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Posted: 11 years ago
cliffy.
read all parts in one go.
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Amazing and a scary one. Also a cliffy. Love it. Hope u dont kill any one. Thanks for pm. Update soon
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Thanks just catching up
Will update soonish!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

Amazing and a scary one. Also a cliffy. Love it. Hope u dont kill any one. Thanks for pm. Update soon


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SprinklesOfLove


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INTEHA HOGAI INTEZAAR KI GHADI!
AAI NA KUCH KHABAR MERE DI KI UPDATE KI!
YE HUME H PATA UPDATE KAROGI AAP HO BEVAFA TO NAHI
PHIR KHATA KYA HUI MERE UPDATE KI?
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Hey guys we are really sorry for updating really late, but now things are sorted so here we are with the update.

Chapter 6 : Who Is It?! :

Humaira : " If...if Ay...Ayaan's b...b...body is here then who is d...d...d...Downstairs." She stuttered. Her whole body was shaking and she couldn't think straight.

*That means he's dead?* She thought. She shook her head in disapproval.

Humaira : "NO! This can't be true, right?" She trembled. She took small slow steps backwards, still facing the body.

She quickly turned her head and collided with another body. She let out a loud scream.

Ayaan : "What happened, Humaira? Are you okay? You were taking long, so I thought i'd come and check."

She looked from top to bottom and looked at him in horror.

Ayaan took one step forward and she took two steps backwards.

Ayaan : "HUMAIRA! What happened?" He asked, looking worried.

Humaira was still in shock. She decided to pretend she knew nothing in front of Ayaan. She wanted to get out of there and run away, but she stood rooted to her spot.

Humaira : "N-nothing, let's go, everyone might be waiting f-for u-us."

Humaira was the first one to leave the room, she told Ayaan if he could get his phone from his room. As soon as Ayaan entered boys room, Humaira shut the door and locked it. She could hear the frantic knocks on the door, but she paid no heed.

Humaira ran as fast as she could and went downstairs and saw that everyone were there.

Purvi : "Humaira what happened why are you so scared."

Humaira came downstairs, she couldn't take it anymore and broke down, she landed on her knees. She covered her hand on her face to stable herself, but the more she tried the more she failed.

Everyone sat down next to her.

Asad : "Humaira what happened, Tell us something and where is Ayaan." He said looking upstairs.

Humaira : "A...Aya..Ayaan is dead." She said as more tears formed in her eyes.

Arnav : "What are you saying Humaira? Ayaan was sitting with us a minute ago."

Humaira : "T-That's not A-Ayaan, it's a ghost." She whispered, her voice croaked at the end of her sentence.

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They all proceeded to the girl's room to check Ayaan's dead body. As soon as they entered Humaira pointed at the cupboard. Arjun went towards it and opened it slowly. Everyone was dumbstruck when they saw their own friend numb and pale.

Asad : "AYAAN! Ayaan get up!" He said while shaking his shoulders furiously, he could feel his eyes watering.

Arnav came forward and held Asad.

Arnav : "A-Asad he's dead." He closed his eyes and let the tears flow.

Khushi, Zoya and Purvi held Humaira, while they also cried.

Asad : "No he's not! Ayaan, look get up! If this is a joke then i'm not liking it! Get up, you stupid idiot!" He slowly backed away and cried.

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Khushi : " We have to get out of this house."

Humaira : " No! I..I can't leave without Ayaan."

Zoya : " Humaira A-Ayaan is D...Dead, he can't come with us."

Humaira : " No! Ayaan can't leave me alone. He made so many promises to me he can't go away. Zoya, Arnav please tell Ayaan to stop playing pranks on me."

Arnav : " Humaira, we can't bring him back." He wiped the tear that streamed down his face.

Humaira : " Ayaan I'm telling you right now if you don't come back, I swear I will be angry with you for the rest of my life." She said talking to the space in front of her.

Asad : " Humaira! Let's go right now." He said grabbing her arm and moving towards the door.

Humaira kept protesting to let her stay, but they knew whatever they try to do they will not be able to get Ayaan back.

They all tried to open the main door, but failed. The door was locked, and they couldn't do anything.

Asad : "I'm going to the boy's room." He said as he proceeded towards the stairs. He felt a tug on his arm. He turned around.

Zoya : "Where do you think you're going?! You know who's in there. And I can't let something to happen to you!" She said, as she cried uncontrollably.

Asad cupped both her cheeks with his hands.

Asad : "Listen, Listen Zoya, don't worry. I'm fine and I'll never leave you. You know that right?"

Zoya nodded and was about to say something when Arjun spoke.

Arjun : "Asad she's right and right now we can't risk anything."

Purvi : "But, think about it, we can try running away, but we know that we won't be able to escape."

Khushi : "I told not to come here, but no, you didn't listen!"

Arnav : "What's done is done! Rather than sitting here, let's actually try to sort out things." He said while rubbing his forehead furiously.

Asad : "Arnav and me will go, Arjun stay with the girls, don't let anything happen to them.

Arjun nodded. They both went upstairs, while Asad glanced at Zoya and nodded to assure her.

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Arnav : "Have you got it?"

Asad : "Yes." He said as he took the knife from his pocket.


Asad's P.O.V

We took a knife with us so that we can fight off whoever it was. I was shaking in feared the dreaded creature in the room would finally show it's power on us. I waited until that slow and painful moment ticked over, my hands becoming sweaty around the knife. I heard Arnav twist the door knob and the bedroom door creaked open and we both stepped in.

Surprisingly, no one was there. We both looked around for a while, but we found nothing. Suddenly the lights flickered furiously and we heard a voice.

"Help me! Guys please." We instantly recognized the voice; Ayaan, but he was nowhere in sight.

Arnav : "Ayaan! Where are you?" Arnav asked.

Suddenly, Ayaan's voice, replaced with loud chuckles.

"Who is it?!" I shouted.

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Thanks! I know we're late so...uhhh...apologies?

Anyhoo will be updating next chapter, quicker (Hopefully).

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Edited by SprinklesOfLove - 11 years ago

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