AsYa SS: My Own Love Story Discontinued

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Stephy

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Posted: 11 years ago

AN: Hey readers, I decided to write an SS on AsYa (Kabhi) and my own make up couple AriYan. I hope you guys like this concept. These two couple are related to each other as Ariel is Zoya's half cousin and Ryan is friends with Asad. So one chapter will be with Asya then the next with Ariyan and like that. Character descriptions of Ariel and Ryan is down below.

PS: This SS will be updated on Fridays and sometimes Thursdays.

So I hope you guys enjoy reading this. And I love hashtags just 'cause I can.

#it follows the time around Asad playing guitar with his family and Zoya while the people with Ayaan at Siddiqui Mansion, do the same. It's the song sequence. It's a double story which means it switches AsYa to AriYan.

#Asad is still the same angry young man (judgmental also and a chauvinist)who hates his father. But Asad is a guy who is afraid to love so he has physical relationships with numerous girls which last for a week before the girls get tried of him. Which means that he was a playboy from age 19-22 but he got tricked by Tanya, a gold digger to give her a job in Dilshad Constructions and found out she was using their time together for money so he gave up being a playboy.

#Asad still distrust and hates Zoya.

#Tanveer is the good one but has a mean twin: Tanya.

#Asad and Zoya get married due circumstances but they fall in love during their marriage and Zoya gets pregnant.

#Zoya is 7-9 month pregnant when the ABBU truth is revealed.

#Main other characters: Ariel Rebecca Kingston, Ryan Aharon Knight,

# Minor Characters: will be added soon.

# AriYan is a couple name for Ariel and Ryan as they are also the main characters

# Ryan is a British born- Indian while Ariel is an American born-Indian.

# Ryan is a cold, mean, hot as hell playboy CEO like Asad in his young adult stage.

# Ariel is Priya (Zainab's half sister) and Nikhil Kingston's daughter while she is Jesse's little sister(age differ 6 yrs) and Zeenat's half cousin.

#Ryan and Ariel are married.

Sketch of the new main characters: (I picked singers instead of actors).

Ariel 'Ari' Kingston- Shreya Goshal: Zoya's sarcastic yet kind and humble twenty-two year old half cousin turned best friend. She plays lead guitar in the worship team at church on Sundays but works as chief fashion writer for Seventeen magazine in the category of Modest is Hottest weekly guide. She is a genius with stylish and tech savvy mind as she has the newest phone to tablet to PC. She lives with her roommates: Rina and Rochelle near the major shopping ports of NYC and Central Park. She has a love-hate relationship with her parents' friends' son, CEO of DK Constructions: Ryan Knight after he spilled hot coffee on her then blaming her for it. They are married. She falls in loves with him.

Ryan Knight- Jay Sean: The twenty-seven year old rude and crude atheistic CEO of one of the US' finest architecture companies. He's been a playboy since high school and absolutely despises love as an emotion because his father passed away which caused his mother's suicide when he was sixteen after watching his mother fall into depression. He raised Nadia, his little lemon since then. And would do anything for his sister. He also was a Christian but his dad dying from cancer caused him to lose faith in God and love. He is in love with Ariel.He is the global colleague and good friend of Asad.

Index:

Prologue on pg. 2

Edited by StephyM - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice story

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WOW...! Superbly fab...! I love it..! Start soon..!

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Stephy

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Posted: 11 years ago

Prologue: Zoya and Ariel

Zoya watched as Asad and Najma danced while she spun Dilshad around as they danced also to her Phuphi's favorite song.

She was in love with this family, the love they all shared reminded her of her aunt and uncle back in New York. She missed them including her cousin: Ariel.

Her Aunt or Masi Priya was born in Ahmedabad but as a six year old, moved to Bhopal with her widower of a father Dr. Benjamin Mathew since he got married to Zaida Farooqui and they had a daughter: Zainab. Priya and her father were christians but Zainab and Zaida Farooqui were muslims.

And later as a twenty-one year old Priya met Nikhil in a village when he was twenty-seven and was visiting with his sister(Katherine) and brothers(Jameson and Rohan). Nikhil Kingston, the son of two well-known Christian missionaries.

They got married in the following year in Ahmedabad with his family including his parents, Benjamin, Zaida and Zainab.

Next year, they had a son: Jesse Nathaniel and in the US, six years later a daughter: Ariel Rebecca.

But at the same time around Priya's wedding, her fifteen year old Ammi got secretly married to a guy who was twelve years older than her and gave birth to Zeenat and then six years later gave birth to Zoya. Then her dad left them for the streets but they were taken care of by Benjamin and Zaida before Benjamin died from cancer and Zaida became a widow.

Zaida with Zoya, Zeenat, and Zainab went to Napa Valley the home of Dr. Priya and Rev. Nikhil Kingston in California. Priya, Zaida, and Zainab became a citizen of the US while Zoya, Jesse and Zeenat became a citizen through their parents as they were under aged.

Three-five years later,

Zainab and took her two daughters to Bhopal but in circumstances died while Zoya and Zeenat went missing then later in few weeks found by their aunt and uncle.

As a twenty-two year old Zoya, a pre-law student went to India and that's partially how she ended up with this amazing family.

Zoya thought about this as Dilshad pulled her into a hug. She smiled enjoying her Phuphi's hug as they reminded her of her aunt and ammi.

Asad and Najma had already left when Dilshad had her sit down.

Dilshad clutching Zoya's hand asked her, " Beta, I love you and so does Najma but will you marry Asad?"

Zoya stared at her with a shocked gaze before Dilshad continued.

"I know you're a bit shocked but I see the way Asad looks at you and he needs you in his life." Dilshad begged.

"Why does he need me?" Zoya asked softly.

"He was a playboy in his young adult days but he was one of those shy ones that the shy girls looked at. They would have a conversation about poetry then go out and stop after that because the girls were done. Every week was like that and he had this one girl: she was perfect for him as she had her head covered and spoke softly. But he gave her a job at the company to discover that she was using him for the job and money. So he lost trust in love years before that but this caused him to hate women especially ones like you: loud, outgoing and wear jeans. Despite that I know you're perfect for him" Dilshad told her as Zoya thought over it. She knew she needed to stay in India so that was okay for her.

"I will do it." Zoya grimaced as Dilshad hugged her.

"Asad beta, come here." Dilshad called out as Asad strode in.

"Yes Ammi," Asad asked totally ignoring Zoya.

"Beta, for my sake will you marry Zoya?" Dilshad asked with tear-filled eyes.

Asad again ignoring Zoya, silently furious at his life, replied, "Jee Ammi," in a calm voice.

Meanwhile in New York.

A girl with long wavy black hair and tan skinned clothed in a black Vera Wang turtle-neck dress and Marc Ekco boots with her red Louis Vuitton hand bag strode through Central Park for the subway on the phone with her older half-cousin.

"Zeenat Di, for the last time I am not going on Shaadi.com, Gujarati Matrimony or Christian Mingle. " She paused.

And in the phone a voice replied, "Why not?"

"Because my career just started and dating websites are stupid. I'll find someone when I'm ready." Ariel snarled.

Zeenat called out, "why." before Ariel hung up angrily, trust Zee Di to piss her off as usual.

Ariel angrily walked to a coffee shop near the subway but she was walking, a large muscular frame knocked her off her feet as the scalding hot coffee got on her.

"Ow!" Ariel groaned before she heard a chuckle.

"Look what you did, my coffee cup is empty now, this was ten bucks." the person exclaimed in his masculine voice.

Ariel glared up to see a really attractive man around his late twenties and in a designer three piece suit with a brief case. He had grey-blue eyes and a buzz cut.

She stood up glaring, " It was your fault not mine, wow you are blind."

He smirked as he grabbed her arm, "actually you weren't paying attention so it's your fault."

Ariel scoffed, "You're At fault, dipthong." as she angrily freed her arm and walked away as he smirked at her backside.

Two hours later,

Ariel walked in her apartment to see her parents and a elderly woman.

"Hey mom and dad," Ariel greeted them with a kiss on their cheek.

"Beta, sit down." Priya replied as Ariel sat down on the stool, waiting for her parents to speak.

"Well, this is Gita Knight, when Nikhil was at Oxford with Gita's son Robert, they both made a deal that each of their children will marry each other: a son and daughter." Priya explained.

Ariel listened carefully as she heard the door bell ring, and Nikhil opened the door.

"I understand but who am I going to marry?" Ariel carefully asked.

"Him." Priya pointed to the door as Ariel looked at it.

"You." Ariel snarled seeing the Coffee spilling creep.

"Me." he smirked.

"Beta, this is Ryan Aharon Knight, your future husband." Priya explained.

"What!" Ariel and Ryan at the same time screamed.

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Aashka

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow...! A fab start...! Mindblowing updaate...!

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Swetha Natarajan

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Posted: 11 years ago

wowowowo!!!! thats sooo cool!!!

love it...yay!!!

a new story...with a new concept but still merged with the old one of the show...!!!! i must say...u have a great writting skill...!!!!!

asad was once a playboy...that so very cool!!!!

oh my really!?!?! jay sean!!!!! is ryan!!!! my favourite!!!!

i really feel like to

' dance with you"

i guess you,my friend, have a " my own way"

pls continue this story...and dont make this " all for nothing"

asad and ryan are gonna be on zoya and ariel like " eyes on you"

thanks for the pm and informing me ...

eager to read this

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rads73937

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice start.

Thanx for the pm. Take care.

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NAVI55

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Posted: 11 years ago

Interesting story👍🏼

Looking forward to reading more😃

A fabulous start dear👍🏼

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Stephy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#10

Chapter One: Zoya and Asad.

Zoya sat in her room, wondering how Mr. Khan feeling about this. And she could already tell he was a little upset but mainly furious.

She remembered that she had been living with them for a month and half now and since then she thought that Mr.Khan was an akdu and Hitler Bhai but there was a nicer side of him she saw secretly when he was talking to his Ammi and Najma. Also when he saved her from those goons when she ran away. It was like he was so worried when he held her.

She was slowly falling for him maybe this nikaah would be perfect but she knew that he did not like her as he almost said that he hated her.

Asad Ahmed Khan was a name that brought shivers down her spline. He was intense yet caring, cold yet quiet and angry. His name was a rose as Shakespeare put it in his famous tragic play: Romeo and Juliet. She knew that didn't make sense but his temper was red as a rose.

Everything about him made her heart skip beats and caused butterflies in her stomach especially his body. When she had walked in on him that day the butterflies went into overdrive hence her stuttering awkward behavior. Those six packs made her weak in the knees and his muscular shoulder looked so relaxed when he was not tensed and angry. She was so attracted toward him. He was irresistibly gorgeous it was like he was a brand new IPhone.

She was smitten before but she was almost there to love him and she loved the feeling. . .

Meanwhile

Asad paced around in the room, thinking about agreeing to the marriage. "What's wrong with Ammi?" he asked himself.

"Why the hell she would pick Miss. Farooqui?" Asad mused thinking about it. Sure, Miss Farooqui is pretty but she is loud, messy and a misfit. I doubt she will make a good Bahu for the family.

"Maybe Ammi thinks she's perfect but why?" Asad asked himself as he walks out to the kitchen.

But there are more things to Miss. Farooqui as she is lovable and friendly to Ammi and Najma. At the mazaar, she brought tears to my eyes with her tears as she cried in that beautiful dress.

Maybe Ammi has a reason for choosing her, Asad thought as he saw Zoya siting on the bench

Precap-Ariel and Ryan: "Why Mom? This idiotic creep spilled coffee on me and didn't even say sorry"

"I only apologize to pretty girls not crazy ones."

"Oh really, ya know you talk a lot! How about you try talking with a busted lip?"