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chco

@chco

Explorer

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

omg asad is so evil

and zoya is so innocent

my poor baby

loved it cont soon

plz pm me😊

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: pinks2911
That was.. No words!!
*shivers* I felt goosebumps reading the update...🤔
Asad is so evil..😡🤬
Poor Zoya.. So young and innocent..😭
You made me cry.. I guarantee you that..
Continue soon..🥱

exactly what i am going through...! Continue soon...!

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Oh God! Asad is a bloody pedo!!

God this is so hard to accept...I mean just liking her from afar is one thing, but all this..?

Woah.

I feel sinful reading it.

So bloody sinful.

You write well though. So well.

Hmm. Am intrigued.

Zoya a willing victim coz she don't know or coz she knows too much? Or coz she has had some practice.

Imma go with the practise. Since she knows what he likes and where he likes 'em.

Hmm

And Tanveer left them.

Does she know? Is that why she left?

Edited by farz_parachute - 11 years ago

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Zanutix
Okay...
Asad's a Pedo.
Asad's a Pedophile.
He's a fudgin' Pedophile.
WOW.

And Zoya is a willing party.

O_O

O_O

But, hey!
That was sinful. 😉

Seriously, a desperate 15 year old she is.
Or has she been trained that way?
Huh?
o.O

I KNOW RIGHT!!

I SAID THE SAME THING.

Hi-5 dawggg!!

Yep Imma go with she's been trained that way...

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Alveena12

@Alveena12

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

I don't like the way Asad has been portrayed, maybe if Zoya was 19 and Asad was 25 but 15 and 30 is a big age gap and it just makes it seem sick and cringey

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

age gap is quiet a big thing...

zoya being very innocent scares me...little...
she sound like baby...

its very intimate the way she talks to asad...

asad... no words... he is grey...

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Zanutix

@Zanutix

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: farz_parachute
Oh God! Asad is a bloody pedo!!
God this is so hard to accept...I mean just liking her from afar is one thing, but all this..?

Woah.

I feel sinful reading it.

So bloody sinful.

You write well though. So well.

Hmm. Am intrigued.

Zoya a willing victim coz she don't know or coz she knows too much? Or coz she has had some practice.

Imma go with the practise. Since she knows what he likes and where he likes 'em.

Hmm

And Tanveer left them.

Does she know? Is that why she left?

Dawg. Yew are mah SoulDawg.

@bold - I know!!! DITTO!!!

I think he's been doing this to her since Tanveer left them.
And so she doesn't feel awkward too.

God, this is disturbing.

Good Job Author!

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safa/fuii

@Splash-ASYA

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

yaar.. she is 15.. not 5.. isnt it crazy that asad is touching her unzipping her dress n she is saying nothing infact enjoying it??
the story is amazing but u need to clear this thing!! is she abnormal or what??
anyway sorry if u found my comment rude.. but i always give honest views...
anyway continue the storyy ASAP... dont get disheartened.. i am waiting for more..! 😊

-fuii-

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MsGrumpyShumpy

@MsGrumpyShumpy

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Ok i feel that was a little incestous and well asad looks like a pedophile but i like reading about the forbidden love. I just hope u could increase her age. 15 is too young. But thats ur story. The concept sounds good just dont make it too vulgar. Ill be waiting for the next part.

Ps - is tanveer dead or something?