I am IN LOVEEE ! *giggles* *virtual hug*
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Thanks a tons Noe ! You're the best ! I've been love with HW and now this, voillaaa ! This is such an awesome Fic.. I feel like I am watching a movie, indeed. The reel of words is totally imaginative, detailed, precise and perfect. The characterization is abs. AWESOME ! I equally adore all the characters... well, er.. esp. Zoee's. tehee! Can't wait to meet Ayaan !
I can't believe you actually included the piece of shiz.. Akram as well in this Fic... well, he seems a bit mysterious anyways... weird vibes*
Zoe is such a sweet heart, dramatic, talkative, abs. adorable and cute and just ... AHMAZING! such a cuteesy, she reminds me of how she used to be in the show... I've quit the show and I really it miss at times, and yet, Your Fic (HW and this) ends up filling the void.
& Tanveer ! I was tried so hard not to LOOL... yet I couldn't control my giggles and chuckles of laughter... haha ! she's deff. something ! Crying at wedding for no reason, LMAO ! totally diff. from what an evil beep she is in the show ! bahaha. That was fun to read.. She sounds an introvert type, pretty mellow and 'what-tha-...?' type so far.. and I hope she stays that way. No triangle with Asad or anything... right?
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Awwh @ R&D... such an adorable couple. Reminds me of the past flashbacks in QH. How cute were they. I love em.
You're seriously creative. It's SO SO nice to read something totally different, unique.. hat ke story from the usual.. and I totally love that about you. Same goes with HW and this one, Lovely, Lovely characterization and plot ... you've earned 5+ stars and tons of thumbs up and hugs from me... You're talented and you've become one of my very favourite writer's on IF.. <333
PS; I just have to have to mention the use of 'classic Urdu' that you have portray in your Fic. esp. this one. Totally goes with Bhopal-ly background and so classically written ... you're really good. If you don't mind me asking, where are you from ?! :)
I don't think I've written this long of an update for you ... but here's all the praises and much more to come. You should really go for creating a blog for yourself... I'd love to catch up and read up everything from you.
& Ohhh.. how can I possibly forget Shireen Bi ?! What a chatter box ... ahahaa. I was totally cracking up.. I am not sure how I controlled my laughter. I am just wondering all the possibilities you've pulled up for Shireen to get her to this, LOL. her dialogues, Ya Allah. Kya Kamal dialogues likhe. It was pretty interesting rambling session and you had me thinking how much effort and thought you put in to her character connecting her tp this 'rishtedaar to that one in Hydrabad to her Humaira and biryaani. I can't even imagine meeting a character like that.. and I miss the QH Shireen, 'Uh ho*! Kya Good luck hai, isme kya shaak hai .. dialogue? You should deff. use her signature dialogue in the next update or whenever Shireen Bi decided to pop up. Pairing her up with Asad, a big LOL. I could exactly picture his irritation and loss of control upon her non-stop chattering. Amazing ! *
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Please PM me. I can't wait for more. I'm in more an amazing ride, I know for sure. :D x
Edited by hilly - 11 years ago