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friendsall

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

i thk he ll praise her after she sings...Sehrish ka plan ulta ho jaayega...atleast for me...i cn only imagine kabhi as asya...thanks

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laks_vish

@laks_vish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Asad's wide grin as if he did a successful open heart surgery finally😆... too good yaar...nice update and indeed a surprise for all of us

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TaiLung

@TaiLung

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

loved it

come on zoya give a good lesson to sehrish

u will rock 😉

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kalyani

@kals82

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

ok, first to the good things...

the dance... the dance... and the dialogue in between the dance...

awesome... asad attempt reached zoya heart...

nicely written.. and the song is the flavour of the month i guess.

sameer is not as bad as sehrish... what is wrong with her...😡

asad words saying beautiful.. only for zoya.. and this girl burning in jealousy...

i think her whole plan is going to back fire.. asad is going to cheer zoya for her singing.. bcoz he is not the old one...he is zoya's asad...

love it..

no need for a pm.. bcoz i am here already...😉

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Avie

@Avie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Res

Unres..

First of all, 7th thread..! 🥳

Sorry for not being able to comment recently.. Busy life..!😭

And coming to the update..😳

The dance was so beautiful.. Zehnaseeb❤️

I hate Sehrish 😡 but maybe this time she is gonna be useful in bringing them closer..😆

And the cliffy!😕 Somehow I get the feeling that Asad will be supportive..😊 He definitely has changed in recent times..😉

I love this over-attentive and loving Asad.. 😳

And what's the deal with Dr.Sameer!🤔 He is not in love,is he?😆😛

Thanks for the pm Bubble.. 🤗

Always a pleasure reading your stories..😃

Edited by pinks2911 - 11 years ago

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tanu3579

@tanu3579

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

i m sure asad wud appreciate her.. he hs to.. he has seen she changed everythg fr him... he can sure accept her love fr music...

i hope he does...

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-RM-

@-RM-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

I hope Asad sing with her too this time

Asad and his way of complementing! Love it (:

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Prashni Singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Enjoy reading your FF's! 😃

Interesting and unique concepts! ⭐️

I love the wittiness in your writing! 😳

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..Drishya..

@..Drishya..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

I recently started reading your FF and read i all in one sit.Its really really beautiful.Thanks for the PM..😊

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Alone111

@Alone111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Wow iqra.. It was ana amzng romantic dance seq... O m g.. It was so beautifully wrtttn.. Loved it... Nd vry gud sng slctn.. He is a uncle luk... Haha.. O m g.. U too gud.. Yes.. Eyes speaks volumes... Kch batane ki jaroorat hi nahi padti.. Lvly prt it was... Hmm so zoya going to sng a song... Hm i m sure.. Asad kch nahi kahega... Mera asad badal gaya haiii.. Pyar insaan k badal deta haiii... Ye shehrish ki tho main... Beep beep beep... Aarrghhh... Uuufff... Chalo chodo uskke baat... Aaawww my asad etmps... Hmm chalrahe hai... Continue soon yaar..