AsYa SS - Hidden Souls *Updated! Chapter 7 - Page 35* - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting
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plz pm me for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's looking interesting 😊
Plss continue soon and pm me 😃
And I have send rosyluck buddy request also 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice. Looks very interesting. The character sketch was amazing. I love every one description. Except Ayra i love all the couple. Waiting to read it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rosyluck



Thnk u for such a lovely comment
Yeh we r sisters, I no a big shock.
Well u no I can never forget to pm u
Awww u r also my good friend cum sister more
And it's always a treat to read ur comments
Will cont soon.
Stay tune cause this story is different 😊

aww thats so sweet of u... i knoits quite different with some mysteries i guess. Plz update soon
Its quite interesting..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey first chapter here ... Hope you like it 😃

AsYa SS - Hidden Souls

Chapter 1 - The Punishment :

Raizada Mansion:

Zoya sighed happily as she lay on her bed gazing at her ring. Uh uh ! Correction ... engagement ring . She had been waiting for this moment for ages. It was like a dream come true. She couldn't ask for more. The person she loved, was the person who she was getting married to... Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan. She remembered when he had placed the ring on her finger, it was the best feeling ever! Her chain of thoughts was disturbed by a knock on the door. It was Khushi.

Although she was her sister-in-law ( Bhabhi ) , she assumed her as her best friend and they shared almost everything with each other. Zoya often called her ' Bhabs ' or simply 'Khushi ' and Khushi didn't seem to mind.
Khushi came inside the room.

" Zoe seriously! You're still in bed ?! Get up and get ready in 2 minutes, we have to leave for work" She said trying to act strict.

Zoya stood up and came behind her. She held her arms around her neck and swayed side to side.

" Bhabs , Bhabs , Bhabs , you know you can't act strict in front of me, so why even bother? " She now came in front of her and held her by the shoulders.

"That's true" She replied. They both stared at each other , before bursting out in laughter.

"Still, get ready now, before ' Laad Governor ' gets angry" Khushi said referring to Arnav.

" Ok I'll be down in a few minutes " With that Zoya went to the bathroom ,while Khushi went to her room.

ArShi Room :

Khushi entered her room to find it empty

"Arnav , where are you? " She called out while searching the room.

Zoya's Room :

" Zoya " Zoya turned around to find her brother with his hands at the back, as if he was trying to hide something.

" What happened Bhai ? What are you hiding ? " She asked.

Arnav walked towards her and made her sit on the bed.

"Do you remember ? Exactly 17 years ago, when my parents had adopted you, I think you were about 200 years old " He joked.

" BHAI! " She shouted while playfully hitting him in the arm.

" This was the same day when we had adopted you and I had gotten myself a lovely sister. "

Zoya's eyes filled with tears as she looked at her brother in awe. She hugged him tight and cried her heart out.

"Wait ! There's more " He said while breaking the hug. He bowed down and said...

"To the most beautiful ... correction! Second most beautiful girl in this world " He said remembering Khushi. Zoya chuckled at his remark.

He then took out a box and placed it in Zoya's palm...

She opened it found a beautiful golden watch with diamond studs on it
she had tears of joy and she instantly hugged her loving brother and he too responded back.

Khushi : " What about me ? she said with a cute pout and joined them to hug. Soon after they all left for work.

At Work :

Ayaan : "What's up Humzie ? " Ayaan asked while sitting next to Humaira.

Humaira : " Please Ayaan don't disturb me. I'm not in the mood right now. I have a report that I have to hand in. And it's Mr. Sharma , you know how strict he is. "

She said while her eyes completely fixed on her work.

Ayaan : " What! Your doing work ! At Lunch ! Come on Humaira! " He asked, shocked.

Humaira : " I don't think you heard me properly . I said MR SHARMA ! " She shouted , loud and clear.

Ayaan jumped out of the seat.

Ayaan : " WHAT!? You should've told me before ! " He said clearly surprised.

Humaira : " I did tell you bef - "

Ayaan : " Anyway, let it be, I'll help you " He said NOW focusing on her work.

Humaira stared at him in disbelief.

"One minute ago , he was ranting on about how I do lots of work and the next minute he's HELPING ME! How did I fall in love with this cartoon?" Thought Humaira.

Purvi walked in, hands intertwined with Arjun's.

Purvi : " Hey guys , I've just got a call from Zoya. She's on her way." Purvi informed

Humaira : " Great ! " Humaira replied.

Arjun : " Oh! There comes Arnav and Khushi. "

Arnav : " Hi everyone ! "

Khushi : " Hi "

They all greeted and went back to work.

After 1 hour :

Humaira : " Where is Zoya? " Humaira asked "It's been an hour now."

Arnav : " Your right . She should've come by now. " He said a little tensed.

Arjun : " Didn't she come with you guys? " Asked Arjun.

Khushi : " She was coming with us , but then she got a call from someone and she said she's going to the library and she'll come by herself." Said Khushi trying to figure out what went wrong.

Arnav : " I knew I shouldn't have let her go alone. " He pushed his hair back in frustration. " I'm going to look for her. " He said while grabbing his coat.

Ayaan : "Hang on ! Asad's not here too. " He shouted before he could go.

All stared at each other until Arnav broke the silence.

Arnav : " Asad! Oh she must be with him " He said in relief. "Let me call them. " He reached out for his phone.

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Beach :

Zoya : " Asad don't you think we should go now " She asked looking at the time. Their boss will kill them!

Asad : " Yeah although , I'd love to stay here and enjoy the beach ... With You. " He said while cuddling closer to her.

There they lay on the beach in each others arm.

Asad : " Okay , let's go . I think it's getting late. C'mon." He informed.

Before Zoya could get up. Asad swiped her off the ground and into his arms.

Zoya : "Asad put me down!! What are you doing?!" She struggled to get out of his hold.

Finally , he put her down , as they reached his car.

He put her in her seat ( In the front ) and went to sit on his.

Zoya tried to put her seatbelt on , but she struggled . While she was trying , she felt a familiar hand help her. It was Asad.

His hot breath fanned on her face as he finished buckling her seatbelt. Even after he was done , he stayed there , a little longer than necessary.

He leaned down towards her lips.

*Tring Tring*

Asad : " Who's disturbing our precious moment" He said as he placed himself on his seat.

Zoya chuckled and answered the phone. It was Arnav. He told her to come as quickly as she could , as Mr. Sharma had to talk to us about their new project.
At Work :

All were called to Mr. Sharma's office , once AsYa arrived.

Sharma : " You guys! What is this nonsense 😡!? You come late! You don't work properly! If this is the case, it won't be long , when I kick you all out of this job. You know I'm a very respectable man - "

He was interrupted by a burst of laughter from Ayaan, but soon he changed it to a cough.

Sharma : "Anyway , for your 'Punishment' you all will have to go to the ' Blue Royal Hotel ' and report everything what happened."

Purvi : " Blue Royal Hotel ? Wasn't that place shut years ago ? " She asked confused.

Sharma : " Yes ! But I want you to secretly film whatever you see. "

Asad : " What is so special about this Hotel ? "

Sharma : " Well this isn't my punishment is it ? You'll have to do research. You may leave. And one more thing, if you refuse to go , you lose your job. Here's the address and the picture of the house. I'm warning you ! Be careful! "

They all left the room , still confused.

" Hey guys I've heard your going to the Blue Royal Hotel right? " Nisha asked (A colleague).

Zoya : " Yeah you're right. Why did you ask ? "

Nisha : " No it's just that whoever goes in that hotel , never comes back."

Arnav : " What nonsense ! "

Khushi : " Why don't they? "

Nisha : " It believes to be haunted by ghosts."

All were left stunned.

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HAHAHAHA!!!! Cliffy !! Lol.

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Edited by masteruni6 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Yipee I am first! After a long while!
👏👏 😎 🤗 🥳🥳 😎😎 😎

Some celebration for myself ^ 🤣

I love these kind of thriller stories, can't wait to see what happens at the hotel! 😆😆 I don't know why but I loved Arnav and Zoya's sibling moment. It was adorable. ❤️ 😳


Loved Asad and Zoya's romantic moment at the beach too! It was really cute, when he picked her up in his arms. 🤗 Then he buckled her seatbelt, and was about to . . . only to be interrupted by Arnav! 😡


Anyway, the story is going great so far! I like the concept of it, continue soon!


Edited by --Radhika-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Nice update
Punishment is to go to the hotel which was closed yrs ago
& rumours are that whoever go there never come back
Hmmm let's see how they capture everything
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update...👏

Zoya and arshi scene is amazing...😃

Asya scene is romantic and cute...😳

So they r going to cover ghost thats intresting...👍🏼

Waiting for nxt part so update soon...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow this is very interesting. Zoya and Arshi scene was superb. Love ZoHi(zoya khushi) and ArZo(arnav zoya) bonding. So sweet bro-sis and bhabh -nanad bonding. Asya scenes in beach so cute. So they r going to cover ghost story. Very excited for next part. Thanks for pm and update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice update
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon

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