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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#401

Juliet, how could you ask us to wait till Sunday now.. Sorry sorry, I meant how could you leave Asad and Zoya hanging/on the edge till Sunday.. Its going to be a very long wait..
Loved the update, and the fiery Asad..

Edited by Azraa01 - 11 years ago

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kalyani

@kals82

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#402

i am here to unres... after a very hectic and tight day...

at the end of day... oh yes... i love doing research... just dont ask me on which... let it be a open secret...

to your update...

the shortest you have ever written i guess...

i just loved their stolen moments. amid the family..the dining table was fun to watch.. . and conveniently get caught too..

and your purposefully added the cousins.. to fill in the room...😡😡

only they know that their hormone secretion way above the normal... the anticipation and the build up... my poor asya...yet so cute...

and the outing... asad got her the boot... so sweet him.. and ofcourse the kite... do u remember in the beginning we discussed about kite.. and u said it was inspired from some book u read i guess..

ofcourse as usual zoya takes the initiation.. the stolen kiss... and once again.. zafar turns up.. even in the form of rehan... let just say to show the growth in their relationship...

but why did zoya didnt tell him about zafar before hand... bcoz he will come to know at one time or other.. right... i could see she is worried.. but her knowingly hiding the fact didnt sit well with me..

but asad.. was commendable... i trust you... so cool... and atlast... they are lying almost naked.. ineach other arms...

for zoya mighty seven... and we are just waiting

did i miss something... will come back later...

and you did tell dilshad caught them doing... but looks like whole family caught them...

and what is the answer for the last question of yours.. where they do it with the whole family...

i thought... asad lock themselves in the bathroom😆

as awesome.. as always...

love

here is the fireplace for their mighty seven.. just as my token of lust//love

this is for you...😳

Edited by kals82 - 11 years ago

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#403

Hahah loved this update

They couldn't even kiss in peace lol but wow Asad and Zoya ran off to the farm and now they'll have 2-3days alone

I just loved the update

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#404

It was an Asyalicious update Juliet. Loved all the teasing, the stolen moments and the want and need the two show and feel for eachother. Loved the update.

Waiting for Sunday.

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#405

The trust factor has made an appearance! Fantastic! 👏

It was a delightfully beautiful chapter! 😳

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Tamara27

@Tamara27

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#406

Omg, you're going to make us beg for the 7, right?!

So not fair - I'm literally feeling their pain haha! 😆

And W*F with the siblings?! Wanted to smack them!

We coulda had some really sexy makeout session to heat up that freezing weather 😳

Well done on another brilliant chapter to one of my favourite stories 😉

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akaswan

@akaswan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#407

Awesome part juliet 👏

Thank you 🤗

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-RM-

@-RM-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#408

Ugh! Dont they have any more relatvies? Zoya should have called them too! Wont they feel left out? 🥱

Hum ko man ki Shakti dena!🤣 Did you get that from that vodafone advertisement? Its epic 🤣

You love Zafar na.
He gave me heart-attack nearly by making appearance :P

Finally Screaming Seven.
But all screaming? No variations? ;)

Btw tell me your breakfast timing as per IST.
Nahi toh all i ll do is keep my eye here all sunday! 😆

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life4me

@life4me

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#409

Awesome update. I loved their desperation for each other.

Continue soon please.

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#410

Hey Juliet...

First of all ..your exams are still due right ?? So why did you update before that ?😲

Coming to the update...

Asad remembers her each and every word... The day she had blurted out in the pub room I guess about her wish to fly a kite.. Asad is so very adorable to make her dream come true and also getting her trekking shoes... 😊

Loved their text messages... and later the entire gang behind them not allowing them to enjoy their private moments.. 😊 Well.. naughty and mischievous family like that is always adorable... 😉

Ayaan and his ways of irritating his bro.. what a song selection ? 🤣

So Asad has booked a farm house and the warning which Dilshaad mentioned about the weather.. Do they land up in any trouble due to that ??

Rehaan is Zafar's brother.. and the bomb was placed at the right moment.. The fear which Zoya went through till Asad joined her and assured his trust on her, her shouting which followed... beautifully written.. 👏👏