Haider- a Dark Drabble - Page 8

Originally posted by: akaswan

Awesome drabble

I loved it

You should write more

Vengeance, I'm aware can only take you so far.

Would it cure this still bleeding heart?

Would it balm the aching memories?

Those very memories that I carry like a wound, a scar even.

That's forever etched.

In this meager baggage of mine.

This baggage known as life.

A battle scar.

So avenge I must, the death of beauty.

The death of love.

The death of, me.

For I am, dead. Had been for the longest of time.

But not anymore.

It's my turn to live. My turn.

And people claim they're not poetic.

White lies.

These two extracts are applaud worthy dawg.

Wow.

👏

Originally posted by: Zanutix

Vengeance, I'm aware can only take you so far.

Would it cure this still bleeding heart?

Would it balm the aching memories?

Those very memories that I carry like a wound, a scar even.

That's forever etched.

In this meager baggage of mine.

This baggage known as life.

A battle scar.

So avenge I must, the death of beauty.

The death of love.

The death of, me.

For I am, dead. Had been for the longest of time.

But not anymore.

It's my turn to live. My turn.

And people claim they're not poetic.

White lies.

These two extracts are applaud worthy dawg.

Wow.

👏

Originally posted by: Zanutix

Vengeance, I'm aware can only take you so far.

Would it cure this still bleeding heart?

Would it balm the aching memories?

Those very memories that I carry like a wound, a scar even.

That's forever etched.

In this meager baggage of mine.

This baggage known as life.

A battle scar.

So avenge I must, the death of beauty.

The death of love.

The death of, me.

For I am, dead. Had been for the longest of time.

But not anymore.

It's my turn to live. My turn.

And people claim they're not poetic.

White lies.

These two extracts are applaud worthy dawg.

Wow.

👏

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

This is Haider. I cannot claim rights over this. I simply cannot.

And who this liar you speak of? She sounds awesome. If it's a she. It's a HE??

INTRO BABE, INTRO!!

Hehe.

Haider. Naam toh suna hoga.

I happen to love the Vengeance bit too. I mean why not?

Did you get the irony of the meager baggage known as life bit?

Jab kabhi maine tera chand sa chehra dekha...

Eid ho ya ke na ho mere liye Eid hui.

Woh jalwa churane ko jee chahta hai.

Originally posted by: -Noura-

Love Haider 😳

Originally posted by: Zanutix

It's an awesome she who can write as a he. Oh yeah.

Well, you tell me if I got it right -

He's calling his life a 'baggage', which always tends to be 'heavy' but he claims that it is 'meager', so I'll say that's a classic oxymoron there.

Did I get it?

Originally posted by: BabajiKaThullu

Thats is freaking AWESOME...!!👏 it was damn fantastic girl... !!

I dont know what to say.. I am totally speechless.. your every word was screaming how fabulous you are in writing 👏 .. No words 😳 i LOVED it the way you told story of Haider ❤️