Asad-Zoya FF: Zoya Proposes, Asad Disposes I:Thread II Link on Pg 146 - Page 27

Originally posted by: neenabinu

lovely update..
so now Zoya going to match make Asad and Tanveer

Originally posted by: akaswan

I hope that Zoya will not play the cupid between Asad and Tanveer

I loved this update Continue soon please👏

Originally posted by: p_s05

"Tumhara cook bhag gaya ke gas company ne gas supply karne se refuse kar diya?"

"Phuphi, aaye din hamare ghar pe khane pe aa jaata hain."

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Mischievous Zoya is endearing! 😉

Like AsYa's inimitable bond! 😳

And Tanveer Baig makes an entry, interesting! 😆

Visualizing Nisha seems more appropriate in the context of this FF. 😎

Originally posted by: vinita459

Lovely update :)
I think I kind of know the story 😊
But it will be fun reading in AsYa version and especially when you are writing it.
Looking forward to read more.

Originally posted by: Maz8

Awesome😃

Originally posted by: hilly

I am IN LOVEEE ! *giggles* *virtual hug*

Thank you 🤗

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Thanks a tons Noe ! You're the best ! I've been love with HW and now this, voillaaa ! This is such an awesome Fic.. I feel like I am watching a movie, indeed. The reel of words is totally imaginative, detailed, precise and perfect. The characterization is abs. AWESOME ! I

Thank you, again. Do remember that characters are a mix of QH and Jane Austen's Emma. I just did a different kind of match making. 😆

equally adore all the characters... well, er.. esp. Zoee's. tehee! Can't wait to meet Ayaan !
I can't believe you actually included the piece of shiz.. Akram as well in this Fic... well, he seems a bit mysterious anyways... weird vibes*

Yes, Zoya as usual is adorable, so was Emma.

Hmm...so you are as eager as Zoya to meet Ayaan.

Akram - this is the first time I am writing about this character, but I find him perfect for the role. And, those weird vibes...if only Zoya was wise enough to recognize them.

Zoe is such a sweet heart, dramatic, talkative, abs. adorable and cute and just ... AHMAZING! such a cuteesy, she reminds me of how she used to be in the show... I've quit the show and I really it miss at times, and yet, Your Fic (HW and this) ends up filling the void.

& Tanveer ! I was tried so hard not to LOOL... yet I couldn't control my giggles and chuckles of laughter... haha ! she's deff. something ! Crying at wedding for no reason, LMAO ! totally diff. from what an evil beep she is in the show ! bahaha. That was fun to read.. She sounds an introvert type, pretty mellow and 'what-tha-...?' type so far.. and I hope she stays that way. No triangle with Asad or anything... right?

You got Tanveer quite right. She is totally different from what she was on the show. You are asking about triangle. There is going to be square, pentagon, hexagon.😆
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Awwh @ R&D... such an adorable couple. Reminds me of the past flashbacks in QH. How cute were they. I love em.
You're seriously creative. It's SO SO nice to read something totally different, unique.. hat ke story from the usual.. and I totally love that about you. Same goes with HW and this one, Lovely, Lovely characterization and plot ... you've earned 5+ stars and tons of thumbs up and hugs from me... You're talented and you've become one of my very favourite writer's on IF.. <333

Aww...thank you. My readers - kya kahoon? 😳 Plot belongs to Jane Austen. I am just adapting it with QH characters.

PS; I just have to have to mention the use of 'classic Urdu' that you have portray in your Fic. esp. this one. Totally goes with Bhopal-ly background and so classically written ... you're really good. If you don't mind me asking, where are you from ?! :)

I am from India, and my knowledge of Urdu is very limited. Learned watching movies and TV shows, especially QH. It felt right in this story that older generation would use Urdu.

I don't think I've written this long of an update for you ... but here's all the praises and much more to come. You should really go for creating a blog for yourself... I'd love to catch up and read up everything from you.

I think you have already read what I have written. Blog? Never thought about it...

& Ohhh.. how can I possibly forget Shireen Bi ?! What a chatter box ... ahahaa. I was totally cracking up.. I am not sure how I controlled my laughter. I am just wondering all the possibilities you've pulled up for Shireen to get her to this, LOL. her dialogues, Ya Allah. Kya Kamal dialogues likhe. It was pretty interesting rambling session and you had me thinking how much effort and thought you put in to her character connecting her tp this 'rishtedaar to that one in Hydrabad to her Humaira and biryaani. I can't even imagine meeting a character like that.. and I miss the QH Shireen, 'Uh ho*! Kya Good luck hai, isme kya shaak hai .. dialogue? You should deff. use her signature dialogue in the next update or whenever Shireen Bi decided to pop up. Pairing her up with Asad, a big LOL. I could exactly picture his irritation and loss of control upon her non-stop chattering. Amazing ! *

I wanted to watch Asad and Shireen's interactions in the show, when Zoya was to work on her grand mission of uniting two families (which never happened nor is going to happen. I don't watch the show either.) I bet Asad & Shireen together would be a laugh riot without either of them trying to be least amount of funny. That is what I am trying to create here. Though Shireen wasn't much of a chatterbox in the show, but pearls of wisdom coming out of her mouth were always rofl worthy.😆
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Please PM me. I can't wait for more. I'm in more an amazing ride, I know for sure. :D x

Sure, will PM you.

Thank you for reading and commenting.😃

Originally posted by: gowtu

Wow.. It was awesome... Very gud stry line... I m so loving it... I hooked to the story now... Thnks for the pm.. Continue soon.. Pm me nxt prts too...

Originally posted by: Noe123

Thank you.

Yes, if it reminds you of Aisha, that is because Aisha is also based on Emma.😊