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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

Doll when u give update? Jaldi update karo na sister plz.


Pland something
So will update according to it
Most probably tmmrw or tday
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

Plz update soon
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Chill bhaiya chill
Update on d way
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

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Thank u so much
It really makes me happy that sum1 is eager tl tead my updates
Thanq so much
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Posted: 11 years ago
ridz!! tam" jyr" update karavm v" ch"
in case I wrote it wrong, Ridz When r uh updating??
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Posted: 11 years ago
plz plz plz update it very soonish
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Posted: 11 years ago


but when will u update ?

i am eagerly waiting

and watching forward for ur update


Originally posted by: riddhi1206


Hey thank u so much
Ya i know when she enters d house
Aww thst really sweet of u
Thanq so much
It really means alot
Thank u so much
Cant stop thanking

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Posted: 11 years ago

hello everyone! 😃

n here goes my 1000th post! 😃

yay , i turned goldie! 😛

i can hear myself saying baby doll m sone di! 😆

thank u all of u who commented and liked, thank u so much 😳

welcome new readers! 🤗

so here goes the 6th chapter..

ppl last time the comments were comparitively less, it was my fav chapter till now..😊

so plz cmmnt this time.. 😃

enjoy or suffer!😆

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chapter : 6 coz u r my bestie...



Who says that relations take time. they can be formed in minutes or can also take years. it depends on one's effort n understanding. it has been few months i m here, but wid all of u i share a bond which is something very special and unnamed. i m blessed that i made an account n got to know u ppl. n so does asad n zoya.. its just a week n they r just insperable...

New York:

Humera : appi , zoya ka kuch pata chala? 😕

Zeenat : nahi abhi tak nahi, usne do din se phone nahi kia!😭

Dilshad : koi baat nahi zeenat , vo thik hogi tum chinta mat karo!😃

Zeenat : ji!😃

Ayaan : par ammi mona esa kabhi nahi karti mana ki vo superwoman h lekin still...

Rashid : ayaan vo phone kardegi... Agar kal tak nahi kia to vo vese bhi Bhopal m hi h to asad ko boldenge vo dekhlega. 😃

Ayaan : ji 😊

India :

They reached home, suddenly zoya remembered something and she started shouting and jumping!

Asad : zoya zoya! Relax what happened? 😕

Zoya : asad can I borrow your phone? 😛

Asad : ya sure! 😃

Zoya dialed someone's number!

Zoya : hello! 😉

Zeenat : hello? 😉

Zoya : apii! I m so so so so so so so so so so so so so so 😭

Zeenat : age bolegi meri maa? 😡

Zoya : SORRY! 😆

Zeenat : yaad agayi tujhe? Pata h yaha hum sab kitne ghabraye hue the? Jaan nikal rahi thi humari! Pata nahi zoya kaha hogi , kesi hogi, kya kar rahi hogi? Thik to h?

Zoya : sorry na appi! Maaf kardo na! please please! 😭

Zeenat : thik he chal maaf kiya ! par tu ye kis number se baat kar rahi ? where is your phone!

Realization dawned upon zoya! Yes she wasn't having her own phone and now she didn't wanted to stress her aapi conveying all the things which took place !

Zoya : vo aapi , galti se mera phone tut gaya h , aur sim bhi kharab hogaya h , isliye dusre number se kar rahi hu! Don't worry me jaldi hi naya kharid lungi aur sab vaha kese h ? m ap sabko bahut miss kar rahi hu! Thike chalo m apse baad m baat karti hu! 😃

Zeenat : sab thik he aur phone karna bhulna mat ! 😡

Humera, ayaan , dilshad, Rashid and anwar : we miss u too! 😃

Zoya chuckled and disconnected the call. She was almost on a verge of crying!

Asad : hey ! don't cry ? mmm vo kya kehte h ? zoya I hate tears! 😆

Zoya again chuckled at his way and asad embraced her!

Asad : shhh ! don't worry ! everything will be okay! 😃

And so their life moved on! They themselves didn't know that when they turned to be the bestest of friend ! they were just inseparable. They shared joy, sorrow, fun , secrets, feelings, desires! Who says that relations take time, it was just a week but they were too far to say strangers.

Asad : good morning zoya! I am getting late for work , so m chalta hu! Take care! 😃

Zoya : okay thikhe par please jaldi ana! M paami aunty ki investigation se thak gayi hu , ek hafta hogaya h mujhe yaha, phir bhi vo apni ye bondgiri stop nahi kar rahi! 😭

Asad : hehe okay! Bye princess! 😆

He pecked her forhead and turned

Zoya : bye gabbar! 😛

Asad : zoya! 😡

She chuckled and went inside. She turned on the telivison and switched to music channels. There were melodies playing but one song made her jump and made her dance!

Outside:

Asad : oh god! Mai to apni file andar hi bhulgaya! Leke ata hu!

Inside :

zoya was dancing on the song tooh < gori tere pyaar m>

Asad entered the house to see a dancing zoya .

Zoya didn't realized and went to asad pointing and lipsing the line :

Everybody does it and you can do it too..

Left right kare chen churaye tooh tooh tooh tooh..

And she started jumping on sofa and dancing . after a minute realization dawned upon her. Asad was standing there amazed and clapping for her dance. 👏

Zoya : vo... actually.. ha vo .. 😕

And she started walking on sofa thinking of some explaination . she stopped and saw asad still smirking at her. He went and pulled her gently down the sofa.

Asad : relax thakur , m tumhe kha nahi jaunga! 😆

And headed towards his room singing everybody does it and you can do it too!

Zoya,s jaw touched the ground as she was feeling embarrassed and angry at the same time. Asad came out still singing the song, zoya ran behind him angrily yelling his name! Asad giggled and ran!

Evening :

Asad returned from office to find zoya sleeping on the sofa. He went near her and kneeled down in front of her. He tucked the lock of hair which was disturbing him to see her beautiful and innocent face. He saw the pizza and chips wrappers withered around , his sofa was a complete mess but the lady sleeping there in her cute white knee length frock and long ponytail made it beautiful.

Asad : ya allah! Ye ladki kabhi nahi sudhregi, kitni baar kaha k room sojaya karo lekin nahi , meri baat manti hi kab h! 😛

Zoya in sleepy voice, her eyes closed : jhoot mat bolo , hamesha to manti hu! 😡

Asad : oh to princess jag rahi h , come on get up, lets have brunch.😃

Zoya : nahi I m envy with u! 😡

Asad : kyu? Ab iss gabar ne kya kiya? 😕

Zoya got up angrily and yelled at him: acha ! subah itna chidaya aur puch rahe ho kya kiya? Bewcoof! 😡

Asad : oh to princess islie naraz h , I m sorry! Maaf kardo sarkar.😊

Zoya : no! 😡

Asad can never see his princess upset , so he slowly removed a DVD of movies which she demanded for. Seeing that her happiness has no bound, she started jumping and squealing. She hugged him chanting thank u.

Asad: acha ab maaf kia? 😃

Zoya : nahi! mera aj ka rose n chocolate kaha h? 😡

Asad : vo to m bhul hi gaya... after a pause when she was going to shout he said ... ese kese ho sakta h 😉

And he gave her a yellow rose and chocolates and she forgave him by hugging him.

Asad : khane ki taiyaari kare?😕

They both got up and started deciding what to be cooked for dinner actually , more like fighting!

After dinner:

Zoya : chalo gabbar lets see R... rajkumar!😃

Asad : abhi?😕

Zoya: aur nahi to kya? Plz plz plz

Asad : ok fine 😃

They started watching the movie. In between when there were fighting sequence , zoya used to get up on the sofa and started enacting like the hero and where there were song sequence she used to get up started dancing on it. It was a tough time for asad to make her calm and made her sit down. For the first time asad watched a movie with so much of interest, credit goes none other than to zoya urf thakur! The movie soon got over and it wasn't much time , so they decided to go for a walk.

While walking :

Asad : zoya ek baat puchu ? vo jabse tum ayi ho I mean. 😕

Zoya stopped and faced him: yahi na ki m kese us din gundo ke beech m fas gayi thi? Idhar aao 😃

She pulled him and made themselves sit on the bench in the park.

Zoya : Yaad h vo din jab hum coffee shop gaye the? 😃

Asad : kese bhul sakta hu, mere thakur ne kya fight ki thi. 😆

Zoya smiled : us din jab hum alag hue the tab mujhe kuch kam se jana tha , so I went ,unfortunately waqt ka pata nahi chala aur der hogai thi, nahi mujhe ye pata chala ki m kaha agayi, paas m mujhe ek village ka pata chala, m vaha gai unse madad mangi aur unhone meri khushi se madad ki. Kuch der bad kuch log aye , vaha k sabhi log jese ghabra se gaye unhone apni h language m kuch bola achanak se mujhe dekha ek admi ne, dekh ne se shayd head tha. Usne phir kuch bola aur sab meri taraf dekhne lage. Phir vo vaha se chala gaya. Mera man kia puchne ka par shayad koi batana nahi chahta tha. Thodi der baad do ladies mere kamre m aye aur mujhe ek lehenga diya. Jab mene pucha to kehne lage ki koi function h. mene chupchap vo lehenga pehen liya. Kuch der bad kuch log aye aur mujhe vaha se chale jane k lie kaha. Bahut puchne par kaha ki jolog aye the vo us gao k purane sarpanch h aur vo mujhse kamsekam 20 years bade h aur pehle se do bar shadi shuda h aur phir bhi mujhse shadi karna chahte h, I was dumbstuck I just felt disgusted. I wanted to run par m kya karti I cant led them into some trouble. So I quickly called police and informed them. I went out and sat on my place. I just waited for the police to arrive , n they soon, unhone sabko arrest kar lia par 3 baki rehgaye and they followed me and then tum jante ho kya hua. 😭

Asad : kya baat h thakur tu to badi hi brave nikli, par phir un teen ka kya hua? 😕

Zoya : gaowalo se pitenge honge! 😆

They both chuckled. And then they thought to return. Zoya saw an ice cream parlor and poked asad.

Zoya : asad! 😎

Asad : kya hua?😕

Zoya : plz vo mujhe ice cream chahie , plz plz plz!😃

Asad shook his head and went to get one. But we all know that our zoya is musibat magnet ,, no soon she saw few boys harassing a lady and went there.

Zoya : ae ye kya natak chal raha h, chalo phuto yaha se! 😡

Boys : oye hoye! Hum bomb thodi h jo phut jaenge. 😡

Zoya saw asad searching for her and then he saw her

Zoya : tum jante nahi tum kisse bat kar rahe ho, ek baar agar mere husband yaha agaye na to tumhari pungi bajadenge! 😡😃

Boys : acha? Kon h tere husband? 😡

Zoya : abe gavaro, mere husband ki zindagi m h to kai sari cheese par important sirf do... pyar pyar pyar ya mar mar mar. 😆

Boys : Oye ye apni dramebazi band kar aur hat samne se! 😡

Asad : ae silent hoja varna m violent hojaunga! 😆

Everyone turned around to c and zoya and the lady went to him. Asad raised his eyebrows towards zoya asking how was it and zoya did thumbs up.👍🏼

Boys : oye chal hat ye hero giri mat dikha samjhe! 😡

Asad : chup chap niklo yaha se m tum jese chuzo ke muh nahi lagta 😡

To which zoya and the lady clapped saying wah wah wah

Soon the fight started asad beat the goons black n blue and the children along with zoya n people around cheered for asad. The boys went from there

Zoya : mere gabbar kya baat h! 👏

Lady : thank u so much , aap dono ne meri bahut madad ki h aap dono humesha ese hi rehna, made for each odr.

They both smiled and left. As they reached home zoya quickly ran into the room and brought a first aid kit, she made asad sit and clear his wounds.

Asad : tumhe kese pata ki mujhe chot lagi? 😕

Zoya : mene dekha tha jab tum lad rahe the tab, meri ankhe itni bhi kharab nahi h. janti hu apne bahut ache se chupane ki koshish ki par kar nahi paye. 😊

Asad smiled and hugged her and pecked her forehead before he went to sleep.

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people now dont u dare to say it short.

its quite long...

so how was it?

good bad okay not okay

do comment

n hit like if u liked it!

zoya's dress in next post..

love,

riddhi.. doll... pumpy..

Edited by riddhi1206 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey, Hi,

First of all congo for ur 1000th Post

and u are really goldie as a writter

and i have to say ...

I just loved it

its really interesting

loved it to core

asya became bestest friends within one week 👏 So sweet , Great improvement...

zoya is so brave
and zoya became princess for asad really really awesome , fantastic , cute ... loved it ,😊😳

asad calling zoya princess cho cho sweet 😳

and also treats her like a princess now sweet 😊

and asad became gabbar 😆


and asad's family is in zoe's place ...

and and pammi aunty apni vo apni bondgiri stop nahi kar rahi hai... hee, hee , heee...

zoya seeing moving or to see playing along with the movie 😆😳

i think zoya is habituated to walk on sofa else than the floor 😆

did zoya know that asad is dilshad's son or not ???????????😲

waiting ot see khan and farroqui's reaction to asya marriage

zoya 's commentry on asad while fighting was cute , 😊

but asya forgot to have ice-cream 😆 ...😉

any ways forget abt ice - cream

they are inseparable

if i say this than i mean it

I have to say ur FF is really lovely , cute , sweet , fantastic , fabulous ...


u are so sweet 🤗

pls do continue soon ...

and thanks for pm

pm me for next update ...





Edited by aishw09 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pwenCezz_symrun

ridz!! tam" jyr" update karavm v" ch"

in case I wrote it wrong, Ridz When r uh updating??


ACTUALLY A BIT
ITS LIKE
RIDZ TAME KYARE UPDATE KARVANI CHE?
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