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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: akaswan

Awesome drabble

I loved it

You should write more



Thank you so much for reading my humble piece of work.

You loved it?? Mwah mwah

Write more??

Oh mannn...


Heee
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
Farz Dear😃
I know you around here somewherešŸ˜‰
When are you posting something new...I'm waiting
Like I haven't got anything else to read, I'm here asking for more My inbox has 89 and counting but you can always add to itšŸ˜‰šŸ˜†
By the way...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73

Vengeance, I'm aware can only take you so far.

Would it cure this still bleeding heart?

Would it balm the aching memories?

Those very memories that I carry like a wound, a scar even.

That's forever etched.

In this meager baggage of mine.

This baggage known as life.

A battle scar.

So avenge I must, the death of beauty.

The death of love.

The death of, me.

For I am, dead. Had been for the longest of time.

But not anymore.

It's my turn to live. My turn.


And people claim they're not poetic.

White lies.


These two extracts are applaud worthy dawg.

Wow.

šŸ‘

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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Zanutix

Vengeance, I'm aware can only take you so far.

Would it cure this still bleeding heart?

Would it balm the aching memories?

Those very memories that I carry like a wound, a scar even.

That's forever etched.

In this meager baggage of mine.

This baggage known as life.

A battle scar.

So avenge I must, the death of beauty.

The death of love.

The death of, me.

For I am, dead. Had been for the longest of time.

But not anymore.

It's my turn to live. My turn.


And people claim they're not poetic.

White lies.


These two extracts are applaud worthy dawg.

Wow.

šŸ‘


Oh God!!

How am I only seeing this now??

I shall come address this in a bit!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Zanutix

Vengeance, I'm aware can only take you so far.

Would it cure this still bleeding heart?

Would it balm the aching memories?

Those very memories that I carry like a wound, a scar even.

That's forever etched.

In this meager baggage of mine.

This baggage known as life.

A battle scar.

So avenge I must, the death of beauty.

The death of love.

The death of, me.

For I am, dead. Had been for the longest of time.

But not anymore.

It's my turn to live. My turn.


And people claim they're not poetic.

White lies.


These two extracts are applaud worthy dawg.

Wow.

šŸ‘



This is Haider. I cannot claim rights over this. I simply cannot.

And who this liar you speak of? She sounds awesome. If it's a she. It's a HE??

INTRO BABE, INTRO!!

Hehe.

Haider. Naam toh suna hoga.

I happen to love the Vengeance bit too. I mean why not?
Did you get the irony of the meager baggage known as life bit?


Jab kabhi maine tera chand sa chehra dekha...
Eid ho ya ke na ho mere liye Eid hui.

Woh jalwa churane ko jee chahta hai.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Thats is freaking AWESOME...!!šŸ‘ it was damn fantastic girl... !!

I dont know what to say.. I am totally speechless.. your every word was screaming how fabulous you are in writing šŸ‘ .. No words 😳 i LOVED it the way you told story of Haider ā¤ļø
Edited by BabajiKaThullu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: farz_parachute



This is Haider. I cannot claim rights over this. I simply cannot.

And who this liar you speak of? She sounds awesome. If it's a she. It's a HE??

INTRO BABE, INTRO!!

Hehe.

Haider. Naam toh suna hoga.

I happen to love the Vengeance bit too. I mean why not?
Did you get the irony of the meager baggage known as life bit?


Jab kabhi maine tera chand sa chehra dekha...
Eid ho ya ke na ho mere liye Eid hui.

Woh jalwa churane ko jee chahta hai.


It's an awesome she who can write as a he. Oh yeah.

Well, you tell me if I got it right -
He's calling his life a 'baggage', which always tends to be 'heavy' but he claims that it is 'meager', so I'll say that's a classic oxymoron there.

Did I get it?



Edited by Zanutix - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: -Noura-

Love Haider 😳


Hayyyeee...

Haina?


Willing to share him?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: Zanutix


It's an awesome she who can write as a he. Oh yeah.

Well, you tell me if I got it right -
He's calling his life a 'baggage', which always tends to be 'heavy' but he claims that it is 'meager', so I'll say that's a classic oxymoron there.

Did I get it?




Um..yes. Also could mean... Hmm. How should I put this. You see, meager baggage. But he calls it LIFE. And dawg, life's no meager baggage. baggage sure. Nothing meager about it.
HOW DID YOU GET IT? YEP YOU DID.

An awesome she? I'm not interested. When there's a real guy, call me.
Edited by farz_parachute - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: BabajiKaThullu

Thats is freaking AWESOME...!!šŸ‘ it was damn fantastic girl... !!

I dont know what to say.. I am totally speechless.. your every word was screaming how fabulous you are in writing šŸ‘ .. No words 😳 i LOVED it the way you told story of Haider ā¤ļø


Awww...you sweetheart you!!

Thank you so much for such great appreciation. But this is Haider telling his story.

*God I give myself way too much credit*

freaking AWESOME????

damn fantastic???


Ohmy...*hyperventilating*


Imma soak it all up.


Well, why THANK YOU!!!!!


Mwah mwah mwah!!

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