AsYa OS: Making Up!!

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Hey peeps.. Lemme begin by introducing myself.. Im Priya... Been a silent but active reader of all the writeups here... And im absolutely amazed with the talent people possess... Awesome work guys...
Ok.. India forums isn't completely new to me... I was an active member of the Bade Acche Lagte Hai Forum.. But had to stop writing coz of my busy schedule... And this OS is one i had written for RaYa... Just imagined AsYa in the situation and i liked the idea..
So here goes.. Do comment n lemme know if u like it...

Oh n btw.. Asad and zoya are married here...
OS: Making up...

Asad held his 5th cup of black coffee for the night in his hand .. he was depressed.. He was angry.. He was dejected..


They had fought a few days ago over a petty issue.. The fight had turned huge because of their ego.. Both, Asad and Zoya were hell bent on proving that they were right and did not want to listen to the other's point of view.. This resulted into a huge fight and Zoya left home to stay at her Aapi and Jiju house.. They were in Bhopal for a few weeks owing to her jijus business. Asad was disappointed with that but he made no attempts to stop her.. He just let her go.. And that made him sadder..

Zoya on the other hand was having horrible days and desperate nights.. She wanted to go back home.. go back into her husbands warm embrace.. her ego prevented her from doing so..

She tried to solve the problems between them, no doubt.. She messaged them the day she left home.. He never replied.. She tried once more and had the same result.. no response once again.. That hurt her.. She was trying and he never co operated.. That made her sadder..

Both of them loved each other to the core.. They never wanted to live away from each other even for minutes.. But this time, the minutes had extended to 3 days.. 3 whole days..

Sadness was evident on each of their faces.. However, the families did not know the reason.. Asad told his ammi that since aapi n jiju were in town Zoya wanted to visit them... Zoya on the other hand told aapi and jiju that Asad was not in town and hence she came to visit them..

Zoya was sitting on her bed.. Alone.. Lost in thoughts.. thinking about her man.. She kept looking at the phone still waiting for Asad's reply.. Though she knew there would be none, he heart still hoped..

Meanwhile, Asad was sitting with his laptop.. Staring at a blank worksheet .. Suddenly, he heard a noise from the window and turned to see Ayaan entering his room...

Ayan: Bahi.. Asalaamwalekum

Asad: Walekumasallam..
He got up to hug his brother.. Ayaan saw the four empty coffee cups and the fifth one was still full...

Ayaan: Bas bhai.. Yeh aap ki sehat ke liye theek nahi..

Asad: tujhe meri sehat ki itni kyu padi hai... Rehne de.. Tu bata.. Nikhat Nuzrat aur Humeira kaise hai??

Ayaan: Bhai.. Sab thik hai.. Bas aap thik nhi hai.. Hum sab ko aapki fikr hai bhai.. Hum sab aap se boht pyaar karte hai... Aur hum sabse zyada, koi hai jo aapse beintehhan mohanbat karta hai.. Aur uss insaan ko aapki fikr bhi boht hai..

Asad: Kya bakwaas kar raha hai.. Koi meri parwaah nahi karta.. Agar parwah hoti toh wo mujhe yahhan chod ke nahi jaati..

Ayaan: Agar parwaah nahi hoti toh wo pal pal mere through aapki khabar nahi rakhti.. Wo mujhe nahi batati ki jaa aur apne bade bhai ko rok.. Mujhe pata nahi hota ki aapka haal yeh hai agar Mona nahi batati.. Par wahaan baithe unhe pata hai ki aap bechain honge.. Aap ne khana bhi nahi khaya hoga..

Aaad hung his head in shame.. He kind of knew that.. He knew it was Zoya who sent Ayaan to him..

Ayaan: Bhai, bhabhi ko leaaiye.. Aap dono ek dusre ke liye bane hai aur ek dusre ke bina aap dono nahi reh sakte..


Saying thus, he left the place..

Asad thinking to himself.

Asad: Ye mai kya kar raha hu.. Zoya bale ghar gayi, usne jhagda suljhane ki koshish toh ki.. Usne mujhe message kia.. Par maine ignore kia.. No Asad.. This is wrong.. Mai zoya se pyar karta hu.. AUr mera ego humare pyar se badkar nahi

ho skata..Mai kal jaake Zoya se baat karta hu.. Nahi kal kyu.. Abhi jaata hu..

He saw the watch.. It was almost 12 at night..

Theek hai.. I know zoya must not have slept.. Wo bhi tadap rahi hogi.. Jaise mai uske bina...

He rushed to grab his car keys and went out.. If was pouring heavily..


Zoya was now sitting in her balcony.. A pic of Aaad in her hand.. She was crying her heart looking at the pouring rains.. She badly wanted to be with him.. In his arms.. in their room..

Her trail of thoughts were broken by the ring in her phone.. The name flashed on the screen and a smile broke out on her face.. She receieved the call but spoke nothing..

Asad: zoya.. Zoya tum soi nahi..

Like hell she could sleep when she was away from him..

Zoya: aap bhi toh nahi soye.. Par aaj meri yaad kaise aayi aapko? Aap ki zindagi me merit oh koi value hi nahi hai na.. I'm a big nothing to u.. Toh phir..

Asad: Stop it Zoya.. Pehle toh.. Can u please open the door.. Mujhe thand lag rahi hai..

Zoya: huh? Kya?

Aaad: Mai tumhare ghar ke bhr hu.. aur bheega hua hu..

Zoya did not respond.. She was already on her way to the door.. Running to catch a glimpse of him..

As soon as she opened the door, he was there.. Standing wet.. not fully but almost.. In his white kurta pyjama.. looking disturbed and holding the phone to his ear..

Zoya opened the door and stood at the doorway staring at him.. looking deep into his eyes, sensing all the agony.. all the pain he went through..

Asad: Kya mai andar aa sakta hu?

Zoya moved in.. turning her back to him..

Asad: zoya.. Zoya.. Wo actually...

Zoya: Kya hai.. aadhhi raat ko wo actually bolne aaye hai..

Asad: Mai wo.. Mai tumse wo..

Zoya grew angrier at that.. Ek sorry bhi nahi bola jata.. She walked into her bedroom.. Asad following her suit.. He shut the door behind him and went towards zoya..

Asad: I'm sorry zoya.. I so sorry.. Mujhe tumhe jane nahi dena chaiye tha.. Humare pyar se badkar mere lie kuch nahi.. Mera ego bhi nahi.. Mujhe tum chaiye zoya.. Mere zindagi me tumhare siwa aur kuch maine nahi rakhta.. tum hi meri zindagi ho..

Zoya who had her back facing him, was crying hearing all this.. Her eyes were full of tears and her heart, full of pure love for asad.. Asad sensed this and came up to her and tapped on her shoulder.. In an instant, she turned and hugged him tightly.. He wrapped himself around her too.. After being in each others arms for a few seconds..

Zoya: asad.. I'm sorry too.. Mujhe bhi aisi baat pe ghar chod ke aana nahi chaiye tha.. Hu iss baat ko ghar pe hi solve kar sakte the.. I'm sorry Jahapana six packs..

She cupped his face and felt something wrong..

Zoya: asad.. Aap ka temperature high lag raha hai.. Feels like you have fever..

Asad: Nahi Zoya... I'm ok.. Mujhe kuch nahi hua.. Ab tum mere pass ho toh all is fine...

Zoya heard no more and made him sit on the bed.. She brought a towel from her closet and wiped his wet hair.. He loved it when she did that.. He loved it even more when she was concerned for him.. She got him a fresh set of kurta pyjama asking him to change.. He quickly removed his wet kurta to change and zoya kept staring at his perfectly sculpted body.. She could never get enough of that.. She then made him lie down and covered him with the duvet..

Asad: zoya mujhe thand lag rahi hai..

Zoya: Mai fan bandh kar deti hu..

Asad: that's not really necessary.. unless you refuse to be by my side...

Zoya and asad smiled looking at each other.. their eyes did all the talking.. Hers said I love You to him.. And his replied the same.. These words were never really necessary in their relationship.. Their feelings were depicted in their actions.. in their eyes..

She quietly walked over to the other side of the bed and got into the duvet.. After three days without mental peace, Their hearts and soul were now peaceful in each others arms..
The next morning, zeenat aapi opened the door and saw them smiling and sleeping peacefully embracing each other..

Uff.. ye dono pyar ke panchi bhi na.. Ek dusre ke bina toh reh hi nahi sakte.. Asad kal aaye honge apne trip se aur KV me zoya ko naa pakar aa gaye honge yahaan.. bilkul inseparable hai ye toh.. Khair..
She shut the door again and went back to doing her chores..

The End..

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anma2738 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG that was the cutest!!!!! 😛 i just love how Asad came in the middle of the night and knew Zoya wasnt sleeping! 😳 and by the way im the first to comment hihi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awwwhh so sweet 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anma2738

OMG that was the cutest!!!!! 😛 i just love how Asad came in the middle of the night and knew Zoya wasnt sleeping! 😳 and by the way im the first to comment hihi...

hey.. Thanks... M glad u liked it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey.. Thank u so much... Asad n Zoya r really cute in the show as well... Love them mahn...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Glad u found them adorable... They really are...Embarrassed
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww

Asya so cute

Love it

Keep writing
😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Why were they fighting again?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sarbrathan

Why were they fighting again?

couldn't think actually... They just fought... And the OS begins with that... Its more of an ego clash...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Linnet


Aww

Asya so cute

Love it

Keep writing
😛

hey thanks.. Will defo try to...

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