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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: madina12

Love the update...
I juz went aawww wen asad accept zoya for her passion in singing & even encourage her to sing..
But uff this irritating sherish jiz have to spoil everytink...Get a life women...
But i love tis possesive part of asad 😆
Look forward tp ur next update


Thank You 😃
I am glad that you liked it !!
haha Sehrish is here to spoil everything na ,,
if she was not here than there wasn't any story like this ever 😆
Will try to update soon 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gowtu

Hmmm finally... U knw wht iqra.. I m tired tellng u tht.. U r an amzng wrttr.. Sameer baba... Aaj tho teri band bajhgayi :p.. Actually sameeer said all tht to shehrish ?he had feelngs for her... Aisa mein mukka ahmed se mulakhat tho hona hi tha... It was awesome.. Loved ech nd evry wrd... Waiting for nxt prt... Try to update soon.. Strdy se pehle... Nd surprs aakhir kya hai yaar..


Thank You 😃
I am glad that you liked it !!
Yup Sameer got a well deserving Mukka 😆
LoL surprise was guitar and Sameer's feelings ,,
and something more which I couldn't add in last chapter ,,
will add it in next one ☺️
Will try to update soon !
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank You 😃
I am glad that you liked it !!

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: TaiLung

'You are cucking frazy about me.'


this is great thoughts bubble 😉 telling indirectly.

'I will try my best but if I couldn't then take it as your last level of punishment.'

i loved this dialogue

Hum cheez hain bade kaam ki, Yaaram
Humein kaam pe rakh lo kabhi, Yaaram

Actually i dont know the song but i searched in youtube. I loved this song its apt with guitar. perfect.

I never expected asad will give her guitar. It was lovely gift, accepting her talent 😳

what will be in next update? i am gussing lots of things 😳.

thank you bubble for loving update


Thank You 😃
I am glad that you liked it !!
Yup I love this song ,, its kinda cute and different and best thing is that it fits on AsYa ,,
haha yah lots of things are on the way 😆
Will try to update soon 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rockstar_16

I loved it completely...specially the song one...and asad gave her guitar wow that was really sweet of my akdu..

again cliffy😡😆
I hope rain does some magic 😉
please continue soon


Thank You 😃
I am glad that you liked it !!
haha I love cliffys na ,, yup rain is going to do some magic 😳
Will try to update soon 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--



Thank You😃
I am glad that you liked it !!
Yup Sameer got a well deserving Mukka😆
LoL surprise was guitar and Sameer's feelings ,,
and something more which I couldn't add in last chapter ,,
will add it in next one☺️
Will try to update soon !

ohhh i thought... It ll be asya's dance seq :( :(... Hmm guitar tho socha nahi tha.. Hmmm sameer ka kismat luck hai isme kya shakh haii :p srf ek punch ! Se bach gaya...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asyafreva

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OMG...! The update...!! Epic...! 👏 Loved the way 👏 asad supported her and gave that Sehrish her position when he announced Zoya As Mrs. Zoya Asad AHmed Khan, his wife... 😳 and soo proudly he praised her talent...! Asad miyan i fell in love with you all over again...! *Sigh* ... But no that Sehrish is never satisfied...! 😡 Pity Sameer... he wasn't actually going to go and propose zoya or something like that, was he...? 😲 Cuz if he was then i had rather say he had totally lost it...! 😆
Your antagonists in your stories are getting more and more cruel and wicked and now i dont know what should she deserve cuz Sophia is still R.I.P in coma(i'm guessing and hoping...! 😆)

Dear Queen of Cliff Hanging (You, Iqra...! 😡 😉),
I think you have taken classes on How to leave your story at the most crucial point...! 😆 SO please do not blame the writing that wherever you tried to stop it was always cliffy...! 😉 Or God has been so gracious he decided to bless us with a cliff hanger since the ones who were already there were not living upto the expectations...! 😆

My humble request to you, please stop those classes where you go for learning how to give a cliffy or how to write in such a style that it always ends up in cliffy but to go for those classes who teach you to never stop writing...! 😳 😉

Yours Sincerely,
Your Most Mad, Craziest and Cucking Frazy fan of yours...! ❤️

Asad miyaa if you do anything that will hurt zoya i swear i'll come and murder you there and then...! 😡 🤢 😆

Iqra please do not separate them... It was at Saad's party (i guess) when Sehrish put up that drama and ended up separating them and i really wanted them to patch up at his party...! Zoya had even forgiven him and i hope this matter doesnt become too serious...! 😭 😳
Please please please my request to you...! 😳

And do make sure you update soon...!

Aashka





Thank You Aashka 😃
I am glad that you liked it !!
haha soo finally all my readers forgave him ,, I guess Zoya should also forgive him now 😆
well yah he likes Zoya but obvio he was not going to propose her as he knows that she is married ,,
LoL Sophia is in comma still for sure 🤣 and I don't know what I am going to do with Sehrish at the end *sighs* haven't decided any good punishment yet ,,
haha I am damn serious believe me I really try my best to not make it cliffy but I guess cliffies also love me now ,, like I thought to stop at punch or after the song ends or in the next scene which will come in next update ,, all the options look cliffy soo I just stopped there 😆
This is my last story buddy as per my decision 😳
@red : it really means alot to me ,,
it was Sehrish's party ten years back which separated them and now history won't repeat for sure 😆
Will try to update soon 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pinks2911

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So happy you gave us an update..! Was waiting for so long it felt like ages..😛
And the update! AWESOME!!👏

Loved the way Asad supported Zoya😳😳 (I kind of knew it already😆)
Finally Sehrish got what she deserved..
I am so glad he backed Zoya there..😃
SO finally Zoya forgives and confesses..☺️ Phew!😉
And Dr.Sameer? He is so weird.. Loving a girl already married..?😲
But wasn't he a crazy middle-aged fellow!😆 What's gotten into him??🤣🤣
Trust Sehrish to spoil everything..🤬
And a cliffy again..😔
Asad was right to be angry but I hope he doesn't take it out on Zoya.. Just when everything was going right..😭
Thanks for the pm Bubble and do update soon..😃


Yah I am kinda late this time but I updated finally *sighs*
Thank You 😃
I am glad that you liked it !!
haha dil toh bacha hai jee soo Sameer can also love her 😳😆
Yup she is here to spoil everything ,,
No he won't take out his anger on Zoya for sure ,,
Will try to update soon 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesum update..thnks hope dere is nt anthr gi8..n dty solve it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweeetyrocs

Wowww... Finallly the Rockstar is bacckkk... The song was just Perrffect... The way Asad was getting the lyrics n the way ASad gave her the guitar...

Loved it the most... N hate that Sehrish for coming again n again btw them...
N yessdd u stopped at the cliff... Hope the Rain does some Magic... I hope to get a rain dance, a confession n some Romance...
But dont be late in updating the next part...

LOVE
~JAZ~






Thank You 😃
I am glad that you liked it !!
haha Sehrish is here to spoil everything na ,,
Well rain is obvio going to do some magic for sure 😳😆
Will try to update soon 😉

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