Asad-Zoya FF: Zoya Proposes, Asad Disposes I:Thread II Link on Pg 146 - Page 23

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Posted: 11 years ago
awsm part.
Superb one.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.
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Posted: 11 years ago
zoya ne radil ke shaadi karwa hi di ...n nw shez missing her phuphi ...
tanveer ...hopefully she doesnt eye asad here ...
update soon
n yes thnx a lot for d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Luckyforever

asad and zoya does not harbour any feelings for each other ...
it looks like radil love story with zoya as commentrator and asad as audience...
will there not be any asya ?...


Abhi to story ki shuruaat hui hain. Abhi se Asad aur Zoya ke baare main bata diya to kya mazaa?😉

Thanks for reading.
Posted: 11 years ago
Aw, I liked this update! Really enjoyed Asad and Zoya's moment together on the bench, and how he gave her his handkerchief.
Tanveer's from Mangalpur? 😲 LOL. 😆 For some reason, I find that hilarious. Don't mind me. 😆 But I understand you wanting Nisha to play her part, though. I think she'd fit this role best. :)
Continue soon! :D
-Fari. 😳 ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update...👏

Really like it...😊

Update nxt part soon...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Story is going really awesome...👏
So finally Zoya got Dilshad and Rashid married😆
Loved AsYa scene a lot...The way he suggests her,The way she grabbed his gulab jamun,the way he handed her a handkerchief were cute!🤗
Update soon...Waiting😊
Edited by manognasai - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey wat about the 3OSs?When are u updating them...?
Update soon...Waiting🤗
Edited by manognasai - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


I hope that Zoya will not play the cupid between Asad and Tanveer

I loved this update Continue soon please👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update..
so now Zoya going to match make Asad and Tanveer
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am IN LOVEEE ! *giggles* *virtual hug*
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Thanks a tons Noe ! You're the best ! I've been love with HW and now this, voillaaa ! This is such an awesome Fic.. I feel like I am watching a movie, indeed. The reel of words is totally imaginative, detailed, precise and perfect. The characterization is abs. AWESOME ! I equally adore all the characters... well, er.. esp. Zoee's. tehee! Can't wait to meet Ayaan !
I can't believe you actually included the piece of shiz.. Akram as well in this Fic... well, he seems a bit mysterious anyways... weird vibes*
Zoe is such a sweet heart, dramatic, talkative, abs. adorable and cute and just ... AHMAZING! such a cuteesy, she reminds me of how she used to be in the show... I've quit the show and I really it miss at times, and yet, Your Fic (HW and this) ends up filling the void.
& Tanveer ! I was tried so hard not to LOOL... yet I couldn't control my giggles and chuckles of laughter... haha ! she's deff. something ! Crying at wedding for no reason, LMAO ! totally diff. from what an evil beep she is in the show ! bahaha. That was fun to read.. She sounds an introvert type, pretty mellow and 'what-tha-...?' type so far.. and I hope she stays that way. No triangle with Asad or anything... right?
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Awwh @ R&D... such an adorable couple. Reminds me of the past flashbacks in QH. How cute were they. I love em.
You're seriously creative. It's SO SO nice to read something totally different, unique.. hat ke story from the usual.. and I totally love that about you. Same goes with HW and this one, Lovely, Lovely characterization and plot ... you've earned 5+ stars and tons of thumbs up and hugs from me... You're talented and you've become one of my very favourite writer's on IF.. <333

PS; I just have to have to mention the use of 'classic Urdu' that you have portray in your Fic. esp. this one. Totally goes with Bhopal-ly background and so classically written ... you're really good. If you don't mind me asking, where are you from ?! :)
I don't think I've written this long of an update for you ... but here's all the praises and much more to come. You should really go for creating a blog for yourself... I'd love to catch up and read up everything from you.
& Ohhh.. how can I possibly forget Shireen Bi ?! What a chatter box ... ahahaa. I was totally cracking up.. I am not sure how I controlled my laughter. I am just wondering all the possibilities you've pulled up for Shireen to get her to this, LOL. her dialogues, Ya Allah. Kya Kamal dialogues likhe. It was pretty interesting rambling session and you had me thinking how much effort and thought you put in to her character connecting her tp this 'rishtedaar to that one in Hydrabad to her Humaira and biryaani. I can't even imagine meeting a character like that.. and I miss the QH Shireen, 'Uh ho*! Kya Good luck hai, isme kya shaak hai .. dialogue? You should deff. use her signature dialogue in the next update or whenever Shireen Bi decided to pop up. Pairing her up with Asad, a big LOL. I could exactly picture his irritation and loss of control upon her non-stop chattering. Amazing ! *
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Please PM me. I can't wait for more. I'm in more an amazing ride, I know for sure. :D x
Edited by hilly - 11 years ago

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