Asad-Zoya FF: Zoya Proposes, Asad Disposes I:Thread II Link on Pg 146 - Page 60

Aww so cute...
mahek nice name...
bechari zoya hehehe...
so cute asya as uncle n aunty...
fabulous...
luv it...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

And everything is restored in the universe!

Noe. Thank you.


I love most the little hints you drop. Little hints of what? Hmm, you know what I'm talking about.

Really? You need me to elaborate?

Fine, since you so very nicely and sweetly gave us an update, I'll indulge!


He stares at her?


Aahh I see realisation dawning upon you.



And she was looking for dimples why?


Oh quit smiling Noe. You've outdone yourself. Yet again. I thought the scene of them fighting was a favourite *yes it was delicate and very beautifully written* And I know many didn't like it...but if THAT didn't happen...would we have gotten THIS?


Exactly!


And Junior didn't listen to either of them did she!


Yet she managed to get them together.


Noe I'm completely fine with the pace at which your story is moving! Don't at all feel pressured into rushing your story, it is little moments such as this that makes me that more a lover, of reading. The ability of you capturing my still fluttering heart * Asad going Huh?* is a talent not many has. Not many.


I love the airport scene too! Zoya jumping our of the car just so she could try to get him a ticket. And him holding her arm to stop her and later her shoulder pushing her gently to go. Oh goodness the emotions one is filled with saying goodbye to a closed one at the airport.



Oh and I love Anwar!


Nice touch with the whole Jeeju trying to fit in at the back with Abbu and Zoya!


Oh and Zoya trying to gain Asad's attention when he had to listen to her Abbu talk about leaves and roots and branches perhaps. And when she said He's stubborn stubborn stubborn.


That brings me back to my first line.


All is indeed restored in the universe with Zoya admitting her stubbornness and his farsightedness. All while talking to lil miss Jr!




And how very subtly you've introduced the next plot! I'm guessing Ayaan and/or Humeira's entry is formulated?

Or there's still time?

What???

You're not telling?

Oh fine then!

Hee!


And Zoya realising what may to some be too remote is really not. I'd totally realise if suddenly a person starts calling some else differently. Especially terms like Bhai to no Bhai!

And yahan toh...

Aapi to Bhabhi.



What does Asad call Zeenat?




Oh speaking of Zeenat, I love the description of she and Anwar! Childhood sweethearts! Now parents to lil miss Jr! Eh Mahek!


Which brings me to this very important point.


How did you manage to pick the two names I would have wanted for MY kids?

Well now it's Zoya and Aliyah coz my cousin is named Zara *so mad at my uncle and aunty!*


Well I have different names for boys.

No it's not Asad. I wouldn't want that.



Oh Noe! Look what you've made me do! Write a lengthy and possibly boring comment on your ahMAYzing update!


Do I really need to get Asad here before you give us the next update?

*in reference to Junior waiting for her Chachu! btw! How many times did you manage to make Chachu smile or chuckle in this one?*



Heee!!



Mwah!



Love you loads!!!


You rock!


Oh so very much!

I had to say this, I really enjoy reading your comments 👍🏼

Dear Noe

Totally amazing story

Love Zoya and Asad pairing

Plz pm me when u update

😉 loved it

Lovely update...the baby moments of Asad and Zoya were adorable🤗...glad they forgot about their argument for a while😊...oh no! you are not evil😈 noe(how does that exactly sound?🤔😆)...you gave a baby girl to Asad and Zoya in "Somewhere in time"...and I have this intuition that you're going to do something similar in this one😳...at least in the gag reels😆...update soon😊

With each update I am loving the story more and more. The smallest interaction, even if its criticism by Asad or a constructive opinion to Zoya by him, or a gesture like offering the jacket to her is wonderfully penned. This update had a lot of moments where their friendship shined. Its subtle, its just so simple and yet so enigmatic. Update soon, even the one shots please 😳

Part 4 ! Awesome update! Akram is hitting on zoya ! Tanveer confused btw imraan & akram ! Zoya likes to asad pictures!