their house ( of course after they had kicked her out) and decided to kill Zoya.

Asad and his family were gone out and Zoya was alone

thts why Asad blames himself for it.

Then when she died , they informed her Aapi and Jeeju and they came to India straight away.

He was going to propose to Zoya

But she died, and he knows that Zoya would like him to move on in life ,

even if she's not with him , but he doesnt want to.

Hope i made it clear

Thnks! 😃

Sunny had asked me that question so that's the answer I gave.