AsYa SS - Hidden Souls *Updated! Chapter 7 - Page 35*

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@ToughStuff

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Chapter 1!!
Awesome start!!
AsYa engaged!!!
Arnav so sweet!!!
Ghosts!!!! Aww its gonna b more interesting!!!

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Gourav

@Shubh007

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Awesome update...👏

Just love it...😊

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Chapter 2!!!
Perfectly written!!!!
I could imagine everything clearly!!!
Can't wait to read more!!!
Hmm ghosts welcomed dem!!!
Thanks 4 pm

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NainaAlex

@NainaAlex

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

read the 2 chapters ... very nice

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

awesome update

thanx for pm

do pm me for next part

continue soon

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Yar Fareen,

Is it a trap dear?

You wrote well dear,

I can feel scare.

Pls continue soon.

Pls dont make our any lovely couples in danger.

I love all these couples especially ASYA.

Thank u for the pm Alisha.

Love u dearies

Take care😃

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Shama_zz

@Shama_zz

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Awsm stry
cant wait fr nxt part

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Dhanyatha rao

@Surbhibornstar

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Lovely d way u described is reli scary cntinue soon

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Applef

@Applef

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

awesome update..

love zoya- khushi bonding..

the guys are scared also..

only humeira is so excited..

update soon..

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

muma , i m not gona sleep today
it ws so so so scary!
mumma i quite scared
so now i believe that there is a ghost
varna tv m koi kya pehle se welcome wala gana download thodi na krega
u know when i was reading there was a horor type of tune ringing back
oh my god it was so horror
spclly the last part where it is said welcome
mummy!!!
the way u described the place looks
amazing
u know now i cant wait to s their conversations
it must b like
ghost : welcome!
all: oh hi? kese h ap? sab ekdum first class?
ghost will b so confused to scare them or give weird looks
ghost : lagta h tumlog bahut bahadur ho?
al : ha kyunki hum complan aur bournvita peete h!

god! it was superb
zoya n khushi are so scared
u know when i read this it reminded me of a movie's story
dont worry i wont reveal it
they all so go in hotel n all
but i just saw d muvi a few days back but still its different
but i really wanna read this
khushi and zoya were so scared
room no. 3046
girl died
hotel grandiouse?! isnt it?
hmmm interesting
jese hi bhut dekhenge khushi n zoya will just like kidos jump on their spouse
hahaha
humi ayan purvi asad arnav n arjun seems quite daring
ab plz i cant wait
i really wanna read ahead
arnav is so concerned about zoya
so adorable
n the line u highlighted
superb
haha asad hugged zoya
khulam khula pyaar karenge hum dono.
haha
it was just
mind blowing
superb
scary
briliant
beautifully written
amazing
adorable
wonderful
fabulous
fantastic
fabulous
really just PERFECT

superb ab intezar mat karvana
update sonishest
it was amazing
i really wanna read its version
in asya style
i just hope they all come back alive unlike d story

Edited by riddhi1206 - 11 years ago