ASYA SS: ABBU UH R ONLY MINE AND AMMI'S Last Part Updated ON PAGE-119

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Vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: khadupam
Awesome wonderful update
Update soon

Thnku dear😊. Ok.

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Vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#282

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--
Loved this update...
Asad cancelled his meeting seeing zoya...
Loved how asad made zara wear his coat...
Loved the father daughter duo in the garden...
Why asad rejected that he is not her father n after he accept...
Zara made a card for asad n she gave it finally...
Finally asad n zoya met...
Wow precap is amazing...
Update soon n thanks for the pm maggie...

Because he dont knw her, but when he saw her crying nd pleading to him. So something broke inside him nd he said tht he is her abbu.

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Vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: anopama
nice updates
loved the college fb so she propose and he
refuse and then he gets jealous and confess
loved the washroom scene.
so she came to the meeting and he saw her and
cancel the meeting didnt even talk to her just left
and destiny brings him to his princess wow
and didnt he hear her abbu name doesnt he add one and one
duh
ok continue soon

Thnku dear😊.

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Vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: ashlesha2
awesome😛

Thnku dear😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: riddhi1206
hey awesome update.
</div>it was superb.
asad and zoya saw each other 😲
oh god asad canceled the meeting!
<div>!

he met zara! 😃

he called her zara n forget al his pain! 😳

how cute!

oh zara baby u met ur abu n recognized him also!

so sweet!

oh only a father can do this!

to save his princess from the eyes of evil world!

😳

hehe zara's cuteness overloaded.

😆

" Vaise toh i dont talk to stranger, but i am telling my name bcoz uh called me princess. So dnt tell my ammi tht i talked to a stranger."

aw so cute!

my sweet little package!

😳

zara wore asad's coat and lookedcute!

how sweet!

kash she would have told the name of her ami but she slept!

so cute!

aw the card was very cute!

he kept it!

plz update today na!

I want to c asya confrontation!

plz update soon!

u written so well!

u realy wite verywell this part specialy

awesome

loved it 🤗

very nice 👏

update son

Thnku so so sos so much for ur lovely appreciation. Uh r a kid but uh appreciate people very well🤗
I ll update today hopefully.

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Vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: maha2012
awesome👏

Thnku dear😊

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Vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#287

Originally posted by: 11sinal
awesome update

Thnku dear😊

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Vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: Az07
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I really liked ur ss
I am sending a picture of Zara
Hope u like her

I loved her she is super cute. I ll try to add her.
Thnku so much dear🤗

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Vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: divya_asya
Nice update
Continue soon
Eager to know the truth
Thanks for pm

Thnku dear😊. I ll update soon.😊

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Vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#290

Hii guys. How r uh ol? Thnku so much for ur lovely comments.Nyway i hope sabko yaha se aage vale parts ache lge bcoz i love thm personally. Actually this ss is my personal favourite.
Part-5
In my ss zara is this:-

This pic is by Az07, i loved this pic dear thnku.
After few minutes now zoya came out of conference hall after crying. She called shrashti and she told her that zara is in park.She went there in search of her-zara zara baby kaha ho?
Asad was holding zara close to his heart, when he suddenly listened zoya's voice his heart skipped a beat.
Zara is a light sleeper like her dad, so she listened to her ammi's voice-umm ammi abhi nahi. I am sleepy. Agar maine abbu ko choda toh vo chale jayenge.
Zoya came infront of them, for once asad forgot everything and was overwhelmed to know that zara is his little princess. He asked her in signals to confirm nd zoya nodded her head in yes.
Asad hugged zara even more tightly and kissed her ol over her face like she did.
Zoya-aww zara uh r luking so cute in this coat
Zara still in sleepy voice-thnku actually yeh abbu ka hai. Vo meko thand lag rahi thi aur abbu ne de diya, vo bhi mele bina bole.
Asad nd zoya wanted to talk but they didnt infront of zara. They both reached home, nd saw dilshaad coming nd taking zara nd zoya in a bear hug. Asad was shocked not only his zoya but his ammi olso ditched her.
Asad-tamatar plz zara ko le jao, she needs to sleep. Mere room mein.
Asad-zara aap abbu ke room mein jana chahte ho?
Zara-ha. Bye gn.
Asya nd dil-gn.
After she left. Asad-ab kya karne aayi hai aap yaha zoya 5 saal pehle mujhe chodke chale gye the ku sirf isliye kuki mere pas paise nahi the.
Dil-asad plz listen to me isme zoya ka koi dosh nahi hai yeh sab isne mere kehne pe kia.
Asad was shocked nd then dilshaas tol her everything.
Flashback starts
Because of there relationship they both were not concentrating on their studies. Nd dilshaad noticed this, so on fine day she called zoya home when asad was not there.
Dil-zoya mujhe tumse kuch chahiye. Dogi mujhe?
Zoya-ammi[Zoya calls dil ammi bcoz dil told her] ap blke toh dekhiye.
Dil-kya tum asad ko chod ke yaha se ja sakti ho?
Zoya-ammi ap aisa ku keh rhi hai.
Dil-plz beta sirf 5 saal, uske bad tum vapis aa jana. I know isme tumhari koi galti nahi hai par jabse tum dono sath hue ho asad apni padai pe dhyan nahi de raha. Aur main chahti hu ki vo itna kabil ho jaye ki vo tumhari aur hum sabki responsiblity utha sake. Plz beta. I promise mrs. Asad ahmed khan sirf tum banogi aur koi nahi. Plz beta.
Zoya with heavy heart-thik hai ammi. Bye Allah hafiz. Nd without saying anything she ran from there.
She broke up with asad saying that he is from a middle class family.
Flashback ends
Asad-how could uh do this?
Dil-asad plz tumhe jo kehna hai mujhe kaho. Tumhare pas toh phir bhi tumhari ammi aur bhn thi pr zoya ke pas koi nahi tha.
Zoya was standing there crying, because at some extent she was olso at fault.
Asad-mujhe aap mein se kisi se bat nahi karni. Nd he stormed to his room.
He entered his room ol disheartned, he saw zara analyzing his room with twinkled eyes.
Zara-abbu yeh sab apne banaya hai? Ammi ne bataya tha ki ap ghar bnate ho.
Asad wiped his tears-ha princess..
Asad sat on floor, zara came to him and sat in his lap. Zara cupped his face. And wiped his tears.
Zara-abbu kya hua? Ap ro ku rahe ho?
Asad-baby sabne apke abbu ko dhoka dia.
Zara-dhoka kya hota hai abbu?
Asad-umm dhokha matlab cheat karna. Sabne apke abbu ko cheat kia, sabne mujhe hurt kia.
Zara angrily-kisne apko cheat kia. Main unko bht datungi, mre pyare se abbu ko koi kaisse cheat kar sakta hai? Kaha pain ho raha hai apko?
Asad smiled at his innocense nd care for him, he pointed towards his heart-yaha pe.
Zara kissed his heart over his clothes, she gave 5-6 kissied at one time-abhi thik hua ke nahi.
Asad-hm thik hai. Aaj ap apne abbu ke pas soyoge? Unko zor se huggy karke?
Zara-ha. Ku apko dar lagta hai akele sote hue? Asad nodded in yes to knw her answer.
Zara-sach kahi mujhe bhi dar lagta hai. Par kisi ko bata mat. Aap mujhe protect karo aur main apko.
Asad-haha. Ok.
They both slept in eacthothers arms peacefully. But there was someone who didnt slept whole night. Zoya was happy to see father daughter but she was missing herself in that picture.
2-3 days passed asad didnt talked to anyone except his two baby girls najma and zara.
One day everyone was doing brakfast asad came-najma nikah ki sari tyaari ho gayi hai?
Dil-kiska nikah?
Asad-mera.
Dil-kiske sath?
Asad-paros khud hi jaan jayengi aap vaise bhi ap toh chahti thi ki mera nikah ho so its happening.
Zoya was shocked and ran from there as she was about to cry.
So how it? Cliffy? Haha koi bat nahi. I dont knw i did justice with part or not.
Love Vish❤️

Edited by MagsDhingra - 11 years ago