asya SS punishment of love #2 part 12-17....link to #3 - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ImmortalLove

Hey..

Congrats on new thread.. U very well deserve this.. thank you so much 😃

And read two parts in one go. .. :)

And awesome parts as usual.. thanks
Sorry 4 replying late .. :( no problem

Continue soon.. sure
And thxs 4 PM :) welcome

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Posted: 11 years ago
update soon orange😭😡
warna me tera juice bana ke pee jaunga 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linnet



Aww

Love it thanks

Jealous asad yeah

Keep writing

Thanks 4 the pm welcome

Update soon sure

Love
Linnet
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thanks dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
yaa love the jealous asad 😳😆
ur sis also very fond of chocolate... Heyu put this chocolate scene inspired by ur sis naa😕😆
kitni der me update hoga mujhe batana...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

loved the update thanks
sidra wants to go to work with her dad.aahhh yeah 😆
love the jealous asad and zoya realization that sophia
is not there loved the concern she saw in his eyes and him
almost stroking her cheeks when he took her to her room
these two have to really sit down and talk to clear all mu they are very stubborn will not do that easily
sidra is so cute thanks
continue soon sure

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

yaa love the jealous asad 😳😆
ur sis also very fond of chocolate... Heyu put this chocolate scene inspired by ur sis naa😕😆
kitni der me update hoga mujhe batana...😆


hmmm
ara nahe chocolates k liye to mai bhe aese he karte hun pehle aik phir do, it was inspired by own
sure
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: divya_asya

hey ur ss was awesome
loved it
do pm me for the next part


thanks dear
m glad
sure dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover


hmmm
ara nahe chocolates k liye to mai bhe aese he karte hun pehle aik phir do, it was inspired by own
sure

ok orange 😆
lagta hain ur chocolate fan n hv fantasy 😆 look i also love chocolates very much 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

ok orange 😆
lagta hain ur chocolate fan n hv fantasy 😆 look i also love chocolates very much 😳


that's nice, brother-sister have same choices😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 14;-



asad and sidra were back in sometime asad gave zoya and after taking them she went to sleep, she really needed rest and in all that time asad and sidra were in the living room asad working on his laptop and sidra enjoying her favorite cartoon... soon it was evening when zoya woke up only to find sidra sleeping hugging her, zoya kept lying as she don't want to wake her up and then everything again started playing in her mind'sofia...where is she? why is she not here? with asad? should i ask asad no...no bad idea, he wont answer... i have to find out on my own her thoughts were break when sidra turned on the other leaving her, she sighed in relieve now she can stand up... she directly went to the washroom to freshen up, she was still not feeling well but was better than before

zoya came to the living room only to find kamran cooking in kitchen, she looked here and there asad was nowhere to be seen 'madam do you want anything' ask kamran as soon he noticed her 'ummm nothing...wo...asad kahan hai?' she asked hesitating a bit 'mam sir got a call so he left when sidra baby went to sleep, he told me to inform you that he will be back in sometime..' informed kamran 'ohkie...' replied zoya walking towards the couch and sitting there... she opened her mobile and saw a message from najma 'salam zoya, i am in bhopal now a days, can u please come to meet me?' she was very happy reading it, she will meet najma after six years but her excitement was no more as she remembered court decision that she can't keep contact with her family during these seven days but i talk to mohsin too even when asad was there and he did'nt stopped me then why will he do when i want to meet najma, i guess i should call najma and decide what i should do now and then she called najma

'assalam-o-alikum zoya' greeted najma after recieving the call 'walaikum-as-salam najma...how's you?' asked zoya after greeting her back 'i am fine and you?' i am fine too and how is my prince shezad?' asked zoya about najma's 2 years old son 'he is fine zoya...umm zoya are you coming to meet me?' 'i too wanted to talk to about this but first tell when you came bhopal?' 'two days before zoya and...' 'what Allah Miyah what's wrong with you tamatar, you came india two days before and you are telling it to me now?' 'zoya zoya please calm down, actually ayaan bhaijan said that i can't contact you that's why i did'nt inform you but then today i thought that no one will know it if i will message you' 'ohkay, so what to do now?' asked zoya totally confuse about how to meet her 'ummm, shall i...i i ' she hesitate 'i what najma?' 'i come there?' she blurted out finally 'what? no how will asad react? ' 'i really meet you zoya' said najma and but only she knew that she wanted to see her brother too, the day after tomorrow is her bhaijan's birthday, how much she pretend to the world, to her husband, to her ami and zoya that she hate him but she cry alone, only she knows how much she miss her bhaijaan, his care for her, she can't forget what he had did for her all his life, he was like her second mother... 'najma how can i...?' 'please let me come there and i will handle the rest' 'acha chalo you come then we will see that what we should do next' 'thank you so much zoya i will be there soon' said najma before disconnecting Ya Allah please help us and save us

zoya was so impatient to meet najma and on the other side najma was going to see her bhaijaan after a long time and zoya too, she manged everything, she lied to farhan that she is going to see her friend and ask nikhat to handle shehzad and then she made there way to Khan Villa...she was so happy...zoya was pacing in the living room and sidra was just staring her and was asking again and again that what happen mama and her answere nothing baby and then the door bell rang and zoya almost ran to open the door, sidra followed her YaAllah najma...you look so slim, Omg what happen to my tamatar...' said zoya hugging her 'zoya...please' said najma broken the hug again turning red like tamatar 'oh thank God here is my tamatar' joked zoya placing her finger on najma's cheek 'tamatar phoppo...' came a excited sidra and najma sat on her knees to hug her beautiful neice 'oh my sweetheart, kaisa ho?' 'i am fine phoppo...' 'acha ab chalo lets go inside' said zoya closing the main door

they talked, laughed and enjoyed and finally after an hour or so najma asked her about asad 'umm, zoya where is he?' asked najma and zoya understand who is that HE... 'umm actually...' started zoya but before she say the door knob twisted and here he comes in his 3 piece suit looks like he just returned from a meeting...both the ladies stood up from the couch while sidra just ran to asad jumping in his arms and he took her happily 'how is my princess?? missed daddy?' asked asad, may be he did'nt noticed najma till now 'yes i did but daddy i am so happy...' acha why?' asked asad 'daddy see there' said sidra raising her finger pointed towards najma and asad froze in his steps 'najma' was only he could whisper...zoya looked at both shocked syblings, she can feel, from last 2 hours how impatient najma was to meet her brother and she too knew how much asad love his ami and najma yeah they are angry with each other but there love for each other can't be finish...take her example...uhh she should give sometime alone

she just walked to asad and took sidra from him, he did'nt even respond as if he don't noticed her taking sidra so she just silenty walk to her room with sidra in her arms soon asad made his way to najma 'how are you?' he asked slowly 'fine..umm you?' she asked not looking him 'how i looks..see' he said calmly but she did'nt ignored the sarcasm behind his tune so she looked him and was able to spot tears in his eyes 'without my baby sister and without my ami...two important reasons of my life, i am very fine' he added and it brought tears in her eyes and without thinking anything else she hugged him 'i missed you a lot bhaijan, i was'nt able to hate you...i am sorry' she mumbled 'shh, stop crying tamatar...' he hushed her after wiping away his own tears... 'looks like my tamatar is no tamatar now?' he said broking the hug and wiping her lefted tears from his thumb making her shy with his comment, she bend down and took her mobile opening images and giving the mobile to him, he frowned while taking it 'what' 'see the picture' she said pointing the open pic 'Ya Allah, he is..is your son?' asad almost jumped his happiness knew no boundries and she nodded happily

sorry for the short update but i am very busy
ignore my mistakes plz
plz leave your views, it encourage me a lot
Edited by asyaarshilover - 11 years ago

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