Asya ff : jaane kab hum apke hogaye link to #2 on pg1 - Page 68

Originally posted by: pwenCezz_symrun

Ressy
unressy
hello shello🤗
oops!! m so super late (hiding behind the couch)😆
but uh know my actual reason nah..so i guess i m forgiven now nahi?
okay!! so coming to the update, how shall i start..ummm
i just read some 2to 3 chapters nd have actually realise that uh have now grown up to be a romantic writer...yup uh heard it right..Our Choti si pyaari si Romantic Writer😆
the cute cute friendship or more then friendship bond they share is really amazing...
really they r such a cutie pie..truly made for each other...
aww Asad calling Zoya as Princess is so sweet..nd he is actually treating her as a real princess.😳.pampering her a lot...oh god i want to be in Zoya's place..
haay Sleepy Asad..nd Zoe planning ti splash water on him..really a silly girl she is..but our Asad stopped her...hmm Smart boy😛
So they both r out of town so m expecting more romance..uh know romance se kabhi mera dil nahi vartaa..😎
but the update was full of mitwa moments nd AsYa's eyelocks..
so now both of them r realizing the importance of each other..nice improvement in their relation..😳
uff waiting for their confession..hope they will blurt out their feelings very soon.😳.n when r they going to meet thier family..
okay!! so overall it was a Faadu chapter as usual..i don't need to explain how marvellously penned it was..it was magnificent nd splendid..aur Awesome writer toh tum pehele se hi ho nahi?😉
nywayz continue soonist as possible warna ur very own Bhaseena bi aayengi..😆

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Part 7 n Part 8

Awesome Parts Riddhi👏😊

Princess n Gabbar😳

Zoya wanting to come wid Asad😛

So, she cooks for Asad😆

But Asad has already booked her tickets😃

Asad singing for Zoya😳

Asad n Zoya hvng a great time while driving😳

Zoya's name changed to 'Zoya Ahmed Khan'😉

Both Zoya n Asad thinks abt it

Zoya rembers d prank she n Humeira played on Ayaan🤣

Zoya tries to play it on Asad but he catches her🤣

D doorbell knock ruined Asad n Zoya's moment😆

Both Asad n Zoya r confused abt their feelings

Update soon n PM me😃

I hv an request😊. I hope u don't mind. As Zoya calls 'Gabbar' n he sumtyms gets irritated then can u add a funny sequence in one of ur furture parts where Asad vl make Zoya dance like real Gabbar. It can be a real fun sequence or dream sequence. Remember, d dream sequences of Zoya imagining Asad as James Bond.

Originally posted by: rosyluck

potato????????? 😕

im not fat.,

but you can call me it if you like it

you deserve to feel honoured because

you wrote an amazing story.

Originally posted by: pwenCezz_symrun

finally updated my comment above🤪

Originally posted by: pwenCezz_symrun

wow!! i can't believe i really unressed my comment here..yippee

Originally posted by: aishw09

Continue soon

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

Hey hi

Dont need to hide behind a couch..

Okay i knw it na so why worried dont apologise plz...

Omg romantic writer??

I m gonna faint fr sure

N do u like d chapter that i wrote fr u i dedicated it to u??

I hope u...

Oye hoye n why so,... why want to b at zoya's place

I m there na, will pamper u...lol

Hmmm, abhi toh bahut time h

Till then keep enjoying their lovely moments coz i want to show some :p

dont worry will b soon...

Omg threatening me wid my bhaiseena bi??

Will try to bring put some moments more

I m very poor at writing romantic sequence ...

Dont worry stay tuned

Thank u so much

Thank u so much

Thank u thank u thank u thank u so much

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

Lol u r too cute

Oh should i come n pinch u??

Lol

Love u so much