AsYa FF Our Lives Entwined - Thread 4 - Chapter Eleven To Thirteen

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-Astrid-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Amazing update...loved it🤗

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Very good update. Loved the way Asad emphasyses on Zoya's full name and how he's pleading with his eyes for her to forgive him. I hope she forgives him soon. Both do love eachother so much.

Thanks for the pm n please pm me for the next part too.

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DevikaRavish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Wonderful update Bubble.. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it.. I actually was thinking about this story since morning wondering how you will shape it up... since I knew you would be updating today...

The way Asad mentioned that it gives him assurance that her life is still entwined with him was lovely... He loves her so very much but poor guy is not finding courage to express it to her in words though his actions are speaking so loudly...

Flash back.. was good.. what I felt was that even at that point of time even though he was rude, he was quite possessive about her.. The way he thought of telling Ayaan to address her as babhi...

So Asad's friend is the root cause.. I guess Zoya was insulted in the party... REading the words in this part, looks like he told Zoya that he is ashamed of her..

Good to see how Zoya took it up all as a challenge and went on to become a doctor... She is really great.. The way she gave back speaking about money was just awsome..

On the whole .. you are a brilliant writer and you know how to touch hearts of people with your words... Great !!

Take care.. Hope to see next update soon..

😊😊😊

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Anjali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

'I can't forget everything even if I forgive you Asad. such a simple line but loaded with so much pain and anger and tinges of sadness

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Miss-Appy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Congrats for new thread!! 😃
It was awesome!! 👏
I knew it that Sehrish is a witch! 😆 😡 😆

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nilusoni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Congrats for new thread
Gr8 part
sorry for late comenting
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon

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asyaarshilover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Hey a big congo for new thread 🤗
Well update was awsum
So it's reveal that they are married...
Ohkay now what worst thing he had done to zoe that he dn't want to forgive him
And sherish is a culprit
I guess something happened in the party
I am a lot excited for the next chapter
Cont soon anf thnx for the pm

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snehasya

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Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

so now the past is coming out and this updated version of tanveer I don't like her reminds me of Sophia and sameera s factor again

but asad is accepting his mistake the one which made zoya to pay emotionaaly for 10 years

I hope asad finds the way to pacify her they are BOUNDED yet distanced from each other

thanks for pm

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Chanyaforever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

More more more.. I want all the flashback, yaar! You can't make me waite like this😆 ..Just joking Bubble! Great update, love it! Eagerly waiting for the next update. Cheers, Chanya.