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hosanna..

@hosanna..

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#541

This was a really nice part :) Loved how Zoya helped him realize things and the hug was so sweet! Great update as always.

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#542

amazing.

awesome.

spell bound.

very emotional.

simply admird the way zoya handled the situation n how u have written asya's conversation.

beautifully written.

how can u write amazingly. ur a gifted writer.

plz update soon

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marcoe

@marcoe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#543

Really emotional update

It was always zoya who had a pull towards asad

But I guess today we got to see asad appreciate zoya

I guess maybe this is the start for him to realise there is something between them

Really well written

I loved the way zoya consoled asad

Normally she is always immature

It's d first time she acted maturely

Anyway update soon

I wanna read what happens next

How will this change the dynamics of their relationship

Update soonishhh👏

Edited by marcoe - 11 years ago

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Niyati Tiwari

@Niyati_T

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#544

I have no words to say It was so beauitful 👏

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tanu3579

@tanu3579

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#545

👏

tht was soo soo beautifully done... the way asad opens up to her... y he does tht... the way zoya understands, mks asad understand, n lightens the situation too fr him...

was amazingly done :)

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

+ 46

Posted: 11 years ago

#546

Beautiful update Anki... I so loved the conversation between Asad and Zoya... ❤️ 👏

OMG Asad hugged Zoya and kissed her on the temple!

Continue soon!

Love,

Mrina

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#547

It was so emotional one...
Awesome..
Beautifully written...
I m glad zoya was there for him whn he needed sumone..
Continue soon..

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sanasahel

@sanasahel

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#548

Wow a very nice intense update.

thanx. looking forward for the next.

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#549

awww asad hugged zoya 😳
d way zoya handled aanu n asad is sth very mature ...
luvd d update ...
update soon

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vinita459

@vinita459

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#550

Wow really mic update. I loved it. Zoya talking so maturely 👏
She understands Asad so well. She helps him realize the situation. The way you wrote the whole chapter and dialogs was just awesome. Update the next chapter soon :)