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Noe123

@Noe123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#751

Originally posted by: madhvi4gurti
Oh my my that was hilarious!!!!🤣
wrong venue...i could actually see Asad's shocked face in front of me!!!!🤣
brilliant concept loved it!

😆

Thank you

Bechara Asad. Really between a rock and a hard place. 😆

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Noe123

@Noe123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#752

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa
Noe that was just so hilarious. Loved the last couple of lines where asad was shocked at going to the wrong function.

and the title suited the story so well.

Thanks for the pm n please keep writing.

Thank you.

Glad that you liked the OS and the title as well. 😃

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Noe123

@Noe123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#753

Originally posted by: Nikita_Smith
Ah, I love such One Shots which have this slice of life essence (:

Thank you 😊

Nice OS Noe 😳 I know you promised three but one can't help but wish to read more of such wonderful One Shots about Asad and Zoya's married life. I love it how you create some really simple yet subtle romantic moments between our beloved couple. One of my most favourites was when Zoya kept her head on Asad's chest and listened to his heartbeats.

I also love that scene. It was written reminiscing BNHH scenes. Glad that you find it as endearing as I found it while writing it.😳

Few days ago I was reading that Chapter of 'Heartbeat Warfare' in which Asad and Zoya's confession happened. I got just as engrossed while reading the chapter as I was when I read it for the first time. You know what Noe, I don't think I would be able to root for anyother couple like I did for Asad and Zoya and that's not only because of QH but also because of your wonderful stories<3
I am touched and honored. Really! 😳 Thank you 😊 Keep loving them. They deserve all the love in the world (and, like my stories, too 😆)

Thank you so much (:

Looking forward to the next 'Heartbeat Warfare' OS (:

😊

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treasure11

@treasure11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#754

Absolutely loved it !

specially the count on pani puri 😳That was sweet!

They ended up in some other wedding 😲🤣aurr bhagoo zoya ki cooking se 🤣

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EkPagliLadki

@EkPagliLadki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#755

Loved it. I remember entering the wrong party hall and gorging food and then realizing that S@#t its not this one but the adjacent hall! And its always fun to gatecrash weddings during college days. 😆

And I wanted to tell you this for so long that I love the way you relate real life things with Asya. Be it this os or the previous one or the ones you wrote long ago. I just love this element of your writing😊

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komalpreet kaur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#756

Heyyy Noe

I started reading this story about 3 days ago

got the link from Completed FFs thread

and I feel lucky that I volunteered reading this story😳

this story had put me through various phases of anxiety but I enjoyed it

I want to mention that I too flip through the last of the pages of a book to see if everything got alright by end...I remember one incident...I was actually reading the book " A Thousand Splendid Suns"...which was a sad story...and I got tired of crying and worrying so I skipped the story till the last page and read what was written in last paragraph...and then after completing my investigation I continued reading from the page I had dropped😛

this story had actually put me through a solid anxiety...the scene when zoya got some kind of post-surgery complication...it was truly frightening...I felt knots in my stomach...I was constantly chanting God's name...I felt pity for asad...its really very hard to see ur loved one going through such life-threatening situation...I just hope best for everybody...may god bless everyone

Noe it was completely fair on your part to put ur readers through anxiety...that's what story was meant for right?

it is a wonderful piece of writing👏

u were fully able to describe all the emotions...I felt each one of them as real...asad's fearul yet angry behaviour when zoya's situation get critical, zoya's worry that what if she won't survive and the way asad consoled her was commendable

I truly adored zoya's way of proposal *paper balls OMG*😆

it was a story of selfless love and I learnt a lot from it

THANK YOU SO MUCH

May God Bless You

Lots & Lots of Love,

Komal⭐️

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manognasai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#757

So cute... 😃
So Zoya learned cooking finally but Asad is still not confident about her new experiments!
Love their cute conversations a lot.
Asad chose reception food over Zoya's food and ended up in wrong function because of traffic!
Loved it to bits... 😊
The way Asad takes care of her food and every small detail is so sweet...Loved the way he is counting panipuris and Zoya immediately came back to him when he said no!
They enjoyed the function without actually knowing the host... 😃

Edited by manognasai - 11 years ago

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#758

That One shot was hilarious 😆 So like Zoya to feel like attending a wedding and finding one, then ending up at a wrong one, but luckily someone recognized them. I love the little things Asad does for Zoya, how he maintains his serious stance but also gives in and allows the child in her to goof around. I want to go back and read it again because it made me smile so much .

I read somewhere that you might write a sequel to Heartbeat Warfare and it would be about Zoya's journey of being a mother. I REALLY hope you do that, once your current story is over that is. I don't think I've had enough of Dr Khan and Zoya SO PLEASE do keep that thought 😳 😆

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Nim

@Rarepearl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#759

Hey Noe,

I know its been ages since u put this up but I just couldn't read it at dat time.

Just read it now & believe me, it was Amazing. I sooo loved it. This couple is so very adorable & cute. I really love their interactions. couldn't stop laughing when Zoe realized dey were at the wrong reception.

Love..

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Noe123

@Noe123

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#760

Originally posted by: rajsmi
Cute story...This Asad and Zoya are more sober in their interactions...Different and cute!
Please pm me your stories

Yes, this version of Asad and Zoya is different. Even Zoya here is relatively mature and Asad is the quietest. They have seen tough situations over a short period of time. You may have noticed that this OS is an offshoot of a completely different story.

But, they are still adorable. 😃

Thanks for noticing the difference and liking them.