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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: _.Mehak._

waiting for march 13



Aww so sweet,.
Dont worry will update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
No problem
Best wishes for ur exams
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

No problem
Best wishes for ur exams



Thank u so much
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Posted: 11 years ago
surprised? u should be i know i said that i will update after 13th but u know i cant stop being away from it and as it is a special occasion of womens day, so i planned to dedicate this update to each n every girl n woman here! happy women's day!
thank u all of u for being so patient and lovely reader. i know i havent updated it since long and so i thought to update it today when i m free.
i saw many of u all got promoted, some turned goldie n some dazzlers.. so this is for all of u, sorry in jiffy so cant mention each n everyone,s name.
read the note below.
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chapter : 4 mulakate




meeting are the start of any new relation. they are something that brings people closer, give a chance to understand each other and led people to the beautiful path of different realtions... read how asad and zoya were destined to meet.

FLASHBACK 1:

Asad was walking on the road tensed about the meeting which he has. On the contrary , zoya was walking on the road sipping her cold coffee busy on her phone. Suddenly they bumped into each other , resulting zoya falling and waiting to touch the ground but seems like moments paused , she didn't felt the ground, instead she felt someone wrapped his protective arms around her. She opened her orbs to meet another . world seems to stop, they were lost in each other's eyes when the car honks broke their trance. They felt embarrassed.

Together : sorry!

They chuckled at their timings.

Zoya : sorry vo phone m thoda busy thi islie and thank u mujhe girne se bachane k liye!

That's when she saw that asad's coat was stained due to her coffee. Her jaws dropped and touched the ground. Following her gaze asad saw the same. He was about to shout at her but she cut him off.

Zoya : I am so so so so so so so so so so so so ..

Asad : age to bolie.

Zoya : SORRY! Sache m mujhe koi idea nahi tha ki mene ye gira diya h! I am so sorry. I hope apko koi problem nahi h.

Asad was quite angry because of his meeting and now this stain on his coat. His heart melted seeing her cute pout but he cant stop himself from saying.

Asad : par apko dekh k chalna chahie. Ek to mere meeting upar se ye coat. Ya allah! Please agli baar se dhyan rakhiega

He spoke this politely as he was in no mood of fighting and ruining his mood. He turned back to leave but zoya called him asking that has he forgiven her or not. Asad turned making expression and saw zoya kneeling down holding years. Asad stared that cute girl.

Again it happened : MITWA ..

Zoya : allahmiya what is wrong with you? Yaha ek ladki kneel down karke sorry bol rahi h aur ap reply..

but before she could continue she saw a 5 year old boy roaming on street were a car was just going to pass by. She quickly got up and ran away. She scooped up the boy and pushed themselves at side.

Asad saw this and came running there.

Asad : are u okay?

Zoya : ya I m fine , beta ap theek ho?

Little boy : ha didi I m fine, thank u so much.

And with that he hugged her and she responded it by hugging him more tightly, caressing his hairs. She broke of the hug.

Zoya : beta ap akele kya kar rahe ho? Apki mumma kaha h?

Little boy : yahi to thi. Ek minute

He looked for his mumma and cried for her. The mother came rushing towards them and hugged him sobbing.

Boy's mother : thank u so much agar ap nahi hoti to na jane kya hota!

Zoya : its okay but aap apne bte kya dhyan rakhiega. Yu ese laparwahi nahi karni chahie!

With that the mumma and son went leaving asad and zoya behind.

Asad : apne bahut acha kaam kia.

Zoya : thanks , um apka coat ..

Asad: don't worry I have another in my car. Well I am asad.

Zoya : hi , I m zoya. Nice to meet u . acha gotta go. Bye!

End of flashback 1..


Second meeting:

Zoya was walking in the library . she picked up a book and turned when she heard a voice calling her. She turned back to find asad standing.

Zoya : hey hi!

Asad : hi u here?!

Zoya : I always come here you?

Librarian : please maintain silence!

Asad : lets go to coffee shop nearby..

They were walking when asad forgot his phone in his car and excused himself. suddenly two boys came behind whistling and eyeing zoya as if she was there meal. Zoya paid no heed and waited there for asad. They started talking rubbish and so zoya thought to avoid them and started walking when one of them holded her hand to which zoya turned around and gave a tight slap on their face.

Boy 1: ae tu samajhti kya h apne apko?

And he moved forward to slap her but zoya made a quick move and kicked him in his stomach. The second boy tried to hold her but instead met with a kick on his foot. Zoya turned but one of them grabbed her and turned around was about to slap her again but met with a punch himself . guess who was it? Are asad ahmed khan. They had a fight after which the boys ran chanting that they wont eye on any girl now and shouting MUMMY!

Zoya : thanku , app thik to h na?

Asad : m thik hu lets go!

Coffee shop:

Zoya : u r looking tensed! What happened?

Asad : actually a person from our company passed all the information to our rivals and they have it very secured! We are not able to hack it!

Zoya : hey if u don't mind may I try?

Asad : can u do it?

Zoya : ya ofcourse! There is no work in the world which zoya

farooqui cant do! Do u have ur laptop now?


asad
: ya its in the car , I will just bring!


After 5 mins he came back!

Asad : here take it!


After 20 minutes..

Zoya : hey its done!

Asad : what? Really? That's amazing! Thank u so much!

Zoya : < doing imaginary collar up> thank u thank u thank u!


asad
chuckled : okay let me give u a treat!

Zoya : ya sure!

They drank their coffee and made their way out!

Asad : thank u so much! I owe u a favour!

Zoya : dont worry , when I will need it I will ask for! Okay bye!

Asad : ya bye!!


End of flashback!!

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so how was it?

good bad okay not okay?

do tell me.

and yes this was long one so i want mny many comments ha!

ha how was it , plz comment

and hit likes if liked!


note: u may be thinking why hvnt i shifted my fanfiction and other works.. reason is that if we see qubool h forum banner n its introductory page it still has karan. and i dont have any problem with raquesh so its totallu upto u , to imagine whoever u want to


till then bye!

love

riddhi, pumpy, doll..

Edited by riddhi1206 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice part
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nilusoni

Very nice part
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon


thank u nilu di
again dont thanks me for pm.
will surely do it
u r first
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir

awesome.

loved it.
plz update soon


thank u so much
i m glad u liked it!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey ridz!!
that was awesome sweetheart..
truly beautifully written it was..👏
i don't think i need tell uh but uh r truly a fantastic writer..
despite of having a tough schedules, uh gave us an update..that's really sweet of uh..
nd about the chapter, i don't have any appropriate word to describe it..
loved it to the core..
do continue ASAP!!😊


Edited by pwenCezz_symrun - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nyc update baby.
I just loved it.
I was short but i can understand ur xams r there. But still thnks for this update.
Ek confusion tha itni meetings ke bad bhi asad ko zoya yad nh?😲.
Nyway the flashbacks were sexy😉.
In total i loved. Plz continue soon but after ur xams as i want uh to study frst. Uh r lyk my sis, so i guess i have this much ryt on uh. If not thn i wont say again ol d bst for ur rest xams.
nd ho sake toh plz tel me on which page uh have replied toh my comment.
Bye love uh a lot take care nd again ol d best🤗

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