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Posted: 11 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Zanutix


Yes! Going there! Going there!
Aww, thank you so much STRANGER,

Hey, I'm Zan. No, not ZANU! Just Zan.
That was very thoughtful of you. I must say you're smart.

Oh, Grand salute? I'm overwhelmed!
Thank you so much for the heartmelting feedback!

Again, as I said, I'm ZAN.
Nice to meet you!


Going where?

You're welcome. Uh, am I still a stranger? I hope we can be friends...

And hey Zan! Nice name. What is it short for? Surely not Zanu...that's not as cute as people make it out to be.

Heartmelting? Uh, sorry, don't mean to be rude, but that word doesn't exist. You better get your dictionary checked.

And yes, nice to meet you too, Zan.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: farz_parachute


NO PROBLEMO!!

I know I've made you wait...hmm hota hai hota hai..


Yep. Not more than you! Thank God you at least accept that!!


Mwahhh


I know I'm awesome, thank you.
MWAH DAWG!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: farz_parachute


Going where?

You're welcome. Uh, am I still a stranger? I hope we can be friends...

And hey Zan! Nice name. What is it short for? Surely not Zanu...that's not as cute as people make it out to be.

Heartmelting? Uh, sorry, don't mean to be rude, but that word doesn't exist. You better get your dictionary checked.

And yes, nice to meet you too, Zan.


To the intro!

Yes we can! You seem like a nice soul. 😊
Well, um, it's short for 'Zanutix'.
Although I love it, but some people like to call me 'Zan' as well.

Yeah, that word.
Well, a very close friend of mine suggested me that, so I've been using it since.
You should get yourself a copy of Farz's Concise Dictionary.
I has got some awesome words.

Hope to hear more from you!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Zanutix


I know I'm awesome, thank you.
MWAH DAWG!


How many conversations have we got going on??


Hehe


Yes. Mah dawg's awesome!!


And mwah right back atcha
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: Zanutix


To the intro!

Yes we can! You seem like a nice soul. 😊
Well, um, it's short for 'Zanutix'.
Although I love it, but some people like to call me 'Zan' as well.

Yeah, that word.
Well, a very close friend of mine suggested me that, so I've been using it since.
You should get yourself a copy of Farz's Concise Dictionary.
I has got some awesome words.

Hope to hear more from you!



Oh Zanutix is your real name? Okay...


I'm pretty sure there's no such dictionary. And what kind of a dictionary name is Farz?


And not to the intro. I meant to say introduce. Not Introduction.

That Einstein you guys rave on about, HE seems like a really cool person. I was just hoping you would INTROduce me to him.

Ergh, I'm seriously considering my proposition again. I'm a nice soul, but you're friends with funny funny people (with the exception of Einstein of course)..so maybe we should just stay strangers.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: farz_parachute


How many conversations have we got going on??


Hehe


Yes. Mah dawg's awesome!!


And mwah right back atcha


I don't know!
Lemme count!

8 IN TOTAL!

3 - Active; 5 - Passive.

And the best part is,
EACH ONE"S DIFFERENT.

WE RAWK.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: farz_parachute



Oh Zanutix is your real name? Okay...


I'm pretty sure there's no such dictionary. And what kind of a dictionary name is Farz?


And not to the intro. I meant to say introduce. Not Introduction.

That Einstein you guys rave on about, HE seems like a really cool person. I was just hoping you would INTROduce me to him.

Ergh, I'm seriously considering my proposition again. I'm a nice soul, but you're friends with funny funny people (with the exception of Einstein of course)..so maybe we should just stay strangers.


Um, no it isn't.
But I like to be all mysterious by not revealing it. 😳

Then you're wrong. There is. And you should, its worth it.

You know, that's the thing. The HE's actually a SHE.
Lets just say, she's quite brainy.
So Einstein's her Alter Ego.

Einstein ain't no exception!
(Don't mind the language, though. Its a thing me and my dawg have. Oh, NO! Not the 'dog' dawg, it's my 'dawg' dawg.)

I insist on befriending you.
Posted: 11 years ago
#98
Unresed on the first page! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
Res!
Unres! 😳😳


Aw, this OS was so adorable! I loved the way you described the scenes, there were written beautifully!


Asad is so adorable with the blushing and wiping of the lipstick marks!! Too cute!


I love how you added the rain at the end too, and when he gave her the rose! 🤪 🤗


Very nice OS, I loved every bit of it! You should write more stories, your stories are really interesting and cute!
Edited by --Radhika-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -LiveLoveLaugh-

Abcdrgfhesrtikl. Hi.

OMG, this has GOT to be my most favorite piece of yours EVER! 😳 Claps for you! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
This was sososo sweet, and I loved Zoya and Asad was SO effin' adorable and and and it was so beautiful and so cute and *DIES*. 🤢 🤢
The rain and the sunshine just made it even better! :') THE LAST PART OMG MY FEELS. That was LEGIT, the cutest thing I have ever read. 😳 *Squeal* Asad's shyness and blushing is TO DIE FOR OMG. ☺️ 😆
And Zoya was such a sweetie, oh she was so intrigued with Asad. 😳 AND AW, THE FLOWER AND THE RAIN AND THE CHEEK-KISS AND HOW HE WIPED OFF HER LIPSTICK AND THE CUDDLING AND AWWW. ABCDSKJHCJEFL. *Dies again* 🤢
Anyways, it was exquisite and written wonderfully. 👏 Do you have an index? You should really make one. 😆 And don't forget to write MOREEE! 😛
Oh, and before I forget, this TOTALLY reminded me of My Name Is Khan! 😆 SRK's character was JUST like Asad, and Kajol's character was JUST like Zoya! 😆 Omg, that movie gave me feels. 😭🥺 Thanks for the OS, I really needed the cheering up and I enjoyed the kinda walk-down-memory-lane with MNIK. 😳
And my cousin is autistic, so it reminded me of him, too. ❤️
GOOD JOB BECAUSE THIS IS ONE OF MY MOST FAVORITE ONE-SHOTS NOW SO CUPCAKES AND COOKIES FOR YOU! [imagine your favorite dessert h e r e]
-Fari. 😳 ❤️
PS. Oh, and I have another thing I wanted to say.😃 (As if this comment wasn't long enough already. 🤔) Since I was first, which doesn't happen a lot since I'm usually late, I'm going to celebrate a little here:
🥳 🥳 🥳 🤪 🤪 🤪 😎 😎 😎 😃 😃 😃 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ 🥳 🥳 🥳
Okay, chillax. I'm done. 😆


HELLO!
You Unresed, FINALLY!

Really? OH WOW. Um, OMG.
Thank you so much!!!!!!
And it means A LOT Fari, because I just LOVE, I mean like literally, LOVE the way you write.
And you liking my work... That's Big. Very big, actually.

No! Don't Die!
*Resuscitates back to life*

I KNOW! Asad was sooo adorable, especially when he wiped off her lipstick mark! 😳 😆
And the crooked lily part was MY FAVORITE.
I loved it the moment It struck me!

I love MNIK too! And it's songs, especially.
BTW, it was so touching, I cried watching it.

Aww, I'm sure your cousin must be adorable too.
Autistic people are, usually.

OOH! I'M SO GOING FOR CUPCAKES!
Thank you so much!

*gobbles*

Well, PARTAAYYY!
YOU'RE FIRST COMMENT! 🥳

Thank you for such a long feedback Fari! 🤗

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