#5|| AsYa FF: Cupid Strikes (Chp 23 to Epilogue)

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Mahima

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Posted: 11 years ago

#361

Originally posted by: archa2810
poor padfoot 😔

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Mahima

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Posted: 11 years ago

#362

Originally posted by: potternerd
Hi Mahima

I just finished reading your story

It was so so so amazing

Beautifully written

The plot was superb

Each and every character was awesome 👏

Waiting for epilogue 😊

And waiting to read more stuff by you 😊

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#363

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

Aww... I love your comment as always

Beautiful and loved it totally

Badi behen ko Thank You kehne waalon.. Janta maaf nahi karegi! 😡 🤣

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: --Mahima--

I LOVE TO DEATH ❤️

Mar bhi jaaye, pyaar waale.. Mitt bhi jaaye, yaar waale..

Zinda rehti hai unki mohabbatein! ❤️

🤣

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Mahima

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Posted: 11 years ago

#365

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#366

un-reserving my comments! 😛 SIMPLE COMMENTS FOR A CHANGE! 😆

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FINALLY THE STORY IS OVER! MY HEART HAS A VERY STUPID SINKING FEELING! I WAS VERY ATTACHED TO THIS STORY, BUT NO WORRIES... YOU'VE STARTED A NEW ONE NOW! 😳

Okay,

HIGHLY UNEXPECTED THINGS HAPPENED IN HERE:

> LEAP? 😲

> You giving an Epilogue of 481 words. 😡

> Zaroon and Asmara siblings? 🤣

But, All in all... a beautifully written chapter as usual! ❤️ It was so simple yet serene. The love the kids have for their parents is so lovely and the love the couple have for each other after 25 years of marriage is enthralling!

Zoya showed him the shirt. It was the shirt he had worn when they first met. The same shirt where she had left the imprints of her hands by mistake.

"That day you didn't just leave imprints on my shirt but also my life" Asad told her and she hugged him tightly.

THE PERFECT EPILOGUE! Though it could have been longer! 😛 But I'm not that disappointed since you started a new story! 🤗

Love you loads and loads Mahi baby! 🤗 ❤️

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#367

And thus you have stopped this story on a note where people can continue and live the story in their imaginations! 😳

Your stories pop up in my mind in the middle of the night and fill my dreams with positivity!

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#368

one more! <3

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This one is Just to tell you that I simply love everything about your work my baby sis! ❤️Not only your work, but everything that's related to you! ❤️

Bye!

I'll come over to the new story in the evening! Till then.. xoxo.. 🤗 ❤️

Yours forever.. Mina di! 😉

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Nisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#369

Un-reserving the comment exactly after a month ...n am feeling happie for dat 😆😆😆

OMG the final time has come to say goodbye to my cutiee piee...😭😭😭 The story was attached to my heart..and i really feel bad that its ending..but they say good things always hav ending..so to hv a new beginning😃😃😃

And this FF is really very close to my heart bcoz i met one of my best friend here 😃😃🤗

Epilogue was the best but small...but sweet and simple which i really like...!! ⭐️

Asya ki 25th anniversary..wow...and their love looks one day old

Kids were superbb zarron i love him lott ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

The last phrase was the best line of an epilogue it would be. 👏👏👏👏👏

The whole FF was Fantastic...with every chapter , anxiety and curiouisty grew inside me..!! 😊😊😊

Vil miss the FF lottt

But as u hav strted new one , no problem😛😛

Nisha❤️

Edited by nisha150 - 11 years ago