Lost Souls: 3S - Last Part Page 18 - Page 26

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Posted: 11 years ago
hey tis is amazing...
totally luv it...
superb n fabulous...
beautifully written...
thx for the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pinks2911

Unresed comment on pg 20.😊




Thank you so so much. It really is a relief...I was so nervous about posting it because it is not real

I really appreciate it my dearest

lots of love to u 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shamagvl45

Oh it was realy awsm honestly it was like wow
i guesd it when d nurse being scared of him
nd when zoya didnt respnd to d kiss in d last update
dis was so touchy yaar nd d congo of asya was beautifulwhen asad
came to knw dat she was died
nd he did medicine for her so sweet
md d last he said dis is for u was just hhlarious

nd it wil b fab wg.en u did a sequel of it



thank u so much 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rajnid68

<font color="#ff00ff">saima ..what the hell...😉</font>

<font color="#ff00ff">why do you keep doing this to me...</font>
<font color="#ff00ff">am blown away...</font>
<font color="#ff00ff">awesome 3S..</font>
<font color="#ff00ff">bas your insomnia is giving us awesome pieces to read..</font>
<font color="#ff00ff">par heallth kay bhi khayal rakhna..</font>
<font color="#ff00ff">kya likha yaar...dhangh raha gayi..</font>
<font color="#ff00ff">tumhari dil aur dimaag ko kisi ki nazar na lagay..</font>
<font color="#ff00ff">bas yunhi likhthay rahana...</font>
<font color="#ff00ff">i think i mentioned way back...</font>
<font color="#ff00ff">love to see all your work on papaerbacks..</font>
<font color="#ff00ff">thanks for the pm..</font>




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Thank You so much Rajni

I really appreciateur feedback

Am glad u liked it

Have been an insomniac for last 8 years lol
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: snehasya

I am sorry I couldn't comment before read all the parts in one go and I don't know there was something which pinged my heart constantly may be I was trying to find something more or my mind was weaving a dream that may be she is alive

lost souls and I really lost mine too for your updates this was not real but the one where your mind resigns and heart craves it to be real

asad and zoyas bonding she is directing him to deal with his past she helps him survive may be in those five days she fell in love when she was alive and next to him she was connected so much with him that her soul refused to return without putting him in a prefect life where there is no holding back

thanks for pm and sorry if I went too far away with comments but its just I am still sinking in the update thanks once again it was very nice



Thank you so so much Sneha. Am so glad u liked it.

yes it's true what ever your mind and heart craves to be to real.

As a lost soul Zoya did what she needed to to help him and yes in those 5 days she made a connection and so did he subconsciously
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

hey tis is amazing...

totally luv it...
superb n fabulous...
beautifully written...
thx for the pm...



thank u 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow. Brilliant writing by you. Loved the whole story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Saima, this was a very different and interesting read. By second part I could guess that Zoya might Not be for real. Enjoyed reading it. Very well written.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Saima I love this TS! 😆😆 I'm sorry wasn't able to comment on most of the chapters!
But I saved the best for last! 🤗
Anyway, I felt really bad for Asad! He was dreaming about Zoya the whole time!
The nurse was so funny! No wonder she was nervous!
Lol, this is like a bollywood film where there are double characters! 🤪But the story was still really good overall! <3
Asad meets a new Zoya after being discharged from the hospital and he reunites with his father!
Amazing story Saima!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: life4me

Wow. Brilliant writing by you. Loved the whole story.



Thank u so much 😊

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